From the Bird

To be a person, you must have a force in your heart

Come piece by piece

First, this volume of Jiulongchengzhaiquan set draws on the masterpiece of the master of rebirth from the sea-cooked wine teacher (a great work, this new one is far from comparable)

In fact, the inspiration, action design, and background of this volume are also inspired by many movies. The Brothers of the Mai's "Provincial and Hong Kong Banner Soldiers", "The Underworld" directed by Du Qifeng, the cold weapon literary film "Master", and the Killing Wolf series Zhang Jin hits Wu Jing Toni Jia's action design. What would gossip palms I would say?) Kowloon City Walled Lingyi legend ghost mother cooking. Wait, classmates who like Hong Kong movies must know what I'm talking about.

However, the same is a web article, which is naturally more sensitive in this respect, so it is particularly famous that I have no offense to Teacher Canghai. As to whether the plots are the same, readers can judge for themselves. Book review area with rhythm lock (faceless)

Secondly, thank you. Thanks to all the book enthusiasts from Longkong for recommending me to this little guy who is not even on the street, more than once, more than one. Thanks, thanks.

Thanks to the owner of the starting book list for adding this book to the book list. Among them, Yang Chenkong's boss is like Lei Guaner. I can see this boss at the starting book review. Is it really Miss? (Both eyes shine)

Thanks to everyone in the book review area for your comments. Every one of your comments has made me experience the joy of coding. Thank you, really thank you. Thanks to everyone for pointing out the inadequacy of this book. Although I may not modify or even reply for some reasons, I did see it, and thank everyone who sincerely provided comments to my book. Thank you book friend Mo Shougui for the old paper pile. I was not able to write those things (I haven't read many books) and gave me some inspiration. Finally, are you Miss (looking forward)

Third, to be a person, you must have a force in your heart

The gap between the book and the book was experienced at the time of writing. Before writing Li Yan and Xu Tianci's weapon war, I looked at the reborn hero again.

How can I say, there is a gap of ten thousand between me and Teacher Cang.

The rhythm of the story, the details of the writing, are so far away that every time a reader says. Not bad. I'm ashamed of having the taste of big cock.

Far worse ...

But I will be better in the future.

When the book was 100,000 words, it was not low on Youshu.com, far exceeding the actual level of the book.

Maybe it's everyone's grievances about Teacher Canghai's not writing books, Love House and Wuwu, or it may be that the starting point is not much of my type.

But one thing, I have to force it.

Moreover, this book is not written in Guoshu and Hong Kong. At least it's not just Guoshu and Hong Kong.

I write Chinese arts, in addition to my intentions at the beginning, more because the last gravelist accumulated a lot of traditional martial arts materials when writing books, so there is no need to waste ...

4 miscellaneous

Please do n’t whip the Cantonese question, and you will not commit it again in the future, even if it involves dialects, the amount will be greatly reduced.

There are many problems in this volume. For example, I have buried too many threads. Although most of them have heads and tails (What pits are left unfilled), they are messy! Because of the poor writing power, the relaxation is unreasonable, especially the one with Lian Sheng, and once wrote the floating, this is not a fast-paced infinite flow of writing!

This problem is serious and I will fix it in the next few stories.

Second, the characterization and coolness are not enough. I feel that it is not enough. There should be something to dig, but I have n’t found out, and the characterization is procrastinating. Many characters can be written more concisely and powerfully.

Third, the rush of time has caused false accounts.

For example, I arranged for Prince Li Yan Huyou to play, which should have been a hot show here, but due to some reasons, I reduced the role of these people, changed the hot show to a literary show, and did not dare to let Li Yan participate in the chaos. Among them, today I looked at the article of the author's college and found that I didn't need to write it at all, which is a pity.

However, in the narrative of literary and opera, many book friends saw Li Yan really want to betray.

It has been modified here. It should not be mistaken again. Some people think that Li Yan is going to kill Axiu. This is not a problem for book friends. My problem is that people come to read books for cool. You ca n’t explain clearly. Of course, go for it.

Third, the character of the protagonist, in fact, I think Li Yan's character is very clear, but after reading it myself, I feel that it does not perform well. I will not repeat the writing, but also answer some book friends' questions

It's about chivalry, martial arts and evil.

My point is, write a chivalrous character, and raise the three-point evil first!

I don't quite agree with Mr. Jin Yong's heroes, and he is the country and the people (rational discussion, don't scold the street)

The hero is the country and the people. Guo Jing and his wife guarded Xiangyang.

The greatness of chivalry does not need the weak and incompetent of those in power to set off, but often encounters the relentless crushing of the system and the world. For the chivalry of the country and the people, the taste of Confucianism is too strong.

Xia word, big deal.

逞 fierce fighting, fighting for justice and sparse wealth, until death. It will be used by others and will become a chess piece. He is not a perfect thing, but a gloomy background of the system and the overall situation. But it is the most humane thing in China for five thousand years.

It ’s a long way to go, essay, believe in Ma Youyi, Li Yan is not a chivalry, everyone just smiles.

Other questions are written in the book, and everyone asks more. Some things are unclear. If you ask, I know that it is not clear here. If you want to change, I will also improve. You can also worry about it.

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