Comprehensive Comics: Yinglili, This Is How The Twin Tails Are Used

As soon as the morning class is over.

Bai Yu followed the agreement and came to the service department.

As soon as he opened the door, he saw that Kasumigaoka Shiu and Yukinoshita Yukino had already arrived.

"Thank you for the promotion."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's burgundy eyes flashed with a hint of gratitude.

Early in the morning, her editor called her and told her that she had been enthusiastically recommended by a very popular book artist.

Although the effect is not yet known, the editor said that it is likely to bring about a turnaround for her works that are about to be cut.

After knowing this, Kasumigaoka Shiyu naturally knew that Bai Yu did it.

She was also very grateful to this junior student who had helped her seriously.

"I have promised to Mr. Hiratsuka for this commission." Bai Yu chuckled and said nonchalantly.

"No."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu shook his head, "Although Mr. Hiratsuka asked you to do this, in the final analysis, it's me who has troubled you."

"I owe you a favor for this matter. If you have any requests, you can always ask me."

Of course, there is no ambiguous emotion in these words, it is just a normal communication between classmates.

After experiencing this incident, Kasumigaoka Shiyu obviously had a very good impression of Bai Yu and was grateful to him.

But not to the point of developing a good impression.

Considering that the two had only known each other for less than a day, Kasumigaoka Shiyu's true nature would not be revealed in front of an unfamiliar person like Bai Yu.

She still looks like a cool senior.

Bai Yu smiled slightly and did not say any unnecessary polite words.

This was exactly what he wanted. After all, he would really ask Kasumigaoka Shiyu for missions in the future.

Of course he wouldn't be polite about this favor. After all, he also exchanged favors with Ying Lili.

Bai Yu would not do thankless things. Even a beauty like Kasumigaoka Shiyu could not be treated like a licking dog who paid for nothing.

"After you two have finished communicating, let's go back to the client."

Yukinoshita Yukino, who had been silent until now, interrupted the communication between the two with a cold opening.

But while she was speaking, her cold eyes couldn't help but glare at Bai Yu in shame and annoyance.

Apparently, after she went back last night, she investigated the matter of the book.

After knowing what kind of book it was, Yukinoshita Yukino felt extremely embarrassed. Naturally, she had no good feelings towards Bai Yu, the person who proposed the book.

He snorted in his heart.

Sure enough, male high school students are full of obscene creatures, even a guy like Bai Yu who has excellent grades is no exception.

"That's right."

Bai Yu smiled slightly and took the initiative to sit aside.

It’s better to get the talisman reward as early as possible.

As for the contemptuous look in Yukinoshita Yukino's eyes, he would not take it seriously.

"Let me tell you first."

Yukinoshita Yukino cleared her throat and looked serious, "Last night, I carefully studied my senior's work, and I have to say that it is indeed a very excellent and rare book for newcomers."

Yukinoshita Yukino's pickiness and ability to speak out words of praise are enough to prove that Kasumigaoka Shiu's works are indeed excellent.

"But there are still some contents that I think are not harmonious. For example, the logic of the heroine's behavior makes me a little bit incomprehensible. Why would she develop a crush on the male protagonist who bullied her after being bullied? Normal people wouldn't do this, right? …”

"Also, the male protagonist obviously already has a girlfriend, but he went to flirt with the female lead. Is such a scumbag really suitable to be the male protagonist..."

"also……"

Yukinoshita Yukino started serious mode and spoke out the shortcomings of this book without mercy.

After listening to Yukinoshita Yukino's criticism, Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowned and became thoughtful.

She did agree with some of what Yukinoshita Yukino proposed, but there were also some that she didn't agree with.

However, she was not dissatisfied because of this. After all, Yukinoshita Yukino was just a reader, not an author. More importantly, she obviously didn't know much about light novels and criticized her book from the perspective of classic literature. .

So I can understand.

As a person who seeks help, Kasumigaoka Shiu is very tolerant of Yukinoshita Yukino, a school girl who is serious about helping her.

Even if she didn't agree, she wouldn't say anything.

"That's what I want to say." After Yukinoshita Yukino finished speaking, she paused, and then looked at Kasumigaoka Shiha apologetically, "If there is anything I said that is wrong, please forgive me, senior."

Obviously, she also knew that her words were a bit harsh.

Maybe it will anger this senior.

But as a perfectionist, Yukinoshita Yukino will not deliberately hide her true thoughts and play some boring game of reading the air.

"Senior Yukinoshita's comments are not unfounded. She is indeed right in many places. I will keep them in mind."

Kasumigaoka Shiu simply thanked Yukinoshita Yukino. She still saw the other person's efforts. The thick dark circles around her eyes proved that Kasumigaoka Shiu was not an unkind person. She treated this person She was also grateful for her schoolmate's behavior.

Afterwards, Yukinoshita Yukino and Kasumigaoka Shiu both looked at Bai Yu.

I want to hear what kind of evaluation Bai Yu can come up with.

Neither Yukinoshita Yukino nor Kasumigaoka Shiu will underestimate Bai Yu's ability, and both of them want to hear Bai Yu's opinion.

"I mainly talk about areas that can be improved and some writing methods that are useful to seniors."

Bai Yu smiled faintly, Yukinoshita Yukino had already said more comprehensively, and he didn't want to say something repetitive.

Instead, he planned to say something that could help Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

So, he told some common and practical writing methods from his previous life.

Although those writing methods were already old routines when Bai Yu traveled through time, they are still very novel in this world.

In other words, Bai Yu didn't wake up his memory and used it subconsciously due to the influence of his soul. Apart from this, it has never appeared on the market.

As Bai Yu focused on slowly speaking out the many experiences accumulated in his mind.

Without noticing at all, the expressions of Yukinoshita Yukino and Kasumigaoka Shiu who were listening gradually became solidified, and each of them had shocked looks in their eyes.

Obviously, many of the things Bai Yu said were too shocking to these two people.

Both Kasumigaoka Shiha and Yukinoshita Yukino are literary girls who have loved reading since childhood and have read countless classic works both at home and abroad.

Their vision is not comparable to that of ordinary students, and is even no less than that of most professionals engaged in literature.

Naturally, it can be heard that Bai Yu's seemingly simple remarks are actually theories that are enough to initiate a revolution in the current literary world.

I really can’t believe that a student who is still studying can come up with this.

Yukinoshita Yukino was once again shocked by Bai Yu's talent. In the face of the other party's unattainable talent, she only felt that she, who always thought she was excellent, was simply small and pitiful, just like the ordinary students she looked down on.

Deep frustration emerged in her heart again, causing her expression to fall into confusion.

On the other side, Kasumigaoka Shiyu was also very shocked at first, and also felt deep admiration for Bai Yu.

But the more she listened, the weirder she felt.

Because many of the things Bai Yu said made her feel familiar.

This familiar feeling made her subconsciously irritated.

However, at the moment when this feeling of irritability emerged, an idea flashed in Kasumigaoka Shiyu's mind, and he suddenly knew why he felt irritable and why he felt familiar.

What Bai Yu said seems to correspond to many plots in the dead eunuch's book!

Could it be that this guy Bai Yu has also read the dead eunuch's book and is also a loyal reader of the dead eunuch?

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's eyes lit up, and he suddenly felt like meeting someone of the same kind. His eyes looking at Bai Yu suddenly became much softer, and the corners of his mouth could not help but raise slightly.

It's such an unexpected surprise to find a companion who has the same hobbies as myself.

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