The big star who started from PlayerUnknown's Battlegrounds

"What do you mean?" Director Xu couldn't hold back the smile on his face.

Wang Dahai felt a bad breath.

Hurry up to smooth things over, and said with a smile: "Haha, Director Xu, don't you understand what Ye Feng means? It means that your script is well written, so you don't have to worry."

But before he finished speaking, he was suddenly interrupted by Ye Feng.

"Director Xu, to be honest, in my opinion, your script is a script written by a third-rate screenwriter, not even a second-rate screenwriter. Why do you insist on adding so much romance to a commercial war drama?" Ye Feng said helplessly. .

The reason why I invested in this TV series.

It's not that Ye Feng has good eyesight, it's all because the system has issued a task, and there is a high-level treasure box as a reward.

Otherwise, Ye Feng would not be so stupid.

But looking at the script now, if I didn't get the screenwriting skills, I would be unhappy at most, but now I have found a lot of problems.

"Ye Feng, although you are an investor, you can't tarnish our screenwriting team and my hard work."

Xu Linli said with some dissatisfaction, after all, for him, this script is a work he has polished for a long time.

"I'm telling the truth. If I say yes, it will be an insult to you." Ye Feng said calmly.

"Okay, Ye Feng."

Seeing that there seemed to be a smell of gunpowder between the two, Wang Dahai tried to smooth things over again.

"Well, Director Xu, let me tell you about the script. First of all, we are talking about business warfare, but the emotional line here and the emotional entanglement between the second male and the first female are, in my opinion, the ordinary The urban love TV dramas in this series don't emphasize the color of business war too much..."

"And there are big problems with the logic here. For example, the characters between the male and female protagonists collapsed, and they fell in love later. Such a big loophole really cannot be ignored."

"And here..."

Miaoshuwu

Chapter 218 Aura

Xu Linli frowned when he heard this, but he was not angry in the end.

Instead, he began to listen to Ye Feng's opinion.

Then he read the script completely from the beginning to the end, and sure enough, he found more than a dozen logical plots and bad plots in the script.

If this plot was just started in the era of TV dramas, it might still have some ratings if there was no TV to watch, but now, it is definitely a bad movie.

Since it is a business war drama, it must perfectly express the plot of the business war. It is not an urban romance film, otherwise it will definitely be sprayed to death.

Not to mention okay.

One said.

Xu Linli was also sweating profusely on his head.

If he really made this kind of vulgar and bad movie, then his director career will be labeled as a bad movie director. This is something that all directors don't want, and he naturally doesn't want to.

In the end, Xu Linli's mood completely eased and stabilized, and he said to Ye Feng gently: "Then how do you think it should be changed?"

"First of all, I took a look at the script and found that the main storyline is perfect, so I kept this part, and then cut out half of the relationship between the hero and heroine, mainly focusing on helping each other, don't set up any enemies or anything, it's unnecessary, it's too stupid It's bloody." Ye Feng explained patiently.

This is also seen through at a glance through screenwriting skills.

"Okay, just do as you say."

When Xu Linli heard it, he asked the screenwriters of the screenwriting team to delete the lost plots according to Ye Feng's idea, and added the main commercial battle plots, and re-integrated a script.

finally down.

Indeed, after changing those bad plots, it does feel much smoother.

Now if this script is put on sale again, its value will be ten times higher than before.

"Amazing."

Wang Dahai gave Ye Feng a thumbs up secretly.

just now.

He was taken.

Sing, play games, act.

Now I have another screenwriting skill, it's really more popular than others.

Now Xu Linli was completely convinced by Ye Feng.

Also gave Ye Feng a thumbs up with a smile on his face and said: "Ye Feng, you are really an all-around talent, you are too good, I really didn't see the omissions in the script before, I was wrong, thank you very much gone."

"It's okay." Ye Feng smiled calmly.

Xu Linli sneered, feeling that he was very guilty. He insisted on not changing it just now, but he didn't expect so many loopholes.

Finally, after Ye Feng's proposal, the final and complete version of the script is a commercial war worthy of the name.

This is a battlefield about a group of men intrigue.

On the second day after it was decided, director Xu ruled out some redundant plots, and officially started filming Ye Feng's scene.

The first scene is about the hero and the heroine breaking up in college and preparing to enter the financial industry alone.

But the performance of the female egret was not as perfect as in the previous audition, and she kept making mistakes, even to the point where she couldn't speak her lines well.

Xu Linli was so angry that he was in a hurry, but now he was in trouble again.

Immediately became a little angry, pointed at Bailu, and said angrily: "Bailu, what's the matter with you? Why can't you even grasp the situation in the heroine's heart? And you can't remember the lines?"

"you need to know."

"The heroine is going to break up with the hero now, do you understand? There should be some sadness."

Xu Linli added and reminded each sentence.

"Yes, I'm sorry director, I, my fault, I will try my best to perform, I will work hard, I hope you can give me another chance."

Bailu had never been scolded like this before, and his eyes turned red immediately, tears streaming down his face.

After all, she is a woman.

"Psychological quality is not too hard."