Debut After Eight Years

105. Are there any flaws? Still not admitting defeat? Then look at my poem again! (seeking subscript

While eating the breakfast made by his mother, Liu Shengnan looked at a book in front of him, and looked up at the computer screen from time to time.

On the computer screen, it was Wang Qian's Weibo page that was displayed!

hum...

A new Weibo message appeared.

Liu Shengnan glanced lightly, his eyes gradually lit up, he put aside the book spread out in front of him, brought the computer over, and looked at it carefully.

Two orioles sing in green willows, and a line of egrets ascends to the blue sky.

The window contains the snow of thousands of years in Xiling, and the gate is anchored by the boat of Dongwu thousands of miles away.

The corner of Liu Shengnan's mouth was smiling, and the admiration light in his eyes became more and more intense, and he said softly: It's really a good poem.

A genius who graduated as a graduate student in literature.

Liu Shengnan quickly understood a lot from this poem.

Even if it is compared with those classic ancient poems and seven-character quatrains compiled into textbooks, it is not bad at all.

especially!

Wang Qian's last few words of advice to Tang Hepeng made her very happy.

He hasn't changed.

Still so indomitable!

only.

It looks like there are more tricks.

interesting.

Regardless of whether Tang Hepeng was his graduate tutor or not, Liu Shengnan quickly liked and forwarded it, and said, Good poem. This is the best seven-character quatrain ancient poem I have ever seen since I was studying. Professor Wang, it's amazing. Although the works of my teacher Professor Tang are considered good works now, there is obviously a huge gap between them and Professor Wang!

Tell the truth, send.

Liu Shengnan recited these four poems several times, and the more he read it, the more he felt it was so good.

Especially the last two sentences!

In her opinion, it is comparable to those ancient famous sentences!

As soon as this Weibo was posted, it was immediately liked and forwarded by many of her fans, and there were countless comments.

Sheng Nan is indeed a straightforward girl, she doesn't save face to her teacher, and is ruthless! However, I have to say that I, a person who doesn't understand anything, can also see the huge gap between these two poems. Professor Wang's work It's obviously better than Professor Tang's, but I don't know exactly what's good about it.

Professor Wang's poem, I feel very refreshed after reading it, and I support Shengnan.

Shengnan, do you really want to learn to write poetry from Professor Wang? Why, hurry up and release a new song. My roommate has a week to live. In the last week, he wants to listen to your new song, otherwise he will die.

The window contains the snow in the Xiling Mountains, and the gate is anchored by the Dongwu Wanli Ship! What a beautiful poem, absolutely amazing! Professor Wang is really amazing.

The two are obviously not in the same class, and Professor Wang wins.

...

Tang Hepeng and Bai Hua sat in front of the computer.

The moment I saw Wang Qian release the message.

The two read it quickly.

Then.

Both of them stared at the screen in silence.

Bai Hua muttered in a low voice.

The window contains the snow of thousands of years in Xiling, and the gate is anchored by the boat of Dongwu thousands of miles away. This sentence is really well written.

Bai Hua couldn't help admiring.

This is the honesty of a literati.

Tang Hepeng's hand holding the mouse trembled.

Bai Hua was startled, knowing that she might have irritated Professor Tang, she hurriedly said in a low voice, Professor Tang, this may be a poem written by Wang Qian a long time ago, and it may have been carefully crafted by him for a long time, which is why there are such sentences. .”

Tang Hepeng's eyes were still fixed on the screen, and he said in a difficult tone: Even if it took him ten years to write it, it is dozens of times better than mine! This ancient poem with seven character quatrains is really wonderful!

With his insight, he can realize the excellence of this poem even more.

It is not an exaggeration to say that it can be passed down for thousands of years!

Especially in the modern society, it is as amazing as thriving.

Let's not talk about it.

In nearly fifty years.

There is one thing to say.

All the ancient poems that have been created appear ordinary in front of this poem, and there is no possibility that they can be equal.

Those four simple sentences made him feel extremely important.

Bai Hua comforted: Professor, maybe Wang Qian's family is a scholarly family, so he has a profound background, and he may have a special talent in ancient poetry, so he can write such a masterpiece. It is possible that his modern poetry is very ordinary. Yes. Can you try sending a modern poem?

Bai Hua knows that Tang Hepeng is a face-saving and stubborn person!

Being slapped in the face by Wang Qian's anti-taunt in public, he will definitely be angry for a long time, and even depressed.

Therefore, he made a suggestion to let Tang Hepeng use modern poetry to regain a little bit of face!

Post a good modern poem and win once, and then it can be said to be a draw, shake hands and make peace, exchange ideas, and make concessions!

Zhejiang University is also in Xihu City, and it is also a sister institution with Zheyin. The professors of the two schools competed in poetry, and each had its own victory or defeat. It can be passed down as a good story...

Tang Hepeng's eyes lit up, and he quickly rummaged through the notebook, and within a minute, he found a page, and said with some confidence: Okay, then this one!

Bai Hua looked at Tang Hepeng's notebook curiously, and said softly, Professor, let's talk politely to Wang Qian, he is also the professor of Zheyin!

Tang Hepeng nodded, and seriously began typing this modern poem called Missing Love!

My missed love is like a forgotten toy in childhood.

The sweetness of love has been buried in memory...

...

More than a dozen lines of modern poetry were quickly entered by Tang Hepeng.

Then, check that there are no errors, and send!

then.

He considered his tone again, and typed: Professor Wang's literary talent is as good as his musical talent, which surprised me. This seven-character quatrain is a little bit better than my work, but there are still some flaws in it. When we have the opportunity to meet, let’s talk in detail.”

Recently, I wrote a modern poem, and I asked Professor Wang to taste it and make progress together.

I looked at it carefully and found that I was neither humble nor overbearing. I not only praised Wang Qian's works, but also said that the flaws in his works showed my own level, and I was very satisfied.

Tang Hepeng clicked send!

As soon as it was sent out, Tang Hepeng's Weibo was immediately reposted by many onlookers, most of whom were reposted to Wang Qian.

And Wang Qian went out to buy breakfast at the moment.

So, no reply.

wait a while!

Seeing that Wang Qian's Weibo is extremely quiet.

A smile appeared on Tang Hepeng's face, and he said to Bai Hua: It seems that Wang Qian really doesn't have much talent and research on modern poetry. After all, he is not a student of literature, but an actor learning to perform.

Between the words, he didn't like the so-called actor very much, with some disdain.

Bai Hua also nodded: Probably yes, a person's talent and energy are limited. Liu Shengnan is such a genius, and he doesn't like science at all.

Tang Hepeng waited for more than ten minutes. Seeing that Wang Qian hadn't replied, he couldn't help typing and said: Professor Wang, if you don't understand anything about this piece of work, you can ask me, and I will explain it to you.

send!

Bai Hua just wanted to stop Tang Hepeng from saying this, but seeing the complacent look on Tang Hepeng's face, she knew it was useless to stop him.

...

Seeing Tang Hepeng's words, Liu Shengnan pouted and said in a low voice, Professor Tang really hasn't changed at all. He feels so good about himself. Wang Qian must have been delayed by other things, not because he couldn't understand. This simple modern poem of yours!

After being disappointed and suspicious of Wang Qian just now, he was broken.

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Liu Shengnan had more trust and expectations for Wang Qian in his heart.

She didn't believe that Wang Qian was stumped, or defeated like an ostrich and kept silent.

There must be other things that have delayed it, otherwise even if it fails, it will be faced calmly.

Ding!

Wang Qian's Weibo has been updated.

Liu Shengnan's eyes lit up in an instant, and with great anticipation in his heart, he hurriedly clicked to read.

...

Li Qingyao and Yang Yu were also sitting on the sofa in the living room, watching Wang Qian's Weibo.

Yang Yu said in a low voice: Yaoyao, when did Wang Qian become so talented? Why didn't you see it before? You have been married to him for so many years, have you noticed?

Li Qingyao thought for a while, then shook her head sadly: He used to be a little bit against the entertainment industry, and I didn't care too much about him. Later, he said he wanted to start a business, and I didn't care about him.

Yang Yu asked curiously: So, he opened Haidilao? The annual income is hundreds of millions? Didn't Liu Lihua tell you that he opened two ordinary hot pot restaurants, and the money he earned is not even enough for your cosmetics for a year of?

Li Qingyao shook her head: I don't know. I divorced him not because of how much money he made. It's just that I can't go on. Why bother each other, it's better to end it earlier and liberate each other?

Yang Yu gave a thumbs up: You are all free and easy. Huh? Why is Wang Qian so quiet at the moment? Is he stumped by that Professor Tang? This modern poem looks very powerful. It's about love. Read it. It feels good to wake up.

Li Qingyao said softly: General!

hum...

The computer beeps.

Wang Qian's Weibo posted new information.

The two hurriedly looked down!

...

Wang Qian went downstairs to buy breakfast.

When he came back, Qin Xuerong had already got up and was taking a shower. When he saw Wang Qian came back from buying breakfast, he smiled happily, his eyes narrowed into two lines.

After washing up in a hurry, Qin Xuerong ran over, smiled and lay on Wang Qian's body, picked up the meat buns and ate them: You got up so early today?

After getting acquainted with Wang Qian, she knew that Wang Qian usually likes to sleep late.

Therefore, she hoped that she could stay with Wang Qian and help him deal with things, so that Wang Qian could have time to sleep in.

However, the recent ones are still relatively early.

Today, the earliest.

Wang Qian also looked at the computer while eating: I have invested tens of millions, so I have to act like I care about it, otherwise people will think that I have too much money to burn.

Qin Xuerong was laughed at by Wang Qian: Isn't this a good start?

She also read the report for the first time just now, and she is very satisfied with the current data!

The next step is to see if we can keep this data.

Seeing Wang Qian operating on Weibo, Qin Xuerong took a closer look curiously and widened his eyes: Who is this professor from Zhejiang University? Writing poems with you? Why?

Wang Qian explained a little bit.

Qin Xuerong's face was full of shock, and she felt that she had missed the plot of twenty episodes: Liu Shengnan wants to ask you to learn to write poetry as a teacher? So, her teacher is not willing? Want to teach you to write poetry? Are you fighting?

Wang Qian smiled and said: It's not a fight, he thinks he's very good, I just let him recognize the reality.

Qin Xuerong looked at the seven-character ancient poem released by Wang Qian just now, and said in surprise: Your poem is too good, anyone who comes here has to recognize the reality! However, he seems to have shifted his strategy, playing with you Modern poetry? Do you know it?

Qin Xuerong looked at Wang Qian proudly, curious and expectant.

Wang Qian rubbed his chin, thought for a second, and then started typing.

Love is the eternal artistic topic of poetry. I don't want to say how your works are taught by Tang.

Professor Tang, how do you like my work?

mistake

I walked through the south of the Yangtze River

The face waiting in the seasons is like the opening and falling of a lotus

If the east wind does not come, the catkins in March will not fly

Your heart is like a small lonely city

The streets are just like bluestones towards the evening

The sound of footsteps will not sound, and the curtain of spring in March will not be lifted

Your heart is a little casement closed

My Dada's horseshoe is a beautiful mistake

I am not a human being

It's a passerby.

above!

This poem was written on a whim, Professor Tang, please point me out, and by the way, point out the flaws in my last seven-character quatrain poem, so that I can make progress! I think Professor Tang will satisfy my little one. Ask for it.

send!

Wang Qian was about to see everyone's reaction.

but.

A hot red lip with a greasy meat bun was already attached to his cheek, and he said in a short breath: This poem is really amazing. I...

Qin Xuerong looked at Wang Qian with misty eyes.

Wang Qian held him in his arms and kissed him on the forehead: Hey, have a good breakfast. This is the office.

office?

For some reason, a trace of excitement and eagerness flashed in Qin Xuerong's eyes, and he immediately grinned and got under the desk.

Wang Qian hurriedly pulled it up: Let's go back and play again. I'm working here. Xu Zhongfei will come over anytime, be good!

Qin Xuerong was a little disappointed, said oh, and then continued to eat breakfast on Wang Qian's body, admiring: Your poem is really beautiful.

After all, ancient poetry requires the ability to appreciate!

No matter how good ancient poetry is, let ordinary people read it, but it is actually not easy to see its beauty in a short time.

Therefore, most people know some of the inner beauty expressed in ancient poems only after reading and appreciating them.

but.

Modern poetry is different.

Compared with ancient poetry, modern poetry is written very straightforwardly.

When poets write modern poems, many of them are bold and straightforward, even frantically probing on the edge of harmony, or just going deep into harmony!

Therefore, as long as people who can read and write read the modern poem once or twice, they can roughly understand the meaning of it, as well as understand the good and bad of this modern poem!

This song is wrong.

It is clear.

Qin Xuerong felt good after reading it.

Especially the last two sentences of the question, after reading it, there is an inexplicable feeling of wanting to cry.

want to cry!

So sad.

That Jiangnan woman who misunderstood must be very disappointed!

And Wang Qian exploded instantly when he saw his Weibo.

Many people don’t really understand the ancient poem just now, but they just have a feeling of ignorance, and a feeling that it is obviously much better than Tang Hepeng’s works, and then bragging with everyone can make it appear that they understand it. Many people simply kept silent and said nothing.

And this modern poem.

Everyone understands!

Unless illiterate.

Wooooow, I actually cried.

So touched, so sad, so disappointed! I was completely brought into this poem, and I can imagine how disappointed and sad the protagonist is.

Professor Wang, this poem is much better than Professor Tang's. I don't feel much after reading Professor Tang's modern poems. It's full of sadness and emotion!

Good poetry, good poetry, good poetry! Professor Wang's literary talent is too amazing.

Where's Professor Tang? Come and comment!

...

Except for these fans, the fans are talking like crazy.

Some celebrities who watched the excitement couldn't help interacting with Wang Qian.

Liu Jifeng: Brother, these two works of yours have directly established your position in the Chinese literary world. To be honest, I didn't understand the ancient poem just now, but it must be a good work. I understand this modern poem, really. That's great. Brother is awesome.

Liu Jifeng is also an upright boy, and he also openly shouted directly to his senior brother, seeming very close.

Sophie: Professor, boss, I love this poem so much. Next time I see you, can I ask for the autograph of this poem?

There are also several small star artists interacting with Wang Qian!

even!

Among them is a big name that even Wang Qian can't think of.

Li Qingyao.

Li Qingyao also reposted and liked Wang Qian's poem, and posted two words: Good poem!

This is the first public interaction between Li Qingyao and Wang Qian since they registered on Weibo respectively.

Of course, Wang Qian hasn't replied yet, and the reply is considered mutual interaction.

For the time being, it can only be regarded as Li Qingyao acting on her own.

Wang Qian was a little surprised when he saw that Li Qingyao had sent him a message, and immediately replied to Li Qingyao with only two words: Thank you.

The interaction is completed, and it is very simple for one person to move and it is over.

He replied to Liu Jifeng again: Junior brother, I have won the award, I have won the award, keep a low profile, low profile.

Liu Jifeng replied immediately: Understood, understood, then let me put it another way, brother is awesome!

Wang Qian was speechless to Liu Jifeng.

Liu Shengnan also sent a message requesting interaction: What a beautiful, sad poem! Professor, I also quietly wrote some modern poems myself, but compared with your mistake, they are all rubbish and unsightly.

Wang Qian replied to Liu Shengnan: I'm sorry, it's so-so. There should be some flaws. I'm still waiting for Professor Tang's guidance to make progress.

...

Under Tang Hepeng's Weibo, it was unprecedentedly lively at the moment.

He has a total of tens of thousands of followers, which has never been so lively before. More than 100,000 people left messages below, many times more than the total number of all his messages in the past few years.

Professor Tang, give advice to Professor Wang, Professor Wang wants to improve!

Professor Tang, please comment on Professor Wang's poem professionally and point out the flaws.

Professor Tang, why don't you speak...

Professor Tang, I personally think that your work is a few grades worse than Professor Wang's.

Professor Tang, quickly point out the flaws in Professor Wang's two works.

...

After Tang Hepeng and Bai Hua finished reading Wang Qian's poem, they were silent for more than a minute, neither of them said anything.

In the office, it was eerily quiet.

Tang Hepeng's eyes were wide open, staring at the computer screen, there was still some disbelief in his eyes.

He didn't believe that Wang Qian could write such a good modern poem!

Okay, it made him want to tear up the notebooks he had accumulated over the past ten years.

but.

He couldn't say it.

because.

Say it.

He loses.

so.

He kept his mouth shut and didn't speak.

His eyes were fixed on Wang Qian's poems, and he wanted to try to find some flaws.

Bai Hua didn't know how to comfort Tang Hepeng now, so she could only keep silent and watch the situation as a spectator for the time being.

Tang Hepeng tapped the keyboard slowly with both hands, and replied to Wang Qian: It's not bad, it's a little bit better than my modern poem, but there are still some flaws, but the flaws are not hidden, it can be considered a good work Wait for me to sort out the flaws in your two works, and communicate with you next time, maybe it will help you.

send.

Professor Tang still refused to admit defeat.

No matter how good or beautiful your writing is.

I'd say it's flawed!

What can you do!

There is no absolute good or bad in words.

Therefore, since ancient times, there has been a saying that there is no first in literature.

No matter how good your work is, I just don’t admit it.

I just think your work is flawed.

what can you do

To admit that your work is a little bit better than mine is to give Tian a big face!

Tang Hepeng looked serious, and was about to turn off the computer and leave the office. He didn't want to read or play Weibo anymore.

These people on Weibo are too bad.

but!

A message jumped out immediately.

Wang Qian's latest news from him has been sent again.

Oh? Professor Tang thinks there are still flaws in my composition? So, what are the flaws? Please ask Professor Tang to teach me right now. I want to improve quickly.

I had some thoughts just now, and it's also about love.

Professor Tang, take a look at my work, is there any flaws? Please express it!

Seeing this, Bai Hua hurriedly got up and said, Professor Tang, why don't we go for a walk first?

Although he hasn't seen any works written by Wang Qian, he is afraid that Tang Hepeng will be provoked by Wang Qian again.

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