Genius club

With a bang, the content of the first volume is over.

In fact, I wrote a lot of words at the end of the volume, more than 4,000 words.

But after I finished writing it, I found that it was basically my reflection and summary of my creative techniques and the mistakes I made while writing. These are valuable experiences for me, but they are all obscure and boring debates for readers, so I might as well delete them all.

From a reader's perspective, looking back at the past 300,000 words, there are huge problems, the reading experience is very bad, and it is very unsightly.

Yes, it's not good-looking and uncomfortable to watch.

Because this is the first book written by the author who changed websites and styles, he naturally took many detours.

But these detours are all I have to take sooner or later, and it doesn't matter to me personally. After all, this is my first book in this book. It is a trial and error experiment, and I don't expect to achieve results.

It's just that for those readers who follow the update, they have indeed suffered a lot, and the author here also deeply apologizes.

In fact, I personally recommend that you read it, or even wait until it is finished before reading it. Anyway, regardless of whether anyone reads this book, the author has to finish it according to the original plan, so you can wait until it is finished before reading it, or just read it directly You can just wait until the ending and skip to watch the ending.

It doesn't matter if you forget it. Reading online novels is just for fun. There are many good books, including this one.

There are surprisingly many negative reviews in the review section for this book. Many people suggested to the author that he should set a fan limit to limit his comments. There are too many malicious negative comments.

In fact, the author thinks it's okay.

Because first of all, what everyone said makes sense, and this book does have big problems.

Secondly, these negative reviews are also a rare treasure for future creations.

Before I open the second book one day, I will read through these massive negative reviews from beginning to end. I think the second book will avoid a lot of detours.

Many book friends are worried that the author will have a mental explosion when facing so many negative reviews every day...

Of course not~

The author is in his thirties and has experienced a lot of ups and downs in life. In a middle-aged world where the social circle is shrinking, having people scolding oneself every day is actually the same as having people praising oneself every day. This is It means that someone cares about you and you are someone.

As of now, the manuscripts of this book have been distributed.

I can't judge whether a large number of manuscripts are good or bad for online writing, but I think that for an author like me who has a long-winded writing style, it may do more harm than good.

So.

Next, we enter the serious "serialization" stage. I feel that I still need to make some improvements on the numerous questions raised by everyone.

The first is the slow pace, unpleasantness, and hydrology, which I will try to improve.

Secondly, the plot advances slowly, the protagonist is too weak, and the frustration is too strong. I want to think about how to solve it.

Finally, there are deficiencies in characterization, dialogue, and description. I will also find time to learn more about how other excellent works deal with it.

Start with volume two.

The author will work hard to improve the issues raised by everyone, but because there is no archive, the number of updates per day can only be changed from [three updates to two updates]. Please forgive me for this. After all, quality is the first priority. .

Moreover, after correcting the hydrological problems and tightening the plot, the experience of the second update may be much better than the experience of the previous three updates.

The update time remains unchanged, and two chapters will be released at 6 p.m.

The second volume is called The Heartbreakers.

It is taken from the work of the same name by the science fiction master Mr. He Xi. It is a very beautiful short story. If you are interested, you can read it.

Different from the hard science fiction stories written by teacher Liu Cixin, most of the works written by Mr. He Xi are mainly humanistic and soft science fiction, which has a unique charm when reading. 39288570. .

With a bang, the content of the first volume is over.

In fact, I wrote a lot of words at the end of the volume, more than 4,000 words.

But after I finished writing it, I found that it was basically my reflection and summary of my creative techniques and the mistakes I made while writing. These are valuable experiences for me, but they are all obscure and boring debates for readers, so I might as well delete them all.

From a reader's perspective, looking back at the past 300,000 words, there are huge problems, the reading experience is very bad, and it doesn't look good.

Yes, it's not good-looking and uncomfortable to watch.

Because this is the first book written by the author who changed websites and styles, he naturally took many detours.

But these detours are all I have to take sooner or later, and it doesn't matter to me personally. After all, this is my first book in the book. It is a trial and error experiment, and I don't expect to achieve results.

It's just that for those readers who follow the update, they have indeed suffered a lot, and the author here also expresses his sincere apologies.

In fact, I personally suggest that you read it, or even wait until it is finished before reading it. Anyway, regardless of whether anyone reads this book, the author has to finish it according to the original plan, so you can wait until it is finished before reading it, or just read it directly You can just wait until the ending and skip to watch the ending.

It doesn't matter if you forget it. Reading online novels is just for fun. There are many good books, including this one.

There are surprisingly many negative reviews in the review section for this book. Many people suggested to the author that he should set a fan limit to limit comments. There are too many malicious negative comments.

In fact, the author thinks it's okay.

Because first of all, what everyone said makes sense, and this book does have big problems.

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Secondly, these negative reviews are also a rare treasure for future creations.

Before I open the second book one day, I will read through these massive negative reviews from beginning to end. I think the second book will avoid a lot of detours.

Many book friends are worried that the author will have a mental explosion when facing so many negative reviews every day...

Of course not~

The author is in his thirties and has experienced a lot of ups and downs in life. In a middle-aged world where social circles are shrinking, having people scolding oneself every day is actually the same experience as having people praising oneself every day. This It means that someone cares about you and you are someone.

As of now, the manuscripts of this book have been distributed.

I can't judge whether a large number of manuscripts are good or bad for online writing, but I think that for an author like me who has a long-winded writing style, it may do more harm than good.

So.

Next, we enter the serious "serialization" stage. I feel that I still need to make some improvements on the numerous questions raised by everyone.

The first is the slow pace, unpleasantness, and hydrology, which I will try to improve.

Secondly, the plot advances slowly, the protagonist is too weak, and the frustration is too strong. I want to think about how to solve it.

Finally, there are deficiencies in characterization, dialogue, and description. I will also find time to learn more about how other excellent works deal with them.

Start with volume two.

The author will work hard to improve the issues raised by everyone, but because there is no archive, the number of updates per day can only be changed from [three updates to two updates]. Please forgive me for this. After all, quality is the first priority. .

Moreover, after correcting the hydrological problems and tightening the plot, the experience of the second update may be much better than the experience of the previous three updates.

The update time remains unchanged, and two chapters will be released at 6 p.m.

The second volume is called The Heartbreakers.

It is taken from the work of the same name by the science fiction master Mr. He Xi. It is a very beautiful short story. If you are interested, you can read it.

Different from the hard science fiction stories written by teacher Liu Cixin, most of the works written by Mr. He Xi are mainly humanistic and soft science fiction, which has a unique charm when reading. 39288178. .