I Am Breaking the Dimensional Wall In the Lord of Mysteries

The first part is finished, 68 chapters, about 160,000 words.

The name of this part is [New Life]. According to the idea when I started writing, this name has three meanings.

On the first floor, of course, Li Zexi traveled to the mysterious world and was reborn with the help of Cefer Disraeli's body.

On the second level, Xifa became an Extraordinary and started a new life.

As for the third layer, it is the ending. Sifa learns that he is not the Baron's real son, and that the Baron is just trying to use him.

After knowing all this, he stepped out of the haze and re-planned his life.

At that time, tens of thousands of words were updated, and when there was no sign-up text message, I almost wanted to 'goo'. Fortunately, when there were only a few manuscripts left, the sign-up text message finally came.

This gave me the opportunity to present the first part and my vision. Although there are some differences in the process and outline, adjustments and revisions have been made.

However, the structure of this part is relatively complete.

Next, let's talk about the shortcomings.

Because I'm a newcomer, I don't have a fan base, and I don't dare to show it off, so from the very beginning, I've been 'watching' Xifa to death, and I've been pushing the main line, digging and filling holes and digging holes.

The advantage of this is that the main line is relatively clear, but at the same time it also leads to the fact that some events cannot be presented in detail, and can only be briefly mentioned later in the way of 'after the fact'.

This makes the article appear rough and not delicate enough.

Moreover, a large amount of words are used on Xifa, which will inevitably lead to insufficient portrayal of some characters and become background boards.

Another one is that due to limitations in writing skills, experience, experience and knowledge, the design and layout of articles sometimes appear to be taken for granted.

It’s just that I think it’s a good way to deal with it. As a result, when everyone reads it, different opinions and even flaws appear.

I can only 'patch' the article based on everyone's feedback, but no matter how softly it is handled, there will still be some unsatisfactory places.

If the total score is 100, then the first part, I would give myself a score of 60.

Should be a pass.

Maybe? !

The second part is about to start next, and I will try my best to pay attention to the above shortcomings. For example, if we want to portray some important supporting roles in the second part, of course we will pay attention to proportion, pay attention to trade-offs, and have priorities, otherwise it will become irrigation rather than portrayal.

As for the design layout, I will read more excellent works to improve my experience in this area. From this point of view, the hairline may be in danger of receding again.

In short, I will continue to work hard, and I hope everyone can give more attention.

Having said all that, well, I have a showdown.

I want to ask for recommendations, monthly tickets, and rewards!

PS: The second part is called The Provocateur, also called 'Come here'!