Dragon Ball: I, Mr. Satan, am invincible!

"Tayisi, you don't wear so cool clothes, do you?"

Tayisi is indeed Bulma's sister.

The two sisters have many similarities in their living habits.

For example, in the spaceship, both of them like to wear cooler clothes.

The space in Taiyisi's small spaceship is limited.

The two of them are like seeing each other when they look up.

The one and a half month voyage has just begun, and Taiyisi no longer regards Mark as an outsider.

After being told by Mark, Taiyisi was not shy at all.

"Tsk, this is my spaceship, I don't care, but you still care?"

"Little Mark, are you a man? Hehe..."

Fiddling with the computer in her hand, Taiyisi teased Mark while reading a novel.

At the beginning, the two were not familiar with each other.

Taiyisi behaved steadily in front of Mark.

After these two days of contact, Taiyisi gradually let go of her nature.

She is not a quiet person!

"Tayisi, you haven't married yet, can you be more ladylike and stop pretending to be a female hooligan!"

You can say Mark is bald, but you can never say Mark is young!

Recently entered puberty, Mark has already matured where he should be.

Mark directly responded to Taisi's behavior that was almost teasing him.

"Only ladies can get married? Who stipulated that?"

"It's a pity that you are a little young, otherwise I would have wronged myself and married you!"

Tayisi smiled with her hands on her cheeks, talking nonsense to Mark.

Mark was also happy to hear this, and said without thinking: "That's great! I don't like flat-chested girls."

"Mark!!! You bastard!!!"

With a snap, she swiped the tablet in her hand directly on Mark's chest.

Taisi felt bad all over!

With her hands on her waist, her eyebrows raised, her eyes stared at Mark viciously, as if she wanted to eat him.

"Hehe, just kidding... Actually, I'm not a vulgar person. I never judge people by appearance. Besides, Taisi, you are very beautiful!"

Tais is Bulma's sister after all, so she is one of us.

Mark didn't want to make the relationship too stiff, so he smiled and gave Taisi a way out.

As expected, Taisi's frown gradually relaxed after hearing this, but she still looked angry.

"Don't joke with me like this in the future!"

After adjusting herself for a while, Taisi squeezed out a word from her teeth.

After finishing the words, Taisi twisted her body and pouted and ignored Mark.

However, Mark didn't take this little episode to heart.

Taisi was in a bad mood for a few days, but slowly returned to her optimistic appearance.

The space in the small spacecraft is limited, and there is no way to install a sleeping device.

Mark doesn't know how to meditate with his eyes closed like Krillin.

Mark, who had nothing to do, had nothing to do except sleeping, reading magazines and novels.

It was similar for Tais.

The two of them played by themselves and soon fell into a state of boredom.

"This novel is so boring!"

"The protagonist is smooth, the supporting characters are safe, and the villains are harmonious. What's the point of writing it!"

Novels in the Dragon Ball world are very boring.

Mark was very angry when he read it, and Tais saw that Mark was talking very well.

She couldn't help but be attracted by his remarks, picked up the novel that Mark had thrown on the ground, and read it word by word.

To be honest, Tais thought that the content of this novel was much better than what she wrote.

"Mark, why should the protagonist be unsuccessful? Isn't it good for the supporting characters to be safe? And the villains may also become good, right?"

Tais couldn't help but finally said all the doubts in her heart!

When asked by Taisi, Mark was stunned at first, and then he thought that the older single woman in front of him was a failed writer.

Anyway, he was free, so Mark acted as a teacher and began to teach Taisi!

"Tais, the protagonist is the core of a book. If he does nothing, the story is doomed to be uneventful!"

"If the story is uneventful and bland, readers will find it boring when reading it, and have no expectations and no motivation to continue reading!"

"After flipping through the beginning, they will decisively put down the novel and look for more exciting stories to read!"

"So, the protagonist must not be bland when setting it up!"

"The same goes for supporting characters. If a few supporting characters don't die, what's the point?"

"If the supporting characters are safe and sound, how can the protagonist interact with them?"

"Without interaction, there is naturally no way to unfold the side plot, so how can the story be exciting?"

"And the villain! He is destined to be defeated by the protagonist!"

"A villain must appear in the first chapter!"

"Kill him! Lay the groundwork, the protagonist becomes stronger and then continues to encounter more and stronger villains!"

"It's fun to keep defeating villains! I call this the golden chapter writing method!"

Speaking of novels, Mark directly talked about the failed writing method of online novels!

In the Dragon Ball world, there is currently no concept of online novels.

Mark's theory is a brainless and universal routine in his world.

Now telling Tais directly opens the door to a new world for her!

Tais was confused and confused at the beginning, but gradually her eyes became bright!

However, although she gained a lot, she still had many questions.

"Mark, this is the novel I wrote, can you help me see if there is any problem? "

After thinking about it, Taisi took out a not-so-thick novel from the locker.

The cover is very beautiful, but Jack's appearance is somewhat unworthy of the cover.

"The Adventures of the Galactic Patrol? ! ! "

Mark took the novel and read out the title directly.

Then, he began to read it page by page.

After a while, Mark finished the whole novel with a strong sense of complaint.

Seeing Mark's constipated face, Taisi asked in a low voice: "I know I wrote it very badly, but I want to know where the problem is! Please enlighten me!"

The novel written by Taisi calls itself a science fiction adventure novel.

But in Mark's opinion, the positioning of this book itself is wrong.

"Tais, for earthlings, the vastness of the universe is fascinating, but for most cosmic people, the science fiction part you wrote is their daily life. Strictly speaking, the science fiction you define is not for them! ”

“As for adventure, the daily activities of the Galactic Patrol cannot be counted as adventure, this is their duty.”

“In that case, the biggest problem with this novel is that it is not accurately positioned!”

“For aliens, the sci-fi parts are not sci-fi, and the adventure parts are mediocre.”

“It is natural that the response will not be good if it is published like this. If this book is published on Earth, it may be more suitable!”

“However, the protagonist must be changed, because Jake is not famous on Earth!”

Mark pointed out the problems one by one, and Tais nodded like a chicken eating rice.

At the end, she frowned and asked: “If not Jake, who should I write about?”

“Me!”

Mark said concisely!