God Descends the Second Element

"Although there are still some problems, it is much better than before."

Seeing Sawemura Yinglili's expression, Wang Hao couldn't help but feel a little unbearable. He knew very well the other party's silent contribution these days.

Thinking of this, he couldn't help reaching out his hand and touching the small head of Ei Lili Sawamura, and comforted: "You really worked hard. In fact, if this comic is changed, there will be no big problem, at least not serialized. problem."

"really?!"

After hearing this, Sawamura Hidelily asked excitedly, and did not show dissatisfaction with Wang Hao's move of touching her head. Now her heart is all on the topic of serial comics.

Wang Hao nodded and replied: "Really, if you don't mind, I can say my opinion."

"Yeah! Just say it if you have anything, don't stop halfway talking like this!"

Sawamura Hidelili gave him a white look, and said anxiously, didn't this guy know that it would be easy to get beaten if he went out to catch other people's appetite?

"Blam me."

Wang Hao couldn't help but spit out a word. After taking a deep breath, he resisted the urge to continue spitting out, and said directly: "You did a good job in front of this comic, but there are a lot of unreasonable things in the back. For example, why did the transfer student of that super beautiful girl suddenly become interested in the protagonist inexplicably?

Didn’t you say in the manga that Yanagawa’s early attitude towards others is gentle and generous, other than that, you didn’t cross Lei Chi for half a step. You can see that this person is quite mature and stable. He was good at first. She suddenly became interested in the protagonist in the next second, and then the youth romance comedy was unfolding, and she really didn't know how to complain.

That's all, but the plot that can be seen at a glance is really a bit boring, I think you plan to follow the plot of the romance comedy Shurachang next, right? "

"Ok……"

This time, Sawamura Hidelili looked ugly every time Wang Hao said something. She did plan to follow the plot of the romance comedy Shurachang.

Father, like son.

Sawamura Hidelily was not angry at Wang Hao's words, but at herself. What the other party said were things she hadn't noticed before, so there were indeed many problems.

Seeing that Sawamura Hidelily was able to accept the opinions well, Wang Hao's expression was relieved, and he would be really disappointed if the other party couldn't even accept this level.

However, Wang Hao was still very satisfied with the other party’s attitude, and continued to speak: "I think you can change it this way. It is okay for Yanagawa Saki to be interested in the protagonist, but it must be based on a special accident. For example, although Yanagawa Saki looks like a beautiful girl with a gentle and generous personality on the outside of the school, there is another side hidden behind him. For example, Yanagawa Saki is actually a person who likes a black tongue or a dead house, etc. Wait.

However, the protagonist discovered the secret of Yanagawa Sauki by chance. This led to the protagonist being stared at by Yanagawa Sauki. The following plot can make the usual funny, ridiculously smiling, it will make the reader's stomach hurt. Can't help but continue to read the content. "

Hearing Wang Hao's words, Sawamura Hidelili suddenly realized and smiled happily: "So that's it, I know! Thank you!"

"It's okay, in fact, you can find out as long as you spend a while."

Wang Hao stopped, but Sawamura Hidelily did not continue to wait for him to say: "At this time, you can accept it, I will continue to draw comics first, you guys are really a good person, thank you!"

As soon as she finished speaking, Sawamura Hidelily turned and left with a slightly flushed face, leaving Wang Hao with a strange expression on her face. Suddenly, she received a good person card inexplicably like this?

Although he felt that he could barely be regarded as a good person, this feeling of being issued a good person card was really a bit bad.

Forget it, good people are good people.

Wang Hao smiled bitterly, and turned around to look at the scenery outside the window. He was a little lost. He was a little tired of dealing with things these days, so let's go out and take a look?

With this thought in his heart, Wang Hao immediately stood up from the chair, moved his body on the spot, and was ready to set off immediately.

It's still early, and it's just right to go for a walk.

This time he planned to walk around Yinglili in Haosawa Village nearby. For so long, Wang Hao found that he hadn't enjoyed it nearby.

After changing his shoes at the hallway, Wang Hao was about to go out when he found that his sleeve was suddenly torn.

This kind of familiarity, no need to guess.

Wang Hao sighed in his heart, turned around reluctantly, looked at Shiina Zhenbai, who was expressionless, stretched out his hand and rubbed the opponent's head, and asked, "True Bai, what's the matter?"

"Ho, the room is a bit boring, I want to go out and play."

Shiina Mashiro said softly, and his little hand pulled Wang Hao's sleeve again, and his amber eyes blinked slightly, which seemed to be cute. Who can stand it? !

No, this is not selling cuteness, but the true white existence itself is cuteness, at least Wang Hao is able to withstand it... which is strange.

And Zhen Bai was obviously bored at home. He hadn't noticed this at all before. Wang Hao was still very guilty about it, so he didn't hesitate, looked at each other with a smile, and said, "Well, where does Zhen Bai want to go to play? "

Well, he set his mind. No matter where Zhen Bai wants to go, he will accompany him out. This is as the owner...Bah, baah, no, it should be something the guardian should do!

"I want to go to England to see Rita."

Shiina Mashiro said softly, her expression fluctuating slightly.

Without thinking, Wang Hao replied subconsciously: "No problem, then go to the UK to see Rita!"

As soon as he said something, Wang Hao suddenly felt a little strange there. What did he just say?

Just in case, Wang Hao smiled and continued to confirm Shiina Zhenbai: "True Bai~www.NovelMTL.com~ Where did you just say you want to go?"

Hearing that, Shiina really didn't think much about it, and continued: "Ho, I want to go to the UK to see Rita."

Wang Hao: "???"

If he heard it right, Zhenbai seemed to say that he wanted to go to the UK, right?

Sometimes Wang Hao is really uncomfortable with Zhen Bai's constant unconstrained thinking.

Wang Hao looked at Zhen Bai with an expression of expectation. He couldn't say what he originally wanted to say, and finally turned into a wry smile.

Still the same sentence, who can stand it? !

Anyway, he can stand it... which is strange.

If you go to England, go to England. Just go out and relax.

Thinking of this, Wang Hao shook his head helplessly, looked at Shiina with a white smile, and said, "Then go to England, let's go!"