He just acted as a dead man, how did he become a best actor?

"Naturally I want to shoot, I just want to shoot it better!" Bai Yuluo said.

She likes the role of the female emperor very much, and likes the pleasure of her killing the world for her brother.

However, as Lin Beifan said, this plot is smooth, but it is the mode of commercial films.

After the shooting, it was not very impressive.

This is her first film, and she hopes to achieve a little bit of success.

Either the box office exploded, or word of mouth exploded.

If there is nothing, then it is better not to shoot.

At this time, Bai Yuluo's beautiful eyes looked over, with a look of expectation: "Lord Landlord, since you can see the shortcomings of this script in a short time." Can I trouble you and help modify it? "

Lin Beifan was stunned: "Let me modify?" I'm a new person, how can I understand this? "

Ma Chunlan also felt very puzzled.

Shouldn't the matter of revising the script be left to professionals?

How to hand over to a fledgling little guy?

"No, you know!"

Bai Yuluo's eyes were full of meaning: "At the beginning, when you came to take over the role of the white-clothed sword god, you felt that the role of the white-clothed sword god was too heavy, and directly changed his role, am I right?" "

Lin Beifan smiled dryly: "This... You found it! "

"However, the role of the white-clothed sword god cannot be lacking, he wants to teach the heroine martial arts!"

"So, in order to make up for this flaw, you created a perfect cultivation system, and also changed the role of the white-clothed sword god to the sword demon Dugu to seek defeat, making the image of this character more prominent and becoming a classic!"

Ma Chunhua couldn't sit still: "Is there such a thing?" "

Bai Yuluo nodded: "Director Guan can testify!" "

Ma Chunhua turned his head, pointed at Lin Beifan, and laughed: "You kid can!" Actually changed the script, Lao Guan is very demanding, you can actually convince him, it seems that there are two brushes! How about you try to change it? We will use it if it is corrected, and it does not matter much if it is not corrected! "

"So, Lord Landlord, please don't hesitate to enlighten!" Bai Yuluo pushed the script in front of Lin Beifan.

Lin Beifan was furious by the gazes of the two women.

"Okay, then I'll give it a try!"

After Lin Beifan coughed, he said, "First of all, the main line of this story cannot be changed, and the plot cannot be greatly changed, so we focus on strengthening the hostess!" It can be said that as long as the character is successful and others remember the role, the movie will be successful! "

"Very reasonable!" The two women nodded.

"Second, I think the heroine is not ruthless enough, I want to change her a little more ruthless!"

"Not ruthless enough?"

Bai Yuluo blinked her eyes: "She played life-threatening cultivation for her brother, in order to become stronger in cultivation, she robbed resources when she saw them, and killed whoever blocked them, all the way bloody storms, enemies all over the world, this... Not ruthless enough? "

Lin Beifan spoke: "This is just an ordinary revenge character, and other revenge dramas are similar, and they can't show the ruthlessness of the female emperor!" I would like to change this to ..."

"Although the female emperor is practicing with her life, as a mortal body, cultivation is still very difficult. At this time, she came up with an idea, her own physique is not good, but someone else's can, why not use other people's cultivation physique for her own? "

"As long as you transform someone else's cultivation physique into your own, then you can quickly become stronger!"

"So, with her amazing talent, she created a terrifying Heaven Devouring Demon Skill!"

"This magic skill continues to become stronger by devouring the origin of various special physiques, and will eventually evolve into the legendary terrifying physique chaotic body!"

"So, with this magic skill, she devoured the physique of the Tianjiao King all the way!"

"No matter who the other party is, no matter what kind of identity background he has, as long as he has a good physique, he will be devoured by the female emperor!"

"In the end, the female emperor is full of enemies all over the world, and everyone is cursed!"

Bai Yuluo and the two women gasped: "Hiss~~ or your setting is ruthless enough!" "

Ma Chunhua looked at Bai Yuluo: "I think it's okay!" "

"It can be, but isn't this too ruthless, killing innocents for their own selfish desires, the audience may be a little unacceptable, will hate this character!" Bai Yuluo frowned.

Lin Beifan said calmly: "Therefore, we must constantly strengthen the heroine's feelings for her brother, she became like this for her brother!" In this way, the audience will feel much less disgust! "

"When the story is sublimated in the end, the audience's concept will change 180 degrees, and they will become distressed about the heroine!"

Looking at Lin Beifan's calm appearance, Bai Yuluo felt a little more confident and urged.

"You go on first!"

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