I asked you to write Cure, but you wrote Honkai Impact III?

If the previous experience of Kevin was written directly by Su Nian, it combined the timeline, events, and his personal outline.

So what Alicia is showing Mei now is an event that is of great significance to her. This is Alicia's perspective.

But her situation is different from Kevin's. Kevin's image requires courage, unrivaled force and a firm heart to fight against collapse.

Alicia's charm lies in all aspects.

So I have to write more carefully.

"The concepts of"outline" and"text" are actually quite blurred in Su Nian's case.

After all, if you read both, there seems to be no difference.

If the length of"Thirteen Heroes" is this long, then it can indeed be Everyone has it once, but unfortunately, this idea does not hold true.

The one who can carry out the previous civilization is Alicia, and the one who survives to the end is Kevin, who represents the first combat force of the previous civilization. Who also used a lot of ink to create.

The screenwriter of Honkai Impact 3 is good at creating characters in long-form plots. After Roasting Chicken went to Bentie next door to write Pinoconi, it was just a big version of the performance that made Sha Jin an immediate popular character.

Su Nian also accidentally saw things like fans adopting peacocks and buying aventurine.

The audience's attention was not on the principle of writing, but on the story.

【Looking back, Alicia always appears unexpectedly in everyone's memories, and all Ying Jie's lives are inextricably related to her.】

【Raiden Mei has seen her story one stage after another.】

【Including the incident in the Paradise Hall where she proposed to become the Thirteen Heroes of Chasing Fire, but the proposal was rejected by the top management of Chasing Fire Moth.】

【「Do not recognize that more than half of the members can be called heroes」】

【Alicia showed a [lonely] smile for the first time. ]

Alicia, her current image seems to have been slightly reversed. At least for now, she seems to have never had any bad intentions.......

If she had bad intentions, then Zhuhuo Yingjie's attitude towards her wouldn't be like this, right?

Everyone dotes on her, and no one can do anything to her......

So, did the problem arise when she died?

They suddenly remembered what Aponya had said before, about the fate that would dissipate in ten days.

This dissipates......In what sense is it dissipated?

There is also the word that represents"unknown" - the top management of Fire Chasing Moth. This word appears again.

Every time they are mentioned, absolutely nothing good happens.

They were thinking about the plot, but when they saw these six words, they instantly felt extremely uncomfortable.

【Fire Chasing Moth’s top brass, you’ve done all the bad things!】

【What do you mean they don't allow it? My rules are rules. Talking to top fighters is not allowed, right? Go against them.】

【The reason why there was no commotion at that time was obviously because the previous civilization was at the end of its rope. If human beings were not united anymore, wouldn't they really be sent?】

【How can a man live in the world between heaven and earth and live in depression for a long time? ah......If there are no management talents, then it will be fine and useless.】

【It was indeed not a wise move to have internal fights at that time, but those high-level officials were really difficult to deal with. Civilization collapsed and annihilated, and high-level officials took away hope!】

【But in a sense,"Ying Jie" is a"privilege". Once you get to the organizational level, there are a lot of issues involved, right?】

【To borrow a famous saying, I have been fighting for a lifetime and can’t I enjoy it anymore? ]

They were filled with righteous indignation, for no other reason than that they couldn't see their favorite characters being wronged.

It’s hard to see pig teammates always holding back.

Instantly enter into the exciting one-on-nine blood-pressure-raising moment in your own MOBA game! Directly open the mic with passion.

At least in terms of lowering blood pressure, the top management of Fire Chaser Moth has done a really good job.

Maybe the top management of Fire Chasing Moth does have their own considerations, but this statement is really chilling, isn't it?

They are all warriors fighting against Honkai, but their identities as heroes are not recognized.

It's normal to be scolded.

What Alicia wants is their status, not a privilege, so in the civilizations of later generations, their successors will still recognize them, thank them, and sing about their deeds.

【The story of the founding of Purana has passed again, and this time it’s finally here......The truth about Alicia's promise】

【This is the last journey】

【Starting from the hall of the Paradise of the Past, she met Alicia and met them in the intricate architectural scenes, followed by Pado's shop under the big tree where Su and Eden often stayed.......】

This tone is like a post-game summary......

It doesn't feel right, as if this story is going to end here

【Gua! Stop tugging. It's not like you!】

【No way......It’s sad that such a good story ends so early and the space is not enough.......】

【I would rather Su Nian continue to hang me】

【It's normal for a short story. After all, time is really tight. Su Nian will have to revise the manuscript later, right?】

【He still has so many holes to fill! Wouldn't it hurt your conscience to end it like this?】

【The heroes and villains are all preparing for different things from their perspectives. Obviously, it won't be over so quickly. It's just a false shot. The end of a volume of these novels is like the whole story is about to end.......】

This rhythm made them aware of it instantly, like a signal of the end.

Revisit the past again.

But Su Nian dug a lot of holes and failed to fill this point, so he was severely criticized by the resentful people.

"Everyone, the writing technique of foreshadowing is indeed difficult to control, and Su Nian has avoided talking about it in order to make you ignore it......."

Eden helps Su Nian���Explanation, this is actually a commonly used method.

The bad parts of writing Ya have to be hidden.

As long as no one notices, it's not really a scam.

As long as it's not discovered......But now there are too many being discovered, and it is difficult to hide them and not care about them. However, Su Nian cannot see the barrage and cannot make timely modifications to readers’ feedback.......

It is indeed a flaw.

Writing too quickly so you don’t have time to think about it?

So it seems......Su Nian still has shortcomings.

He looks more like a human now than a robot with the world's literature in his head.

【"Look, we've arrived at the last stop of our trip."】

【At first, Raiden Mei thought that the prison where she met Aponya was the deepest place, but when she came here, she found that it was more like a temple.】......

【"ah......We have really come a long way, and there are obviously many things worth remembering, but we......It seems that we have reached the end"】

【After crossing the last door and experiencing this journey, Mei Yi seems to have the answer.】

【"Even people other than them have different purposes, conceal their secrets, and even have conflicts and conflicts with each other."

"but......I can feel a common belief from these people, or......「Obsession」"

"——「"What to fight for""】

This is the answer Raiden Meiyi came up with. The Paradise of the Past is such a simple story.

Heroes and heroes are just ordinary people with flaws.

They have their own selfish motives, and most of them don’t have any great love. But I will also do some impulsive and amazing things because I am moved or on a whim.

【"Said it right......I think that Mei Yi will be able to face"my ending" calmly now"】

【The two of them had a heart-to-heart relationship and were honest with each other. They would not mind the little lies that Ali had told. Alicia......】

【"When you claimed to be the deputy leader of Zhuhuo Yingjie, I did not take it lightly. same......「"The Thirteenth Herrscher" won't make me treat you differently."】

【"Even if you become a Herrscher......So what, am I not also a lawyer??"】

【Alicia smiled】

【That girl who was always thought to have"other motives", all her words, deeds, and everything she showed in front of Mei, perhaps from beginning to end, were just for this"answer"」】

【In the distant past; on the night when she walked to the end wearing pure white clothes and new makeup that only happened once in her life.......】

【Did she get the"answer" she wanted? Even if......Became a Herrscher? 】

These descriptions......There seemed to be roll after roll of beautiful tapestry, presenting the picture before their eyes.

Beautiful.

This is the only feeling they have.

They seemed to be able to see Alicia holding her hands behind her back, looking embarrassed to look directly at them, seemingly absent-mindedly revealing her girlish thoughts.......

This is Alicia's"vulnerable" side.

She has always shown to the audience that she is playful, has a naughty little mind, and is good at teasing.......Impressions like that.

But now, they have a feeling that beauty is a fate.

Alicia will tell a little lie because she cares about what you think of her.......

This is not to ruin her perfect persona, not even a slight flaw.

Instead, it narrowed the distance between them.

Yes, this is a human being, not just a character created for the sake of perfection.

All the good things that can be thought of in my heart seem to be awakened at this time.

Alicia's image was completely reversed, and she truly entered their hearts as the best pink fairy lady in the world.

It starts with appearance, goes with character, respects talent, continues with kindness, and ends with character......

People who were still indifferent at first were touched.

People who were still doubting now have their hearts in their stomachs.

Emotions were sublimated at this moment.

However, Pippi Aili will not miss this opportunity.

【"Even if you become a Herrscher——"】

【"Um?"The familiar voice brought Mei Yi back to reality.】

【She followed the sound. Under the sunset, Alicia's smile was pure and sweet, and the light fell on her cheeks and flowed down along her fair skin.......】

【Going around her soft body, there was something looming behind her in the haze. It was......a speaker】

【Alicia's expression did not change, and she played back what Mei had just said.】

【"There is also a recording function♪"】

Raiden Mei never dreamed that she would engage in such outrageous tricks at such a romantic moment.

Unexpectedly, Alicia was actually operating the recording function of the speaker behind her back with her hands behind her back.

Originally, she thought that buying such a horn from three crystal flowers was a bit more expensive than a missing person prop, which was a bit hard to understand.

But looking at this speaker now, it is simply a great value!

But for Raiden Meiyi, it’s a bit unfriendly.

【"Alicia——！！"】

The originally heavy atmosphere was instantly broken.

When the atmosphere is abscessed and seems to be infecting the audience, miHoYo always likes to use small things to break the atmosphere.

The same is true for Kevin's"Red Ice". Finally, he felt that Qianjie was still alive on the battlefield, so the sky fire turned into a military shovel and dug out Qianjie.

Such a small episode cleverly broke up the original solemn atmosphere.

It also allowed the story to continue.

It's a good thing that the audience is immersed in the story.

It was as if they were also aroused by Alicia, a wonderful emotional experience.

But if the negative emotions are too strong, they will often feel uncomfortable as well.

As long as the atmosphere is properly rendered.

After all, this is a happy plot

"Player Su Nian is very good at changing emotions. It is important to stimulate emotions, but if you blindly pursue the same emotion for a long time without ups and downs, you will get bored easily.’"

Eden discovered that Su Nian's story seemed to be really useful as a demonstration article.

Remarkable in every aspect���

The rhythm is extremely comfortable, and the character settings are excellent and outstanding.

It's really a rare product.

It's like tasting......The world's top wines, reading and analyzing them is like sitting down with Ellie for an afternoon of drinking and meditation.

It is true that the world is so big and there are so many people that this story cannot be liked by everyone.

Perhaps from the reader's perspective, this story is still a little lacking, not as satisfying as the fast-paced stories they love.

But as we all know, popular works are not necessarily good works, and unpopular works are not necessarily bad works.

In terms of writing application, Su Nian is well-deserved for the evaluation of"model work".

I originally thought it was a small excuse that Otto made to see Su Nian, but from all aspects, this sentence is really not false.

But I didn't expect......Su Nian actually used these things with great proficiency.

What other writing methods does he not know how to write?

Now their question is not what Su Nian knows, but what else he doesn't know.

Could it be that he is truly an all-rounder and can do anything?