Evolution Paradise, are you the natural disaster?

This volume is indeed problematic.

① The upper limit of the copy is too low. The effect that the Dragon Race material universe can have on the protagonist can be replaced by an ordinary universe.

② The character of the protagonist.

I watched Dragon Race when I was young, and it really influenced me.

In addition, after the death of Zero, Chu Zihang, and the three brothers and sisters of Genji...,, emm, it is very likely to attract a lot of criticism.

The combination of the two makes the protagonist hesitant and hesitant.

③ The problem of perspective.

I originally planned to try the group portrait writing method in the Dragon Race copy to pave the way for the next copy of the fish frying man brawl.

After all, there are 7 fish frying men, and some of them are set up to be quite fierce.

What you fill a subspace cesspool, I fill a sword world, the magnetic field man shatters destiny, he is in the mechanical realm...

It's a pity that the pond in the Dragon Race copy is too small, and it feels like the protagonist is entertaining himself, which does not match the previous personality characteristics.

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Opinion Collection

In the future, the Fish Blast dungeon will write about the protagonist becoming stronger through experiments, and the whole life part will be closer to the diary flow of the Creator. You can refer to the rhythm of the two pictures 144-145 in this book.

And the high-end game of the Fish Blast Man Brawl will be more inclined to write appropriate group portraits and show the style of each Fish Blast Man.

What do you think?

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Opinion Collection 2

The Dragon Tribe Volume was originally planned to have 20 pictures.

If you agree to cut it to 10 pictures, please post your opinion in this chapter.

If you agree to cut it to 5 pictures, please post your opinion in this chapter.

If you agree to cut it to 2-3 pictures and end it tomorrow, please post your opinion in this chapter.

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It is my fault that this volume is not well written.

I will not make excuses or reasons. I will stand at attention when I am beaten.

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