This star has some salty fish

A group of people continued to walk along the river corridor.

Xie Ming has been thinking about how to show his poetic talent in front of Ling Jiangyan again?

Soon, he found his opportunity.

A group of people passed by a crowd. Someone in the crowd had just composed a poem on the spot and was inviting others to comment.

Xie Ming is very happy, this is a good opportunity!

Commenting on a poem can also reflect one's poetic talent.

Therefore, Xie Ming said with a smile: "I would like to come and appreciate this poem by Mister."

As Xie Ming said, he sneaked a glance at Ling Jiangyan's reaction, and was overjoyed to see Ling Jiangyan's interested expression.

He knew Ling Jiangyan would be interested.

The poet is a 30-year-old man named Liu Zhengyong.After seeing Xie Ming, he was a little surprised and said: "Hey, isn't this the teacher Xie Ming in the school? I have heard that Mr. Xie's poems are very talented. It is really a great honor to be commented by Mr. Xie. Mr. Xie please!"

Xie Ming was even more elated after hearing this, this person actually knew him, it seems that he is already quite famous in the poetry circle in this small town.

More importantly, Ling Jiangyan heard these words, which is really cool.

This man is simply a god assist!

Xie Ming was excited in his heart, but his mouth was full of humility, and then he began to comment.

Xie Ming is indeed quite talented in poetry, and his comments are logical, and the people around him applaud again and again.

Even Ling Jiangyan couldn't help but nodded.

Seeing Ling Jiangyan nodding, Xie Ming was even more excited. Cai Yang suggested that he come with him, which was really the right suggestion.

After the comment, Liu Zhengyong laughed and said: "Teacher Xie is really talented. Everyone here, is there anyone who wants to write a poem? Taking advantage of Teacher Xie's presence, you can ask Teacher Xie to comment after you finish writing. Such an opportunity But it's rare."

After hearing this, Xie Ming said humbly: "What comments? It should be for everyone to discuss with each other."

Those who can gather here are all poetry lovers and have the ability to compose poetry.Hearing the words was indeed a little heart-wrenching, and many people began to conceive.

Xie Ming felt that he was already the focus of the audience at this time, and he was very proud, and then secretly looked at Ling Jiangyan.

Hope to see Ling Jiangyan looking at him too.

However, what he saw was... Ling Jiangyan's eyes were on... Xia Xiaoyu's brother.

This made Xie Ming frowned instantly. He had always felt that Ling Jiangyan cared about Xia Xiaoyu's brother very much.

I just thought that the age difference between the two of them was quite a bit, so there shouldn't be any relationship.I can only convince myself not to think too much about it.

But I can't help but think more, especially now when I see Ling Jiangyan's eyes are all on Li Han.

That being the case...

Xie Ming gave Cai Yang a look, Cai Yang understood, although he sighed in his heart, thinking that Xie Ming would not be able to play, he still decided to help Xie Ming once.

So, Cai Yang said to Ling Jiangyan and Li Han: "Mr. Ling, this little gentleman, why don't we take this opportunity to write a poem each, and how about we communicate with each other?"

Ling Jiangyan smiled and said, "Mr. Cai, I won't make a fool of myself at this level. If Mr. Cai is interested, let us appreciate your masterpiece."

Cai Yang said: "Teacher Ling is too modest, who in the school doesn't know Teacher Ling's poetic talent?" Then he said to Li Han: "Where is this little gentleman? Are you interested?"

Li Han waved his hand and said, "I won't write any more. I'll just read everyone's poems."

Cai Yang said: "Mr. Xiao is also modest! You are the elder brother of classmate Xiao Yu, and you are very talented in poetry at first glance. Isn't that right? Classmate Xiao Yu."

The last sentence was addressed to Xia Xiaoyu.

Xia Xiaoyu replied quite proudly: "Of course! Brother Li Han is the most powerful poet."

Cai Yang, Xie Ming, and the rest of the audience were all amused. This girl thinks highly of her brother too, right?

But soon some people were startled, they suddenly realized that Xia Xiaoyu was talking about "Brother Li Han".

Is that Li Han?

The person who realized this, looked at Li Han quietly and secretly, and thought again, "It's really possible depending on the age."

Cai Yang and Xie Ming did not realize this.

Because Xia Xiaoyu answered like this, they were a little elated, and their attention was all on the point of "being the most powerful poet".

Cai Yang laughed, and said to Li Han: "Mr. Xiao is really too modest. My classmates Xiaoyu have said that Mr. Xiao is the most powerful poet. Don't be humble, Mr. Xiao. Let us appreciate Mr. Xiao's poetic talent." , we would be very honored."

Xie Ming also said: "Yes, Mr. Xiao, let's communicate with each other. Teacher Ling also likes poetry very much. Teacher Ling must also hope that Mr. Xiao can show his skills."

Ling Jiangyan glanced at Xie Ming and Cai Yang in a strange way. Didn't these two people notice that Xia Xiaoyu had revealed Li Han's identity just now?

Otherwise, the words should not be like this.

However, Xie Ming was indeed right. She really hoped to see Li Han make a move and leave a poem on this beautiful river corridor.

The rest of the people at the scene who noticed Li Han's identity certainly thought so too.

Li Han's poems are definitely exciting and exciting!

Xia Xiaoyu stuck out her tongue at Li Han, as if she shouldn't have said that just now.

Li Han smiled and said: "Since the two teachers have said so, then I will write a poem to share with you."

As soon as these words came out, Su Yuqing and Qin Xiaoyue curled their lips inwardly, "This kid must have seen Ling Jiangyan here to write poems."

And the rest of the people were all overjoyed, looking forward to it!

Of course, the "joy" of Xie Ming and Cai Yang is different from the others.

They didn't think Li Han's poems were so good, they just wanted Ling Jiangyan to know that Xie Ming's poems were better than Li Han's.

Cai Yang laughed loudly and said, "I know Mr. Xiao has great talent. Mr. Xiao, please!"

Li Han nodded, walked to the long table, picked up a brush, and said, "What is the topic?"

Cai Yang said: "The scenery here is so beautiful, let's use 'scenery' as the title."

Everyone nodded after listening, the topic was normal, and they didn't make things difficult on purpose.

Li Han also nodded, and after a little hesitation, wrote:

"Looking at the mountains from a distance is colorful, but listening to the water is silent.

When spring is gone, flowers are still there, and birds are not surprised when people come. "

This is a very simple poem, but it is extremely charming, and it has been passed down through the ages in previous lives.

The reason why Li Han chose this poem is because this poem is very characteristic.

This poem describes "painting".

If you don't tell everyone in advance that what you describe is a painting, everyone will think that this poem is unreasonable and somewhat contrary to the laws of nature.

After approaching, how could the water flow be silent?

Spring is over, why haven't the flowers withered yet?

Why aren't birds frightened when people approach?

At the beginning, there will be such doubts, and then, after knowing that the description is "painting", there will be a feeling of sudden enlightenment.

This is very interesting.

Xie Ming, doesn't this guy want to comment?Let's see what he will say?

Chapter 643 This Poem Has Been Completed

Of course Xie Ming wanted to comment.And his ideal idea is that Li Han's poems are really not very good, but he can still find the bright spots in them to affirm, and finally point out the various shortcomings in the poems tactfully.

In this way, it can not only show that his poetry level is far higher than that of Li Han, but also leave the best impression on Ling Jiangyan.

Xie Ming was delighted, and watched Li Han write with a smile on his face.

However, when Li Han stopped writing, he was suddenly shocked.

Although this poem is very simple, it is full of charm. This kid's poetry is very good!

At this time, Xie Ming suddenly realized a problem, that is, he had never thought about it before, that the other party's poetry level might be higher than his.

He has always subconsciously believed that the other party's poetry level is not as good as his own.

Why is this happening?

Xie Ming himself didn't know.Are you a little drifting?The other party is too young?There seems to be a reason.

Now how to do?

Of course Xie Ming can still comment now, but the result is completely different from what he had imagined before.

This poem reflects a very high level of poetry. Isn't this equivalent to trying to tell Ling Jiangyan that this kid has a very high level of poetry?

He didn't intend to write poetry, but he tried to get the other party to write it. This operation is really stupid!

Xie Ming wanted to cry, but there was nothing he could do.

That's all, just a few comments, let's quickly expose this matter.

With this in mind, Xie Ming began to organize his words, and then...huh?etc……

This poem...

Xie Ming suddenly wanted to laugh out loud, there really is no limit to the road!

After all, they are young people!When writing poetry, you only think about how to choose words and make sentences beautifully?How to have charm?It doesn't matter whether the poems written are reasonable or not?

"The mountains look colorful from a distance." There is nothing wrong with this, but the last three sentences are obviously unreasonable and against the laws of nature.

This is a common mistake many newcomers make.As long as the words and sentences are beautiful and have charm, it doesn't matter whether it is reasonable or not.

After discovering this point, Xie Ming was convinced that it was really a false alarm just now.

Xie Ming discovered this, and the rest of the people at the scene also discovered this.

Those who knew Li Han's identity were very surprised that Li Han would make such a mistake?

This shouldn't be!

Ling Jiangyan was also surprised. She looked at Li Han with some puzzlement, and was even more puzzled when she saw the faint smile on Li Han's face.

This poem is of course an excellent poem. Although it is very simple, the simpler the poem, the more difficult it is to make it well.

Many people can compose simple poems, but to spread the charm of simple poems, it needs a very high poetic talent.

Otherwise, the simple poems produced can only be junk poems without nutrition.

And this poem reflects a very high level, and it deserves to be written by Li Han.

But it's true that some things don't make sense.

What the hell is going on here?

Ling Jiangyan frowned slightly, a little confused.

At this time, Xie Ming said with a smile: "Mr. Xiao's poem is very good. With the simplest words, he wrote the most charming lines. It can be seen that Mr. Xiao is indeed quite talented in poetry. But, Mr. Xiao only pays attention to the charm of words, but ignores whether it violates the laws of nature, which makes this poem a failure. It is really a pity and a pity. Of course, Mr. Xiao can say that this is an exaggeration, but exaggeration is often It’s not used like this. I believe Mr. Xiao can understand.”

After hearing this, everyone at the scene had to nod their heads in agreement. Xie Ming's comment was very pertinent.

This poem is indeed quite regrettable and regrettable.

Xie Ming has been secretly observing Ling Jiangyan's reaction.Do the rest of the audience agree with his words?He doesn't care.All he cared about was Ling Jiangyan.

He hoped to see Ling Jiangyan nodding too.

But it's a pity that Ling Jiangyan didn't nod, but frowned slightly, obviously thinking about something.

Xie Ming was very disappointed, but he believed that Ling Jiangyan definitely agreed with his point of view.

After all, what he said was very pertinent, and there was nothing wrong with it.

Cai Yang was also observing Ling Jiangyan, then shook his head, but it still didn't work.

Although things have basically proceeded according to the original plan, there is still not even the slightest ripple in Ling Jiangyan's heart.

There is no other way, Xie Ming should give up, just like him.

Ling Jiangyan is destined not to belong to them.

Cai Yang thought so in his heart.

Su Yuqing quietly pinched Li Han's waist, leaned into Li Han's ear and whispered, "Do you have any other tricks?"