Doomsday Game.

Chapter 785

Because Chu Yan quit the game before he finished playing, Long Shuang'er and Shen Mengyun hadn't finished the game yet when he came out.

When he walked out of the room, there was no one in the living room.

There was someone in the kitchen, but when he got closer, he saw Miss Lulu, who was humming a little tune with headphones while washing vegetables and cooking skillfully.

Seeing her happy and devoted appearance, he didn't disturb her.

Just as he was about to sit back in the living room and check his phone, Nangong Jinyan happened to run down from upstairs.

She also didn't enter the game. When she saw Chu Yan, she immediately shouted to him excitedly:

"Chu Yan, you finished the game and came out? I have good news for you!"

Chu Yan was a little surprised why she was so excited, and asked casually: "What?"

"I'm angry!"

Chu Yan was confused and didn't understand what she was talking about.

"What's popular? What are you talking about?"

Seeing that he didn't understand, she calmed down and explained carefully:

"It's my novel! I asked you for advice before you entered the game. I revised it in the past two days and posted it all online at once. As a result, some people really read it, and more and more people read it. Many readers left messages in my comment area!"

"Huh?"

Chu Yan understood, but was confused.

No, it's only been a few days and you've become popular? How can it be so fast!

Chu Yan stood up and said seriously: "Come on, take me to see it."

Nangong Jinyan nodded without hesitation: "Well, come with me!"

As she said that, she took Chu Yan upstairs, and didn't think there was anything wrong with bringing a boy into her room.

After entering Nangong Jinyan's room, Chu Yan found that her room was clean and tidy, and there was a faint fragrance. The most eye-catching thing was that there were many large and small dolls in it, which was not very consistent with her iceberg beauty personality.

Entering the room of a beautiful woman, most boys would be excited, but Chu Yan had no extra thoughts. As soon as he entered the room, his eyes fell directly on her computer, thinking:

Hot? Humph! I want to see how popular you can be!

Without saying a word, he sat down in front of the computer desk. The computer was already turned on, and it was the background operation page of the novel platform, or the comment area.

He took a look and found that there were indeed hundreds of reader comments.

His heart suddenly skipped a beat.

Damn! There are so many comments just one or two days after it was published. Is it really popular?

He quickly read the comments carefully and first ruled out the suspicion that these were fake.

However, after reading for a while, he found that most of these comments were actually scolding the author, and the outrageous thing was that they gave five-star reviews while scolding.

"Stop it! Stop it! You've stabbed the child silly!"

"Damn! It was so sweet and touching at the beginning, and the ambiguity and expectations between the young couple were all written out. But the more I read it, the more it felt wrong. It turned out to be a BE ending?"

"Author, come out! Come out! If you don't change the ending, I'll come to your comment section every day to scold you!"

"Woo woo woo! What kind of regret is this! Let the hero and heroine be together, please!"

"The author's novel is very well written. Please tell me your home address so that I can send you some local specialties from our hometown. Thank you!"

...

Most of them said that the novel was too harsh. It was so sweet that it suddenly stabbed a knife into the heart and stirred it up. Many readers said that their hearts couldn't stand it.

Among them, there were some comments praising the author's excellent writing style, beautiful words, and pleasant details.

There were also some comments that looked forward to the new book and encouraged the author to continue writing.

Chu Yan took a special look and found that her book was less than 500,000 words, which was actually a short story and had been completed.

After a careful look, she found that it was the book she had written before, which had been revised and republished, and it was uploaded all at once.

Because it was just uploaded in the past two days, the actual number of readers is less than 10,000. It is far from being popular, and it is not comparable to those who have hundreds of thousands or millions of readers.

However, as a veteran in the industry, Chu Yan can certainly see the potential.

With less than 10,000 readers, there are hundreds of comments and five-star reviews in such a short period of time. The high level of discussion among readers shows that the reader retention rate is extremely high and the novel has great stickiness.

This kind of novel only needs one opportunity. When its fame gradually increases, it will be seen by more people, and then it will soar to the sky!

He looked again and found that some book friends have spontaneously recommended this book. This is also the rhythm of a big hit.

Chu Yan's psychology suddenly changed.Balanced.

Because he had never had this kind of rhythm in all the years he had been writing.

At this moment, he was thinking: Why! This is not fair!

He was so jealous that his body was torn apart, but Nangong Jinyan didn't notice it and asked cautiously:

"How is it? Is it popular? This is the first time that so many readers have left me messages! Finally someone is willing to read my novel, that's great!"

Chu Yan turned his head and glanced at her with red eyes, and replied expressionlessly:

"It's okay, as a newcomer it's not bad, but to say that it's popular to this extent, I can only say that you are too naive!"

"A truly popular book has at least millions of readers. You dare not even think about that situation, you are still far away!"

"Let's not talk about anything else, just talk about me! My worst novel has tens of thousands of readers. In short, you still need to work harder, and you must guard against arrogance and impatience, and don't be proud and conceited and lose your original heart."

Nangong Jinyan heard this and immediately nodded obediently: "Well, I know! But I didn't expect to be so popular, as long as there are readers willing to read it, I will be satisfied."

Humph! Hypocrisy! I think you've been so proud of yourself, right?

Chu Yan narrowed his eyes and looked at her quietly without saying anything, but she thought of something and said with hope:

"Chu Yan, your advice is really useful. If it weren't for you, my novel would still not be read. Can you help me take another look at the novel to see if there are any problems? I can refer to it for my next book and improve the shortcomings."

Chu Yan heard this, his eyes turned, and he immediately said seriously:

"I just took a quick look at it, and it's generally okay, but the emotions are still a little lacking in reality, but the biggest problem is..."

He paused here deliberately This made Miss Nangong more nervous: "What is it?"

Chu Yan laughed in his heart and uttered three words: "Not enough knives."

"Ah?"

Chu Yan said seriously: "Since you need a knife, just cut it to death! Cut the meat with a blunt knife in the early stage, and it's best to kill the male and female protagonists in the later stage!"

"Ah? This... will it work?"

"Yes! What's wrong? Don't you believe my suggestion?"

"Oh, okay, then I'll try the next book."

Seeing that she seemed to really accept this suggestion, Chu Yan laughed twistedly in his heart:

That's right! That's it!

You don't read brainless and cool novels, but love to read tragedies, right?

Okay! Then let you see enough!

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