I watched the second short video, and the cartoon characters were bad

Chapter 76

The world of Sakura.

"God-like quad bikes. "

Momoya covered her forehead speechlessly.

"Could this be some new form of family gathering?"

"Why did this Nozaki think of such a strange plot?"

Quad bikes are fine.

The point is.

There are still people scrambling?

Momoya just wanted to know.

Here's why.

Don't you feel like it's awkward to ride a bike for four people?

Or is it that under the lover's filter, even things like embarrassment can be ignored?

Speaking of which, though.

Quad bikes.

It is true that you can buy one and keep it at home.

When dad and Sakura are fine, they can organize an outing with the snow rabbit.

......

The world of the cultivation method of the passerby heroine.

Editorial Department of the Library.

"What do you think of this plot?"

"I don't want to say it, but it's really interesting, but it's a pity that it's too shocking. "

"Maybe in other manga, I'll use it, but in the shoujo manga......"

"But speaking of which, the ending is a bit sloppy. "

"I would prefer that only two seats were stolen, and then the male and female protagonists were forced to ride one of the same, so that it would be more interesting. "

"Definitely. "

"Because of various accidents, it should have been a small group of joint actions, but in the end it became the male and female protagonists alone, which is also a classic of shoujo comics. "

"And there's no girl comic yet, let this kind of bridge happen on a four-person bike, and speaking of which, I really want to see what happens on the bike. "

"It's impossible to make it through, though. "

"Hey......"

After reading the second draft.

The people in the editorial department suddenly changed their views on this plot.

They suddenly felt.

Are multi-person bikes also good?

......

Flame Fist World.

"Oh!"

Toshida excitedly held up the camera.

"This shot is interesting, it's too artistic. "

"Think about it carefully, if you let Yan Quan and others ride this kind of multi-person bicycle, wouldn't it make the plot more interesting?!"

"This one shot will definitely make my movies more popular!"

"That being said, Agni's little kid wouldn't agree. "

"Hey......"

Toshida put down the camera tastelessly.

Really......

It's boring.

She held her chin in boredom and continued to look up at the light curtain.

......

The audience was about to go crazy laughing because of Nozaki's sassy operation.

"Good guy, in order to show the attractiveness of the male protagonist, don't change the male protagonist's actions, but increase the role of supporting roles?"

"Although this can indeed be regarded as an attractive one, but how to say it, as long as there is a multi-person bicycle setting, it will definitely be complained about, right?"

"How good this plot would be if it were put in a funny comic, it would never be dismissed by the editors. "

"This plot is thunderous, outrageous, funny, and contradictory, which is suitable for use as a joke. "

But it's just not suitable for shoujo manga.

So as you know, this is by no means final.

But inexplicably.

They weren't looking forward to a third manuscript.

After all.

Just think about it a little to know.

Nozaki's third version is definitely a girl's manga, a more popular plot.

Really.

[After.] 】

[Chiyo Sakura goes to the bookstore and picks up a comic book.] 】

["But this idea was finally criticized by the editor-in-charge of the magazine as too messy, and it was dismissed, and the finished product became like this."] "】

[It's getting late.] 】

[The female protagonist is shy to let the male protagonist go first.] 】

[The male protagonist said gently: "No, it's already dark, I'll send you, and if you go back, I can stay with you for a while.] "】

[The male protagonist pushes the bicycle and moves side by side with the female protagonist.] 】

"It's so ordinary. "

"This kind of Asahi's plot, I've already seen it in other shoujo manga. "

"It's still the bold idea of a quad bike before. "

"There are contradictions, there are laughs, there are conflicts and a little bit of excitement. "

"If I follow the second engraving, I will definitely buy it!"

......

Monthly girl Nozaki-kun world.

Nozaki raised his eyebrows: "I didn't expect my idea to be recognized by so many people." "

The final draft is entirely the idea of the editor-in-charge.

Nozaki just drew what he said.

So, only the first version and the second version are his thoughts from the heart.

"Ding. "

That's when it happened.

Nozaki's computer suddenly heard the sound of an email.

He opened the mailbox and looked at it.

[Anonymous fan: Hello Sakuko Yumeno-sensei, after seeing the three versions you draw, I think the second version is more attractive, I know my request may be rude, but can you please draw one more version of the original?]

[One version is for the editor, and the other version is connected to the plot of the second version, posted on the Internet, please teacher! I really want to see it!]

It's not just this one.

Lots of fans and classmates.

They all sent emails with similar meanings.

"I don't care, but if I do draw the second version, the editor will definitely be unhappy, right?"

However.

What Nozaki didn't expect was.

He received an email from the editor right away.

[XX Editor: Teacher Sakiko Yumeno, I won't tell you, our editorial department has received dozens of threatening calls. 】

[Please continue to create according to the second edition, and our magazine will add a supplement of more than ten pages for you.] 】

[The manuscript fee is negotiable, so please.] 】

Nozaki touched his chin and muttered.

If that's the case, you can go ahead and create with confidence.

......

The everyday world of a male high school student.

"Ahh Xiu looked up at the sky. "Although I had long thought that the final draft would be ordinary, I really didn't expect it to be so ordinary that there was no attractive element at all. "

"Xiuze, do you still read shoujo manga?" Zhongbang was a little surprised.

Tabata Xiu turned his head to look at Zhongbang: "What do you think? I have read all kinds of books, and I am not joking to say that I have read this kind of cart plot at least many times."

More than ten times?

In this way, this plot is indeed ordinary.

......

Even those girls who love shoujo manga.

At this time, I couldn't help but scratch my head.

"So what, although the final version also looks good, how do I feel that it is not as good as the second version?"

"Indeed, although the setting of the second version has a lot of slots, it is still very attractive, and the third version is really mediocre and too bland. "

"What changed my mind?"

"Maybe it's a strong sense of contrast?"

"I'd love to see the follow-up to the second edition. (If you read a violent novel, go to Feilu Novel Network!)

......

As if to tell you the world.

Yano Ayane couldn't help but complain: "Okay, the third version is exactly the same as Shuangzi and Shota." "

"I can think of the next development. "

Seriously. []

Kuronuma Shuangko and Kazahaya Shota are really anxious to watch.

Sometimes Yano Ayane sees the progress of those two people and wants to take the initiative to help.

So.

She hates this grinding and chirping love very much.

Since both sides have a good feeling, what are you trying to rub in?

Hurry up A to confess!

Take this comic, for example.

"RNM, the female protagonist is interesting to the male protagonist, and the male protagonist took the initiative to express his attitude, so you are confessing?"

What else is thinking: "How nice it would be if this moment could stay forever", I really want to call you an idiot. "

"It's better to be the second version!"

"The story is so interesting, not only will I not be anxious when I look at it, but I will very much hope that the two of them can keep pulling, after all, it is very interesting. "

After spitting.

Ayane Yano is in a good mood.

But I couldn't help but change my words: "It's because girl manga is always like this, so Shuangzi and Shota are the same as stomach inconvenience." "

"I wondered, isn't that just something that can be perfectly solved in three words?"

It's really ink, and it's so infuriating to watch.

......

【Reward Distribution!】

[Answer: The person who invites the heroine to get on the car has a 10% increase in ability.] 】

[Those who answer the final draft will have their full ability increased by 30%.] 】

[Those who answer the second version of the manuscript will have 80% more ability!]

Everyone in the world was stunned.

"Well, in other fields, the higher the number of layers, the more powerful it is, and the prize question and answer session is really out of the ordinary. "

Contrast chess.

Whoever thinks about the more moves has a higher probability of winning.

So normally speaking.

Should the rewards be richer than the layer, right?

But that's not the case with prize quizzes.

The first layer, the third layer, the second layer.

It's outrageous.

"But also, it's harder to guess the second version of Nozaki's paintings, right?"

"If you score it according to difficulty, there is no problem with this reward!"

"Unexpectedly, I thought of the correct answer, but the reward was not the richest. "

"The mentality is broken. "

"I knew I didn't look at this from an editorial perspective. "

Who would have thought that the second version would have even more rewards?

Some of the audience's mentality collapsed.

And then, not much later.

[Easter egg time is over!]

[Stupid couple continues.] 】

[3: It's raining.] 】

See this title.

Many young girls were talking.

"Ah, that's the only one when it rains, right?"

"Yes, couples share an umbrella, hey, hey, just thinking about it makes people blush and heartbeat. "

"In the comics, the male protagonist will try to cover the female protagonist as much as possible, so as to wet his shoulders. "

"Truly Asassiah. "

"Then the question is, what do stupid couples do when it rains?"

"Uh. "

"Hmmm......"

"I think, maybe, maybe two fools will walk together in the rain?"

"If it's a gem, it should sparkle ~ Everyone should have a dream ~ OH~oh~"

"Don't be afraid of pain if you have a dream~"

"Shall you pick up the lyrics?"

"No, I just want to ease the embarrassment, after all, I'm not stupid, I can't imagine a stupid couple doing anything on a rainy day. "

"Me too. "

"But I'm looking forward to it. "

......

It's in this anticipation.

The video officially begins.

["Whoa."] "】

[The sound of rain lingers. 】

[Downstairs in the teaching building, Chiyo Sakura sighed: "It's raining and I forgot to bring an umbrella, what should I do?"]

[At this moment, Nozaki-san came over and asked, "Sakura, did you forget to bring your umbrella?"]

[Zuo 707 Cang scratched his head awkwardly and smiled: "Hmm...... I forgot it by accident, I'm so embarrassed, the probability of precipitation today is 100% but I didn't bring an umbrella, such a stupid person, I can't find a second one in the school, ahaha. "】

[Nozaki-san's fist clenched happily and said, "I forgot to bring an umbrella too, so there are two stupid people!"]

"Damn, I'm laughing to death, why can the male protagonist say such things with a happy face?"

"I can understand how embarrassing it would be to be the only one who didn't bring an umbrella after school, but if I met another guy who didn't have an umbrella, I would be happy subconsciously. "

"Speaking of which, I seem to have had a similar experience, where I became brothers with that person because of a rain. "

......

And for a large audience.

"It's a stupid couple. "

"No, no, in my opinion, the stupid guy is obviously only Nozaki-san, right?"

"It's true that Sakura probably just forgot that Nozaki-san is really stupid, and he's so happy. "

"But speaking of which, the next plot will only be drenched in the rain and go together, right?"

"It's a gem~"

"If you sing again, I'll cut off your tongue. "

"Right...... I'm sorry. "

"I'm really looking forward to what will happen next. "

[Looking at the umbrella and leaving the classmates, Nozaki sighed: "Speaking of which, at this time, you usually use a school uniform jacket instead of an umbrella to cover the rain, right?]

[Sakura imagined that picture and said happily: "Ah! "】

"But. Nozaki said, "I felt that I might not be able to cover my bag, but when I thought about that possibility, I thought of a new pose." "】

[Chiyo Sakura turned his head and was instantly stunned when he saw Nozaki. 】

[Nozaki-san straddles the outer eight, wearing a school uniform jacket, but covering his head with a collar.] 】

[It's just the same as Xuxu baby COS's Nerbe.] 】

["Good soil. "Chiyo Sakura has a black line on his face. 】

[But Nozaki-san asked indifferently, "Do you want to come in and walk together?"]

[Sakura Chiyo was stunned: "Where to enter?"

[The next moment, the picture turns.] 】

[Because Nozaki-san, he is very tall, so even if he bends his waist, it is enough for Sakura Chiyo to stand under him. 】

[Then, two men rushed out screaming.] 】

[Disappeared from the camera for two seconds, then rushed back screaming.] 】