Fantasy System

Okay, I'll send it to you now.

Since the codeword software mobile phone and computer are interrelated, there are also yesterday's saved drafts on the mobile phone, which is very convenient. Mu Fan poured out the 40,000-character novel written yesterday from his phone, and sent all of them to An Yilun.

In any case, Mu Fan has only come to this world not long ago, and as An Yilun is also a world-renowned blogger, he should be able to tell whether a book is good or bad and whether it meets the market.

An Yilun is also a standard otaku. He usually likes to read some novels and anime and play youth love games. He will comment on the light novels and animations released every month, which has also won the support of many fans. , became a well-known popular blogger famous for ACG information, it can be said that he has read countless light novels, and his understanding of light novels is quite deep.

Today he happened to hear that his close friend Mu Fan, who works part-time in a restaurant and is a classmate at the same school, started writing light novels, and he immediately became interested.

In his opinion, Mu Fan is a newcomer who has just entered the pit. Newcomers to light novels need to pay attention to many problems. He needs to list them one by one for Mu Fan and give him some pointers. In the synopsis of the plot, An Yilun was surprised.

The story of Accelerated World takes place when everyone uses a terminal device called a neurallinker neural connection device to connect, living in the future of the networked world? Become an overclocking linker with a thousand times the speed of thinking?

Although the introduction of the story is simple, judging from the fantasy of this kind of brain hole, it is very likely that a newcomer cannot handle this kind of subject matter at all.

As soon as I saw the introduction, An Yilun couldn't help but feel interested in it. This should be a kind of sci-fi theme. Although there are also sci-fi future themes in light novels nowadays, but only from the point of neural connection devices. Look, the setting should be a very novel theme.

But looking down, An Yilun also frowned.

Haruyuki Arita, a cowardly and obese student who was bullied, lived a life of cursing reality while hiding in a corner of the school network to improve his highest score in squash games. He could only find a happy and confident boy in the game as a start?

In today's novels and animations, it is definitely a big taboo to start with the identity of a fat man. After all, people who like to read novels can roughly imagine their favorite characters in their hearts, but if they start with a fat man, I am afraid there will be Many people can't hold on, right?

Not to mention, this fat man is relatively weak and incompetent and is bullied every day.

.....

However, it is precisely because of the male lead's weakness that he wants to see how the male lead fights back to solve the incident. An Yilun also continued to watch. However, he didn't realize that he had been completely substituted into this novel without knowing it.

Although the male protagonist is weak, he has his own personality. The biggest advantage of this novel is that the characteristics of the character are particularly prominent.

In the following day, Kuroyukihime, the vice president of the student council admired by everyone, broke into Haruyuki Arita's world and asked him to join the ranks of burstlinkers who can increase the speed of thinking by a thousand times. It was also by virtue of this speed of thinking that Kuroyukihime helped Arita Haruyuki get rid of this oppressed life.

But also because of this program, he was also involved in the battle between ultra-frequency linkers. In order to repay Kuroyukihime's favor, Haruyuki volunteered to serve the black king Kuroyukihime and rebuild the Black Legion..... .

At this point in the story, the plot of more than 40,000 characters is over.

After watching all the current plots, An Yilun was also completely stunned. The accelerated world is very novel in today's light novels only in terms of subject matter. It can be said that Haruyuki Arita's battle can completely affect reality. His heart is urgent I want to see what's going on next,

What kind of development will Haruyuki Arita's efforts to become a Burst Linker and Kuroyukihime's relationship develop.

As a well-known and popular blogger, he has read countless light novels. From the previous plot alone, he can see that Accelerated World is definitely a masterpiece, because a qualified masterpiece first of all has a novel theme, which means More than half of the success.

Mu Fan, I didn't expect that you are just a newcomer, and the light novels are written so well. It really opened my eyes. What's the next plot?

An Yilun also praised Mu Fan without any pretentiousness. After reading it, he couldn't bear to lose his temper, and hurriedly sent Mu Fan back a message.

Mu Fan, who was sitting in the food department typing, saw An Yilunye's reply, and smiled as expected.

Speaking of which, regardless of all settings in the accelerated world, this novel is an inspirational story about a weak knight who keeps growing and improving in order to protect his beloved princess.

Besides, he belongs to the light novels that carried the fire in the previous life, and the accelerated world fits the market of the current world, so it will naturally attract many readers who like it.

As for originality, wait until it attracts some popularity before starting.

Rookie light novel?

Mu Fan raised his eyebrows. He has been writing novels for four or five years, but he is not in this world.

Isn't it boring to spoil something before it's written? A qualified author won't spoil it.

Mu Fan smiled and sent An Yilun a message.

Oh, I took the liberty.

An Yilun was also too anxious about the following plot just now, and after Mu Fan reminded him, he thought of the most annoying spoiler in one of his novels and anime, and then thought of what Mu Fan said at the beginning, and asked: Mu Fan, Are you going to contribute to Dengeki Bunko? I do know an editor there, if you want, we can go together on Saturday, and I’ll introduce you.”

Okay, actually I'm going to participate in Dengeki Bunko's newcomer award. Since you have an editor you are familiar with, let's go on Saturday.

Okay, then the follow-up plot should be written out quickly. If I don't have to watch it, I will die!

Don't worry, I won't let you die.

 …

Mu Fan turned off the phone and continued to code words. At this time, Asuna Yuki walked over, glanced at the rapidly changing text on the phone, and the chapter information on it, and asked in surprise: Mu Fan, you... ...is this writing a novel?

Yeah.

Mu Fan nodded, and suddenly remembered the op of Love Metronome sung by Asuna Yuuki, and couldn't help asking: Could it be that classmate Yucheng also likes light novels?

My family has been buying me some classics and business books, and I'm almost tired of reading them! So when I'm bored, I have a little spare time, so I read light novels to relax, like Love Metronome This light novel was discovered only recently.

Yuuki Asuna stuck out her tongue in displeasure, then walked over and sat on the chair opposite Mu Fan, resting her chin with one hand, and placed a pair of plump peaks on the side of the table, letting the table take care of it Gravity at the center of the earth.

To be reasonable, Yuuki Asuna is recognized as a beauty by the school, not only is she good-looking, but also has a very well-developed body, Mu Fan couldn't help swallowing when she saw it.

Mu Fan, what's the name of your light novel? Yuuki Asuna asked curiously.

Hearing Yuuki Asuna's question, Mu Fan quickly looked away, and said truthfully, It's called Accelerated World.

Then can you show me first?

The number of words in this book is too small now, let me show it to my classmates when I write more!

In fact, it’s okay for Accelerated World to show Yuki Asuna now, but the number of words is too small now, and Accelerated World has been relatively slow, so Mu Fan decided to show Yuki Asuna a little more.

After all, there was An Yilun who urged him to change. Fortunately, An Yilun also met him in class B of the second year. The chances of meeting him in school are relatively small, but Yuuki Asuna is different. He is in the food department every day. I don't want to run the food department and be constantly urged to change by this beautiful minister when I'm cooking.

Okay, then you must show me when Mu Fan is on sale! Seeing what Mu Fan said, Yuuki Asuna could only nod her head.

Well, good. Mu Fan smiled slightly, and when he was about to say something, Mu Fan heard a commotion coming from the door of the food department behind him, Mu Fan and Yuuki Asuna turned their eyes over,

There is a petite girl at the door, wearing a brown top, plaid skirt, short burgundy hair, a black bat-shaped hairpin pinned to her hair, and a small canine tooth at the corner of her mouth, she looks very playful and cute The girl walked in, swaggered and sat on the first table, looked up at Mu Fan with a proud smile and said:

I am the great demon Satania, the one who unifies hell, human beings, come and have a bowl of Yangchun noodles marked on the outside sign!

puff!

Hearing the words about the boiling of the second illness, Mu Fan couldn't help but spit out the mouthful of water he just drank, and turned around to find that Yuuki Asuna was also staring at him.

When the two looked at each other, they both saw the helplessness and caring eyes for the mentally retarded in each other's eyes...