Ember Gun

  It is barely considered the last impression of the last scroll

   Beat the gongs and drums, it's gratifying, this book has survived the second volume. You know, I died in the second volume when I was last book. I didn't expect to be able to do it.

Then, as you can see, the second volume of this book has ended. I think what I wrote is not bad. It is at an average level. After all, the web articles need to be updated daily, and there is no room for modification, which leads to a lot of things being written. It can't be changed.

  Because I don’t know how to write about these things, I think about writing wherever I want. After all, I really like interacting with the audience.

  First of all, Lorenzo is so miserable, dead and alive, and alive and dead.

  Actually, my own understanding of abuse is.

  The abuse that everyone doesn’t like. I think this kind of thing is that the protagonist is frustrated in the process of reaching a goal and is not finished in the end. Just like Li Zongsheng's song, I think it is hard to get, this kind of people should be the most annoying.

  And the most criticized one of my last book is the abuser.

  So in order to be abusive and cool, I studied one. The protagonist was frustrated in the process of arriving, but finally completed the goal. Not only did he complete the goal, but also cut off the obstacles on the way.

  From the perspective of this chapter and the feedback, it is indeed feasible. This kind of cruel abuse is more acceptable to everyone. After all, who doesn’t love the war-damaged macho? It can be seen from the superb sales of war-damaged angels.

Let’s talk about the protagonist’s fighting and killing along the way. It doesn’t feel like an abuser. All the players who line up with Lorenzo are basically dead, and those who are not dead are half dead. .

   And in terms of settings, in fact, the current settings of the book can be considered a little revealed. As said, this is the place where the two eras meet.

One thing about some novels that I don’t like very much is that many settings beyond the worldview appear too abrupt, the steam falls, and the new era arrives. All of this requires a foreshadowing process. I think the foreshadowing is OK, and the new ones appear. The setting is not obtrusive and logical.

  Of course. Thank you "King of Light". The chariot burning in the sky in the myth is actually an airship with four engine ports. I really like the deconstruction of elements.

  There is also emotional drama.

  This is also a taboo in online literature. In order not to touch emotional drama, some older brothers even directly stated that there is no woman in the introduction.

  In fact, it is understandable. Once it is written, everyone likes it. If it is not well written, it is literary, hypocritical, and deliberately sensational, which will only make people weird and disgusting.

  So I am very restrained in writing, and try to restrain the expression of these feelings as much as possible. So far it looks pretty good.

  There are some weird background board settings.

For example, the protagonist has acquired weapon a, not that weapon a. The long story describes how awesome this weapon is, but the result is just a surprise. The following text does not appear anymore. This is pure water, so for now, what appears in this article The weapon settings are actually used in the end, not the background board settings.

  After all, this is a steampunk style. Steam needs to be made.

Next is the arrangement of the combat power setting. Personally, I like low-magic combat, because it mainly relies on not superpowers, but more variables, the weapons that appeared in the previous article, the battlefield, and A variety of factors can make the situation of the battle changeable, and it can also appear to be a bit wise.

  In fact, the trap of the last paragraph, I just want to write a sense of wit, but it still feels a lot worse.

  Of course, the low-magic setting will also give the story more direction. After all, the high-magic words, my language is a bit lacking, except that the two sides obliterate each other's avenues, I really don’t know how to describe it.

  Like the classic Japanese rpg, fireball, big fireball, super fireball, spiral red lotus burning sky, etc., this is just a word replacement, but it has no meaning.

  There is no upgrade system, no solidified strength class, so even a giant dragon, as long as the bright health bar will be beaten down by the fort, there is no absolute advantage, ordinary people have the opportunity to resist in the face of forces beyond common sense.

  I write wherever I want.

  Of course, one more thing is to use the existing settings to play flowers. One of the questions I often like to think about is how to use waste material superpowers to play flowers.

  There is also the aspect of character creation. I hope to write flesh and blood characters, which is more interesting, otherwise, like in some books, you can read it smoothly if you replace the protagonist with a talking dog.

  I need each character to have its own past and future.

Then it’s about the next volume. The next volume I expect will be very long. I will collect a lot of foreshadowings, and then dig a bigger hole to expand the world even more, but I’m a bit panicked, I’m afraid I can’t control it. , I try my best.

And the next volume is very likely to collapse. After all, an excellent story needs to be able to infer its prequel from the existing articles. If so, the next volume should be the prequel of the book instead. There are a lot of taboo flashbacks in web articles, and I try my best to grasp them.

  Some of the problems are poor information. I try to create a sense of suspense in this book, so many things cannot be named at the beginning. At this time, someone will say something is unreasonable... There is no way.

  Of course, there are a lot of taboo books on the Internet, and everyone who can read this must be a fellow.

  When the book was put on the shelves, it was terribly outrageous. It was ordered at 150 or 200. This is a hit in the Internet world, and it is a net article first Dara! But so far, with your support, the book has reached 860 orders, and there are two leaders.

  Do you know how awesome this is? If you don't have a recommendation, it's a big leap in class, and you have soared to Kshatriya from a smasher. Did I cry for you?

  Currently, my body is not very good. When I have spare capacity, I will try my best to add more!

  So thank you very much here. Without your support, Lorenzo might be in the shelling, and then open a new book 23333

  In the end, this is the case. In order to live up to you, I will conceive the next plot carefully.

  (End of this chapter)