House Dad’s Literary Life

Chapter 1045 Other people's disasters, her troubles (13)

Although Xixi is only in the first grade of elementary school, after the spring outing, the spring outing diary, or the so-called experience that makes countless children hate, still follows one after another! Of course, when Li Ruolan communicated with the parents, she still revealed a plan to use this as a foreshadowing to ask the children to start writing diaries in the future.

This 200-word homework after the spring outing was a catastrophe for many children—such as Lan Xin, Chen Yuxuan, etc., but for Xixi, or families like Wang Leilei and Cao Ruolin, it started very early. For children who ask them to learn to keep a diary, this is really not a big problem.

Especially Xixi, the little girl who just took a bath is sitting in front of the desk with her chin resting on her cheeks, frowning, but what she is worried about is not about writing about her spring outing experience...

Ms. Li said that I need to write 200 characters, but, but I feel that there are so many things to write that I can't finish them. What should I do? Seeing her father walking in, Xixi raised her little head and asked impatiently .

Yang Yi smiled slightly, stood beside her desk, looked at her sideways, and asked, How much do you plan to write?

Xixi grabbed the pen, turned her head to look at her homework, thought for a while, then turned her head in confusion, pouted her little pink mouth and said: I don't know, but, but I think there are many stories to tell. Said, I don’t even know how much to write.”

I want to write all the interesting things, but only write two hundred words, it is naturally impossible!

Yang Yi thought about it, and felt that now is a good opportunity for Xixi to make progress.

So, he said with a smile: Xixi, let's not write this composition yet, you take out your diary, and besides, take out a piece of draft paper.

Xixi was a little puzzled, but obediently followed her father's instructions, buckled the homework book, and pressed it neatly under another stack of homework books, then opened the drawer, and carefully put her delicate and beautiful diary took it out.

The draft paper is on the table.

What do you think, if you were asked to write a diary, how would you write it? What would you write at the beginning? Yang Yi asked.

The little girl looked at her father in confusion. She looked down at the diary, thought for a while, and replied a little uncertainly, Write the date and weather?

Yang Yi realized that he had to speak more specifically, he smiled and said, Well, think about it, what wonderful things happened when we were on the bus on the way to the spring outing?

Why did you ask this earlier!

Xixi's eyes lit up all of a sudden, and the little girl with a good memory didn't even need to think about it. She smiled and said, There are a lot of them. Papa sent us small steamed buns and delicious fudge, and then Papa even took us to sing together...

Then you write two lines on the draft paper. On the top, write that Dad gives out snacks, and on the bottom, write that we will perform and teach our classmates to sing. Yang Yi said to Xixi.

The little girl obediently followed what her father said. After she wrote two words, she raised her head and looked at her father eagerly: Papa, I don't know how to write snacks.

The words that I can't write are still the same as before. I will replace them with pinyin first, and then I will look them up in the dictionary to change them.

By doing this, Yang Yi was also teaching Xixi to design a simple outline of a long story. Therefore, after Xixi finished writing, he bent down, pointed at the two lines written by Xixi, and said: See those two subheadings? Is their structure something that so-and-so is doing?

The little girl blinked her eyes. It was not easy for her to understand this concept. After thinking for a while, she nodded.

This is our generalization of one matter. When we write the diary in detail later, we can expand from these words. Yang Yi said, Then when you write about the spring outing experience explained by the teacher, we need To simplify some content, which of these two content do you think is more exciting? Would you like to keep it?

Xixi probably understood what her father meant, she hesitated for a moment, pointed to the one behind, and said, I think, I think singing is more fun.

That's right! Yang Yi patted Xixi's little head with a smile and said, When we write a diary, it's like building blocks. First think about which pieces we want to write, and then One building block, one building block to build on top of.

But the teacher asked you to write a composition that is only 200 words long. At this time, you have to think about how to simplify it, keep the parts you think are the most interesting, and keep the parts that may not be so important. It's like tearing down building blocks. Remove a piece of land. In this way, you will know what to write in the last two hundred characters!

Taking building blocks as an example, it is obviously more vivid, and the little girl understands it.

Papa, but, but I still want to write a lot, what should I do? Because I think many things are fun! Xixi finally twisted her slender waist on the chair, and said to her father with a little bit of reluctance. .

So Dad asked you to write a diary first! Yang Yi laughed and said, Your diary is not limited, you can write as much as you want, and you can write as much as you want. When you finish writing the diary, you will be very satisfied. Let's look back and see how to condense this diary into a 200-word article, so that you won't have any regrets.

Yes! Xixi's eyes lit up, and she gestured to her father with a smile on her face, Then I want to write a diary, and I want to write a lot of things!

Okay, you can write your diary first tonight. If you can't finish it, we will continue tomorrow. Let's read it together tomorrow. How can we condense the two hundred words of spring outing experience and write it well, okay? Yang said. Seeing the little girl's happy appearance, Yi was also in a good mood, and his voice raised a lot.

Okay! The little girl replied crisply.

...

On Sunday, when Yang Yi was instructing her daughter to write an essay, she accidentally received a call from Fu Jun.

It was not surprising for Yang Yi to receive a call from Fu Jun. After all, he and Fu Jun had a very good personal relationship. When he usually went to Yangcheng, he would have dinner with Fu Jun and his family. But this time, Fu Jun did it because of Sahara I came to Yang Yi for business in the online shopping mall.

Now the Sahara Online Mall is basically on the right track, and Fu Jun rarely calls Yang Yi about work. After all, a mature company has a rich talent pool and a complete corporate structure, so it should also reduce the need for Yang Yi. Dependency!

But this time, it is related to the future development direction of the group company and the online mall, not to mention the management of the Sahara online mall, even Fu Jun himself can't grasp the idea.

Therefore, he can only turn to Yang Yi, who has always been far-sighted.

It's inconvenient to talk on the phone. Are you free tomorrow? I plan to come to Jiangcheng tomorrow, and I will discuss it with you and Brother Lan. Fu Jun's style of acting has become more and more vigorous over the years, but , he still maintained a respect for Yang Yi, first asked.

Yes, for such a big matter, we really need several shareholders to sit down and talk about it. Yang Yi smiled and said, However, I don't think you should worry, this matter may be a good thing!

There is a deep meaning in guiding the composition here~ I don’t need water, I will use it sometime in the future