I'm The Hard Rice King

Chapter 205 Really Short

"Lao Xia, I'm definitely not jealous. Just listen to me."

Li Baodao was still trying to persuade him earnestly: "One or two trends are going to be transferred to male channels. You can't be his editor anymore. You can't control it."

Xia Sheng thought he had seen through the other party's sinister intentions, so he sneered: "Don't talk nonsense, I can grasp it! He has been my author since the female channel. This is the platinum I brought out, can I give it to you?"

"You said you are in charge of female videos, how can you give him resources?"

"Then it's none of your business. I can talk to the BOSS about this."

"You can't talk about it, this is a rule, you can't control it at all!"

"He is platinum. What are the rules? People make rules. I will talk to the boss now. Do you have anything else to say?"

Xia Sheng's attitude was firm, even a little excited, but Li Baodao's expression was pessimistic. He grabbed the box of cigarettes on the table and picked it up: "If you can't negotiate, the male channel's book belongs to the male." The editors of the channel are no exception."

"Nothing to say? I'm leaving now."

Li Baodao knocked the cigarette box, and half of a cigarette was exposed due to gravity. He lit it again, took a deep breath, and asked tentatively: "Then let me tell you something from my heart?"

"Depend on!"

Xia Sheng laughed and cursed: "What you just said about feelings were all lies?"

Li Baodao also smiled and continued to smoke. His confused and excited expression could be vaguely seen in the mist.

"After you posted the document to the group yesterday, many editors in the group read it all night long. Most of them didn't finish it and are still taking the time to read it. A small number of them have only read a rough outline. I read ten lines at a time. Something like that."

"I wrote online articles when I was thirteen and became an editor when I was twenty-one. I have been doing this for fifteen years. I have read countless books, but after reading this novel with only a few sentences in the outline... ...Mainly the document "The Chronicle of Sword and Law"."

"Yes." Xia Sheng asked, "How was your reading?"

Li Baodao sighed with some reminiscence: "I was shocked at first sight. It is not unusual to write history in a biographical style, but to write the story structure in a novel outline in a biographical style? I have never heard of it! I thought to myself who the foreign author is. Star people just got online, and they actually wrote an online novel out of Sima Qian's "Historical Records"?!"

"There are 700,000 words in total and 169 chapters. Fifty-five chapters describe the birth and death of fifty-five countries in the different world; eight chapters describe simple events in each historical period; twelve chapters describe astronomy. Geography, culture and art, as well as a unique power system shaped by the natural environment and physical rules different from Blue Star; Seventy-one biographies, written seventy-one biographies of heroes of different races and different classes; Twenty-three creatures, depicting aliens The evolution and habits of the twenty-three intelligent races in the world are written like the Classic of Mountains and Seas..."

Li Baodao flicked the ashes of his cigarette and said with a smile: "To be honest, I clicked the cross button when I first read the first chapter of this book, because it was too tiring to read, and the world view serves the story, and the story is to mobilize people. Emotion serves, so I really feel that it is completely unnecessary to make the background of the novel so grand. Is "Kyushu Fantasy" good? It is not just a splash now..."

Xia Sheng interrupted: "Have you read the biographies?"

"I saw it!" Li Baodao nodded: "Yy reminded me to read the biographies first. Only then did I find the correct way to read it, and then I patiently started reading it again."

"This reading...I feel again the excitement I felt when I first read an online article when I was in school. To sum it up in one sentence: wtf? There is such a magical world?!"

"If you read it carefully, the background of this story will make you really think that there is such a world, which is completely different from our real world. It is bizarre but consistent with a certain logic. The history and characters in it convey a kind of world that is not inferior to real history. Thickness and three-dimensionality.”

Li Baodao clenched his teeth and shook his head with a grin: "Especially after you have a general understanding of the world background, then read the short biographies of heroes of various races. Damn, there are so many great stories written. Every short story is like a knife, and there are only a few of them. Words are a life. The characters’ casual words and the power of writing..."

"grass!"

As he spoke, Li Baodao swore a curse word, and then started speaking in a formal manner: "Sigh that life is like flowers and grass that are luxuriant in spring and summer, but wait for the autumn wind to wither day by day! Every time I finish reading an article, I have a new feeling."

"But what I'm most puzzled about right now is, how did he write Yiliangfeng? What kind of brain does he have? How did he come up with such a huge and complex world with so many different, vivid and deep characters? ? He can also think of it? I’m afraid he didn’t really travel through time, right? "

Xia Sheng smiled and snorted, not bothering to listen to his nonsense, and continued to read the document on the screen, which contained comments from various editors.

Lemon: "After reading about one-fifth of it, the amount of information in the text is extremely high, and the details of the world structure are so real that it makes people's hair stand on end. You will feel that it is alive, but it is very difficult to read. If this is written by a newcomer who has just started writing online, I will ask him to give up online writing and introduce him to the physical way. If he is already a platinum author, with my professional experience... professional experience is no longer useful for this kind of book, and it is useless for platinum authors. Only intuition is left ! Intuition tells me that this child is so terrifying and must have the appearance of a supreme god! But why is he not my author? It’s so sour!”

December: "Studying the relationship between heaven and man, we can understand the changes in ancient and modern times. Wow, it actually gave me a feeling of reading "Historical Records". The writing is simple and has an edge. When I read somewhere, it was like thunder exploding, so sharp that it makes people feel sad. There is a sense of despair and powerlessness. Many of the short stories in the biographies can be published directly in magazines, or they can be used as novel outlines. However, using this as the background of the story and taking the route of online writing, it is still difficult to say. One or Two Winds I have read his works. If this is really written by him, I feel that there is definitely a beginning. But it is not clear yet. I will ask him to finish the outline and then write a beginning to know his specific thoughts on the book. Only then can we make further judgments.”

Peanut: "It feels like it's three years of work for me to review a book for you, and I'm so tired from reading it. The Narnia power system written in the eight tables actually involves physical theory, and Yiliangfeng is also published in Nature, Science, and Fifteen of the most cutting-edge papers in physics were cited in the three major journals of PNAS! They are all in English, and I only have a partial understanding of them. They are probably about parallel universes, black holes, constants, black magic, human body superpowers, etc., and demonstrate the entire Different galaxies and stars in the universe may indeed have different physical laws, and I am trying to prove that the power system in this certificate is a real possibility... I'm so sorry! In all fantasy + fantasy novels currently on the market, the power system Among them, I personally think that the setting of this book is the most rigorous. This alone is worth focusing on cultivating. "

Yy: "The artistic content of this work is very high. How high is it? It's higher than the Terminal Group building. Regardless of Tolkien or George Martin, they should be allowed to take a look at this and see what it means. Fantasy novels. Those inadvertent idioms and idioms in other worlds are really weird and novel, and the three-dimensional sense of the other world immediately stands up. Not to mention the seventy-one biographies, the poems in the twelve books are so artistic, but it is a pity that the country does not give them The poet assigns work, otherwise I really want to copy two poems... let him continue writing quickly. This kind of book does not need to consider the market or audience. If the quality of the subsequent novels is good, Yiliangfeng can guarantee the writing power of the outline. It is recommended Go directly to the boss, give him resources and give him support, and you will definitely not lose money in the future! If you do, just pretend I didn’t say anything!!!"

"The precious sword!"

Xia Sheng briefly read the comments from the editors of the male channel and said with a smile: "Is this what you told me that you are not optimistic about it? Is there a problem with my understanding, or is there a problem with your understanding?"

Li Baodao did not panic at all and said calmly: "You have to know what they base their judgment on. The key point is based on many years of experience in creating online articles in Yiliangfeng. He has written three men's videos and ten women's videos, spanning Two Channels is a mature online article writer who cannot be more mature. He knows how to cater to the market. The rhythm of online articles and the routine of controlling the author's emotions have been deeply rooted in his bones. Now he has broken through the bottleneck and used wonderful writing to write. Such an admirable story structure has created vivid characters one after another, so we are optimistic about him."

"You finally told the truth."

Xia Sheng nodded with great satisfaction, then looked at the screen, slightly confused: "Where is your review? You didn't write an electronic review?"

Li Baodao coughed dryly: "I wrote it short, in the last line, just one sentence."

"Is it?"

Xia Sheng slid the mouse wheel and dragged the document to the bottom. Sure enough, he saw the other party's comments...

Baodao: "It's really rubbish. Just click the cross after thirty lines in three seconds."

Xia Sheng said hehe: "You are really short."

(End of chapter)