Getting rich from divorce

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Lan Piaopiao rolled her eyes, but in the blink of an eye she smiled sweetly.

Then, she held her hands up and wanted to get up immediately.

See here!

Lin Feng didn't do anything else, he stretched out his arms and pulled Lan Piaopiao back.

then!

A strong kiss!

"You, Lin Feng..."

"Here on the beach..."

Lan Piaopiao screamed, shy.

But Lin Feng quickly blocked his mouth.

"There are many couples kissing intimately on the beach, haven't you seen it before?"

"Who would think we're weird?"

Lin Feng finally let go of Lan Piaopiao and smiled slightly.

"Who is your lover?"

"We're not a couple."

Lan Piaopiao took offense.

"Go, go into the sea, I'll teach you how to surf."

Afterwards, Lin Feng didn't want to spend much time with Lan Piaopiao, after all, he couldn't do anything on the beach now, but he could do something else when he was in the sea.

Of course, you can only have a hand addiction or something.

"I am afraid."

Lan Piaopiao said again.

"Not afraid."

"and me."

Lin Feng immediately believed in himself.

Now that he has the skills rewarded by the system, he is naturally a master surfer.

soon.

Lin Feng and Lan Piaopiao went into the sea.

"Come on, lie down on the pedal and feel it..."

While guiding, Lin Feng also continued to increase some physical contact.

It's gotten to a certain point now.

The blessing of the system's girl-picking skill rewards is still very useful.

"what!"

"Lin Feng, save me!"

"I can not!"

"Lin Feng, I can't do it."

Lan Piaopiao yelled loudly.

Lin Feng was patient and considerate.

"Lin Feng, I succeeded, I succeeded!"

After Lan Piaopiao finally succeeded in surfing for the first time.

"congratulations."

"Little fairy, you are amazing."

Lin Feng immediately went up and gave a triumphant hug.

"You take advantage of me!"

Lan Piaopiao said quickly.

"Then you hug me back and take advantage of me?"

Lin Feng let go of her, opened his hands, and smiled slightly.

It was just a joke with Lan Piaopiao.

"Humph."

"Okay, I'll take it back!"

Unexpectedly, Lan Piaopiao actually threw herself into Lin Feng's arms and hugged him.

'It worked! '

'Get her, close at hand! '

Feeling Lan Piao Piao's body temperature, Lin Feng felt excited immediately.

He knew that this meant that his strategies were already very effective.

"Female hooligan!"

"You take advantage of me!"

Of course Lin Feng didn't show it on his face, he continued to joke with Lan Piaopiao.

"Humph."

Lan Piaopiao hummed twice.

"Let me go."

Then, she said.

"I don't~~"

"I want to catch the female hooligan who took advantage of me and hand it over to the police uncle..."

However, Lin Feng held Lan Piaopiao tightly.

"You rascal!"

Lan Piaopiao pushed Lin Feng's chest.

Testimonials

Readers and friends, this book has nearly 30 words and it will be on the shelves tonight.

I don't know how many friends will be willing to subscribe?

The first twenty or thirty thousand words of this book, when Lao Shu reviewed it by himself, there are indeed many problems and the writing is not very good.

Moreover, the old tree violated the taboo of newcomers writing books, and he only understood after writing.

That is, I always want to push the wonderful plot to the back, and always have a kind of "fishing" mentality.This kind of mentality will really kill the book.

It just makes the plot procrastinate.

In the end, the point that should have been wonderful was dragged too late, and it might not be so exciting to write it out again.

Moreover, no matter how wonderful you are later, if the previous writing is not good, and the follow-up data is not good, there will be no recommendations, no recommendations, no exposure, and no exposure, no readers.

Even if there are readers, the readers will be poisoned by the previous part...

Not only that, but in the process of writing this book, there was a situation where the outline was changed, which made the reading in the middle of the book plummet!

Originally, when I started the book, I wanted to write an urban, brainless and cool novel, but in the middle of writing, I saw some readers commenting that the characters should be created, or something.

Later, I changed the outline, and cut out a pretense plot that had been written, and planned to move it to the back.

Then, start to shape the characters, from where Chu Yuhan came out, it is the shape of the characters, but the shape of the characters is relieved, and the follow-up is also lost there.

It can be said to be self-inflicted.

It's not that there is something wrong with what this reader said, but that it didn't match my style at the beginning, and I played myself off.

When it comes to shaping characters, I have to write a lot of daily life, but I also want to take into account the pretense, which makes the characters not shaped well, and the sense of excitement also plummets.

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……

Tell me about the sequel.

He quickly took down Lan Piaopiao, then divorced, and then advanced the plot after the divorce.

I follow up and plan to write all the plots that should be in the outline at a fast pace.

Let the story of this book have a complete conclusion.

Of course, the word count may not be that long.

At that time, if the grades are still average, no new storyline will be opened, and it will be over. If the grades are good, then the storyline will be opened and continue to write.

……

There is also the issue of water.

After it’s on the shelves, there may be [-] words in a chapter, unlike the [-] words in the free period, it may not look like it, and it seems that you haven’t read anything after reading it.

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142、Taking Blue Piaopiao 1

"By the way, the coach taught you to surf just now. Why, apprentice, don't you give me some rewards for being a teacher?"

At this time, Lin Feng said with a smile again.

"What reward?"

"What more reward do you want?"

"You've hugged me like this, what else do you want?"

Lan Piaopiao blamed and blushed.

"I want you to kiss me."

Lin Feng said softly.

"kiss?"