Cyber Daming

From May 23 to November 24, Vinci's first book was finally finished.

There are many problems and flaws, so it is more accurate to describe it as an apology letter rather than a thank you speech.

First, about the ending.

From the upload at noon today to now, Vinci did not dare to click on the comments. He took a peek and cursed.

I would like to apologize to all the readers here. (Don't curse, don't curse.)

Many friends in the group said that the ending was too sloppy.

In fact, I have my own thoughts on this point.

In my expectation, Li Jun was just a warrior. His initial goal was just to survive, but as he met more and more people, he had more and more things that he couldn't give up, and he was reluctantly involved in Zhang Fengyue's reform.

Yes, in my opinion, he was actually unwilling to participate in it.

But he saw too much slavery and injustice, which forced him to stand up and resist.

This may also be Li Jun's instinct as a time traveler.

But he did it here, which was enough.

Later on, how the sequence will develop, where the Ming Dynasty will go, who will take over the endgame, and what kind of world will evolve into in the future, these issues should not be considered by him.

If the story is written further, it has nothing to do with Li Jun.

He just ignited many sparks. As for how to spread the prairie fire in the future, it should be Zhang Siyuan, Yang Bai Ze, Zhao Qingxia, Chen Qisheng, Zou Sijiu and others.

So Wenxi chose to stop here.

Of course!

There must be a reason for everyone to scold. It is Wenxi's problem that he did not make the masters feel comfortable. He stood at attention and was scolded, and never said anything back.

Second, about the process.

At the beginning, Wenxi actually didn't know what kind of story he would write, nor did he know how to write it.

In order to sign the contract, he simply mixed everything.

So many readers said at the beginning that it was a stitched monster, with a little bit of east and a little bit of west, which was very right.

But this also caused the book to have an irreparable congenital deficiency.

Problem 1: The quality of the plot declined.

The reason is that there is no outline. I just pick up my pen after get off work every day, and often I know the plot only a few hours ahead of the readers.

This is also the main reason why many readers reported that the story went off track and the quality declined after the Japanese area.

In summary, there is no good planning.

It is also due to my lack of ability. I have never written such a long story before. I don’t know how to continue writing later, so I can only diverge freely according to the character’s temperament.

Problem 2: The sequence setting is rough.

Many times, I was promoted by changing my name, and I didn’t write any changes or abilities clearly. The crucial rituals were also written very vaguely.

I know these problems myself, and I have tried to make up for them, but I still lack too much, and it is difficult to turn back.

Problem 3: The data of the mastery points is wrong.

This is purely a personal shortcoming, and I really can’t figure it out.

Problem 4: Too few updates and too many leave.

This is because I am a part-time worker, and my hand speed is quite slow, so the update volume has not increased.

Even when I was recommended, I took leave and didn’t update. Now I regret it when I think about it.

In the future, Vinci will sleep less, work more, and update 1,000 more, not just 500!

Third, about the beginning.

When I wrote "When the first drop of night rain fell from the sky, Chengdu Prefecture, located in the southwest of the Ming Empire, finally began to wake up" in May last year, I never thought that I could write a book with nearly 10,000 subscriptions (9950 average subscriptions, very painful). There is nothing much to say, only gratitude.

Vinci, together with Lao Li, Lao Chen, and Lao Zou, would like to thank all the readers for their support.

I also hope that all the gentlemen can continue to support Vinci in the next book. The advantages will continue to be carried forward, and the shortcomings will be compensated as much as possible.

In this year and a half, if Vinci writes something that makes you dissatisfied, I hope you can forgive me.

If there is any story that can make you smile, Vinci will be satisfied.

The last sentence, to use the movie lines often used in this book.

You are very important to me.