Divine Lucky Star

Brothers, don't stop recommending tickets, good luck will not stop!

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Wang Hao fell asleep until three o'clock in the afternoon. He was woken up by a sudden knock on the door.

Who is it in broad daylight... Walking over to open the door, Wang Hao looked at the four porters outside the door, and asked in a daze, What's going on?

No wonder he has such an expression.

The four porters at the door moved a total of six carton boxes, large and small, and walked in as soon as Wang Hao opened the door, saying as he walked, Is it Mr. Wang? Your friend ordered a box for you. A computer was entrusted to us to deliver, may I ask where it is placed?

Computer? Wang Hao reacted instantly: Is it from that woman?

This is something you don't want in vain, anyway, we have saved her life, right?

So Wang Hao led the four of them directly to the bedroom, and the four porters directly put the carton boxes on the ground, and then began to skillfully disassemble and assemble them. While assembling, introduce to Wang Hao——

This is our company's latest product, a purely handmade executive office computer desk.

Wang Hao became more and more confused: Then... what, how much is this set of computer desk? The CEO uses it, so it's quite expensive, right? Such a set of tables and chairs cost several thousand dollars?

The porter replied, Sixty-nine thousand yuan.

Wang Hao: ... Nima, I missed a zero, shit!

After the computer table was installed, the porter began to move the computer out, and said while moving: This computer is also the best assembled computer on the market at present, all of which are assembled with the latest and most high-end parts. The case is cooled by water circulation, and the noise is the most The lowest one inside. The display is the latest 36-inch curved display on the market, and the keyboard is also the latest human mechanical keyboard...

Wang Hao: ...

This time we have to fight, such a set of computers is not cheap at first glance, let’s talk about it!

This set of computers cost 20,000 yuan? Wang Hao asked in a low voice.

Then Wang Hao was stunned by the words of the porter: This set of water-cooled chassis is 20,000 yuan, and if it is all added up, it will be about 80,000 yuan.

Wang Hao: ...

Nima! Is this too exaggerated? ! Our original computer, from the chassis to the monitor to the mouse and keyboard, was only 3,000 yuan! As a result, the shotgun was replaced by a cannon in a blink of an eye, isn't it! No, no, this is not a shotgun for a cannon, this is a slingshot for a nuclear bomb!

The porter installed it very quickly, and soon the full set of tables and chairs, computer and case were completed, and then he smiled and said, Okay, everything is done, sir, you can try it.

At this time, Wang Hao just pressed the power button in a daze.

And then about five seconds or so...

365 security guards reminded: Congratulations, your computer has defeated 99.99% of the users in the country, and I am hereby conferring on you the title of seven-star super magic machine!

Wang Hao is excited! Wang Hao is rippling! Nima, I have never touched such an awesome computer in my whole life!

Sitting on the rosewood computer chair carved by pure workmanship, Wang Hao looked at the huge monitor, it couldn't be more enjoyable, isn't it?

As a computer enthusiast, what is more attractive than a super magic machine? !

After sending the four porters away, Wang Hao quickly took out his mobile phone and planned to send a message to the woman, but as soon as he opened Weixin, Wang Hao saw the woman's message: Is there any more of the novel you wrote?

Has she watched Fights Break Sphere?

Wang Hao, who originally planned to say thank you to her, suddenly withdrew his hand—now there is really nothing behind Fights Break Sphere! Only the first chapter!

Forget it, let's not reply, let's see if Jinsuihua has written the following chapters!

Hurry up to open QQ and log in. It may be that the car accident that happened today almost used up the unlucky attribute, so as soon as Wang Hao logged in to QQ, he saw Jin Sunflower's head flashing suddenly!

Jin Kuihua: Brother Ritian, what I wrote today has a lot of feeling! I wrote 15,000 words in one go! The writing is so smooth, Brother Ritian, please help me to see how I am writing!

I rely on! Writing 15,000 words a day can't be more enjoyable, isn't it? !

Wang Ritian: Success, don't worry, I'll take a look first!

Hurrying to receive the file, Wang Hao couldn't wait to open it and read it.

It has to be said that there is absolutely no problem with Jin Sunflower's writing style, and even Wang Hao can be sure that it is much better than the writing style of many great gods before the dice of luck changed the world. But after reading these more than 10,000 words, Wang Hao always felt that something was missing.

Wang Ritian: The plot is not bad, and the process is similar, but I always feel like something is missing, just not having fun.

Jin Sunflower: Ah?! Isn't it? Brother Ritian, what should we do then?

Wang Ritian: Don't worry, I'll take a look.

Jin Kuihua: Cheng Chengcheng, brother Ritian must point out the problem!

Wang Hao hurriedly read the part written by Jinsuihua from the beginning again. This time he read it more carefully and quickly found the problem.

Wang Ritian: Nalan Yanran appeared here, the foreshadowing is not enough! What about the hatred?! How can you be happy if there is no foreshadowing and if you don't pull the hatred and then slap your face? You have to write out what will happen after being divorced!

Golden Sunflower: Huh? I've paved the way here!

Wang Ritian: I know you have laid the groundwork, but the groundwork is not enough! Look, who is the protagonist? Although he was originally a genius, he is now a waste material, right? Then a genius came to cancel the marriage of a waste material, and never Is there a problem logically?

Jin Sunflower: It should be... no...

Wang Ritian: What is supposed to be, there is no such thing. Think about it, for example, you are an otaku, and your family background is not outstanding, but the woman is a family worth hundreds of millions, and she looks like a star. Come to cancel your marriage Is there a problem? No, right? So how can we make readers think that the protagonist is really wronged by the divorce, and this is the most important thing! Readers will feel good about the protagonist's slap in the face when they feel wronged!

Jin Kuihua: Kneel to Brother Ritian! What Brother Ritian said makes sense! Then how should I write it here?

Wang Ritian: You have to write down the specific reason why you are retiring, and the impact it will have on the protagonist and his father. Why did the heroine resign? Because she is awesome, and because she was trained by the sect and can't see it. It’s because I’m the main character that I’m retiring the engagement. But it’s not enough, look, what occasion is this? This is a clan meeting, and the patriarch’s son was annulled in public, so is he still the patriarch? Right? There’s one more thing , How did Nalan Yanran come this time? He was accompanied by a tall, rich and handsome man! This is simply a demonstration! It was used to compare with the protagonist! You have to portray this tall, rich and handsome image! Look at you now, this Gao Fushuai has no sense of existence at all! A Gao Fushuai who has no sense of existence still pulls out hatred?!