Divine Lucky Star

As Wang Hao said, he tore off the first piece of paper from the script, and he said hesitantly, That's not how you pull hatred, okay? You plagiarized someone else's first sentence in the opening sentence. If you say you plagiarized, you copied it. It’s okay to be good! At the beginning of Dou Po, others ridiculed the protagonist, which is to promote hatred. The point is to point out the fact that the protagonist was a genius, and leave the audience with hope that the protagonist can rise! What did you write? The protagonist When it comes out, it’s just a waste material, and the waste material is also a waste material. The key is still a fool! A three-no personnel with no backbone, no strength and no brains, can such a person be the protagonist?

As soon as Wang Hao talked about Doupo, Lan Zihuang's eyes lit up: Keep talking, keep talking!

During this period of time, she really liked Dou Po very much, but she couldn't explain why she liked it. Now when she heard Wang Hao's analysis, she immediately took it for granted and agreed very much!

Others are also talking about——

Not to mention, it sounds quite reasonable!

Yes, yes, I felt that this plot was wrong, but I couldn't figure out why it was wrong. Now I understand!

What's wrong with the waste material? Meng Zenan quibbled: This is called a routine! The waste material is to make people more curious about how he rose. What's wrong with me?

That's why I said you didn't copy the right place! Wang Hao crumpled up the piece of paper on the script and threw it on the ground. Here’s what you’re talking about—after the protagonist gets ridiculed, he rushes to find someone to reason with, and then gets beaten. You, the protagonist, take the initiative to ask someone to do it, and you do it right away and get beaten. This is not a sense of expectation, it’s Is it called brain damage? Originally, people laughed at him for a few words, but he was just depressed. This initiative is not only depressed, but also physically damaged! He has no strength and humiliates himself. The audience can continue to watch after seeing this go down?

Yes, yes, the writing here is simply terrible! Lan Zihuang said anxiously: Then what do you think should be done here?

Today I will tell you what rhythm is! Wang Hao crumpled the second piece of paper and said, What is rhythm? It is the progress of the plot with highs and lows. There is a saying that the text looks like a mountain. I don’t like Xiping, it’s not interesting to look at a plain text, right? So the rhythm of the opening chapter needs to humiliate the protagonist first, and then point out the opportunity for his rise. This is not enough, and the protagonist has to deepen the sense of expectation— —That's why Xiao Xun'er from Dou Po appeared! Then the rise of the main character is logical, rising against the sky all the way! But what about you? What are your arrangements?

Wang Hao pulled down the third one: Yes, the character is set, but what is the identity you set? A servant's daughter, with the protagonist's childhood sweetheart—oh, by the way, I forgot to mention, you The protagonist here is also the son of a servant, so after the protagonist is beaten up, people see him as a bully, so his childhood sweetheart girlfriend is raped and the protagonist is helpless, aren't you sick?

When he said this, the entire conference room burst into laughter——

Hahahaha, this arrangement is indeed too...haha!

There is no one else in this plot, I just want to laugh when I hear it!

Yeah, looking at it this way, the protagonist is definitely full of brains. If he has no strength, he goes to fight and gets beaten all the way. It's just miserable!

With a puchi, Lan Zihuang couldn't help laughing, and said: I just said that what I saw before was wrong with this paragraph, but I couldn't tell you the specific reason. I only understand when you say that. Continue quickly. Talk!

Meng Zenan's face was livid, and he snorted, I'm called a foreshadowing. A child who has never seen the world will know the heights of heaven and earth once a movie becomes popular!

And then there's the back, Wang Hao ignored him, flipped through two pages of the script, and tore out another one: The three-year agreement in the opening chapter is to set a goal. What are you doing here? The protagonist Bai Tian Practice, practice at night, go out to fight wild animals during the day, and go home to eat at night, it can be regarded as three years of practice day and night, and then find trouble with others, it’s okay that you, the protagonist, failed to take revenge and was beaten by the enemy. It’s another time Come to the door and ask for a slap in the face!

Everyone was dumbfounded! After Wang Hao's analysis of this weird plot, it really turned out to be the case!

Meng Zenan snorted angrily, and said, Then how do you change it?

How else can you change this? Wang Hao pulled another one: If you want to change the overall structure, you have to change it from the beginning! I won't talk about you here, let's look at the back, the protagonist of the fight has the grandfather in the ring , to help the protagonist in all kinds of pretentiousness, slapping faces, stealing benefits, leapfrogging and challenging rapid cultivation! The protagonist is simply all kinds of crazy and cool! What kind of role did your expert arrange here? An old guy who has cultivated for a year , the key is that he is still disabled! It’s a problem for the protagonist to take care of him even when he’s eating normally! It’s fine to take care of him, but when the enemy comes to his door, he pissed off the enemy and lay dead by the side after he pretended to be aggressive. Beat it! A good golden finger makes you write a piece of trash!

After listening to Wang Hao's comment, everyone present burst into laughter——

Hahahahaha! This is too interesting, it's the other way around!

Yeah, the protagonist has been a scumbag all the way. He is a hard-working protagonist. No wonder Ms. Lan didn't agree to film it!

I... Meng Zenan rolled his eyes and said, I deliberately created a joke! Do you understand what a joke is?!

Aren't you joking? Wang Hao crumpled up the paper in his hand and threw it away, and continued to comment: Then you, the protagonist, was beaten up and started to practice again, and the old man continued to lie dead—by the way, you arranged Can grandpa arrange something awesome?

I can't help it! Meng Zenan roared: Dou Po is a fantasy theme, what we want to shoot is martial arts, can there be a grandfather in the ring for the martial arts theme?!

That's a good question! Wang Hao tore off another sheet with a click: In fact, the theme of martial arts is to change the name without changing the medicine! You can't make the old man in the ring, can't you make a mysterious old man? Grandpa comes every night to teach the protagonist martial arts?!

In the end, Wang Hao simply tore the script to shreds, saying: The connection of your plot is completely copying Dou Po and I don't understand it! The protagonist of Dou Po is a genius himself, and he actually has the capital to rise again! Not only that, He went from a genius to a waste because of the old man in the ring. After the old man in the ring is finally revived, he will help the protagonist rise all the way. This is the normal routine! But you, you are completely reversed , Doupa is not so cool, you are so poisonous! If this film is made according to your routine, it will definitely hit the street! You have to thank Ms. Lan for not filming this time, otherwise the loss now is not 1.8 million It's up!

Sure enough, Lan Zihuang, who was still a queen before, was almost dumbfounded at this moment, like a kitten, she was drunk all over!

My script! Seeing his script being torn to pieces, Meng Zenan stood up with a bang, trembling with anger, pointing at Wang Hao and shouting: You just tore up my script?! You You have to pay! You have to pay!

I'm sorry! Wang Hao was furious, stood up suddenly, and said angrily: It's fine if you copy all the plots, but you still haven't copied it! Do you know whose book Fights Break the Sky is from? ?!

Whose book is this book? Everyone present looked at each other in blank dismay, is there even a need to ask? Of course it is the author Tian Broadou!

Whose is it? Meng Zenan snorted, Could it be yours?

You are really right! Wang Hao pointed to his nose: This book is mine! You plagiarized in front of me, the original author, but you didn't understand the plagiarism. You still asked me to compensate you script?!

As soon as Wang Hao finished speaking, the whole scene was quiet for a while, and then completely exploded!

Damn it, Dou Break Cang Qiong is actually his book?!

This... isn't this amazing?! Hahahahaha! It's so interesting, the plagiarist actually asked the original author to pay for the script!

I can't do it anymore, life is indeed more exciting than novels, hahahahaha! What a magical turn!

Everyone below was discussing, and Lan Zihuang on the other side looked at Wang Hao, his eyes were full of little stars!

This Wang Hao is actually... the author of Fights Break the Sky?

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