Awakening Identification Technique, Found That the Daughter is From the Future

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First of all, I would like to thank all book friends for their support all the way. I wish you all the best in the new year, all the best, and have everything you want.

Secondly, the ending was a bit rushed, and there were many unsatisfactory places. I apologize to everyone.

I may write a few simple free side-shows in the future. If you have any plots you want to watch, you can mention them in this chapter.

What follows is a review and conclusion of the book.

The writing of this book has been a bit bumpy so far. The data for the new issue is very poor, with 100,000 words and 100 collections, and only 140,000 words are eligible to test the waters. Generally, in this situation, most people cut directly without any hesitation. The author's friends also suggested Erhu to open the new book, but Erhu still chose to insist on reading it.

Thank you for your persistence at the beginning, so that this book can be written until now.

Although the data is not very good, I personally like this book very much. I often read it during the serialization period, and I unconsciously smiled on my face. I read many chapters without knowing it. Time passed, and I was delayed a few times because of it renew……

Closer to home, after testing the waters, the results have improved a bit. Although it is still not very good, it can be regarded as meeting the expectations of Erhu. All the persistence and hard work have not been in vain.

After the new book issue is recommended, it will be put on the shelves. It has been on the shelves for six months. From the average order of 630+ on the first day, the average order has just risen to 2700 as of now, more than four times, and the increase is still qualified.

But it's a pity, it's still 300 points away from the boutique...

As a street writer, I really dream of becoming a boutique (Broken Sound)...

Here is a strong appeal. Readers who read this book on other platforms try to come to the starting point to read and read, and subscribe to support the author... Readers' subscription is the author's greatest creative motivation. I sincerely thank the brothers who have been subscribing, thank you, Erhu to everyone Take a bow and perform a split for everyone!

The next step is to review, to summarize the obvious deficiencies in the creation process, record them, and remind myself in the future, I hope that the mistakes I made will not be repeated, and I will write better works. (Reminder: The following content has serious spoilers, friends who have not finished reading the novel can skip this summary)

In the process of serialization, there were two big faults in the follow-up book, which directly collapsed in half, which was very scary.

For the first time, Erhu felt that the previous plot was too plain, and then forced to write a villain after entering the secret realm, that is, Yang Yi, to increase the conflict. As soon as this plot came out, half of the follow-up subscriptions were lost the next day, and Erhu's heart was half cold at that time...

After reflection later, I found that the reason for this is mainly because the styles of the front and back are too different, forming a serious sense of separation.

Before this plot, the style of this book has always been relaxed and happy, with no bitterness and hatred, and no villains aiming at the protagonist everywhere, getting slapped in the face by the protagonist or something.

Writing all the way through the previous article has created such an atmosphere of relative harmony within the human race and a strong external atmosphere.

Although this rhythm is dull, at least it is relaxed and happy, and it looks comfortable.

But at this time, a villain who seems to have a brain problem (reduced intelligence) suddenly appeared. He started to be hostile in a few words, and even wanted to suppress and kill the protagonist who was already a core genius disciple. Ran.

Later, after reflection, the two tigers revised the conflict a little softer, and the rate of decline was slightly better. But the plot has already been written, and it can't be deleted or changed in a big way, and it can only continue to be written like this.

Not long after it was put on the shelves, with about 300,000 words, the book experienced a collapse. It can only be said that Erhu is too good...

After that, the author kept the original style, and the follow-up order has been relatively stable, and it has continued to 600,000 words.

Then at 600,000, there was a second subscription crash, which was also a direct cut in half.

The reason for the collapse is also very simple, that is to determine the identity of the heroine.

Because of the subject matter, one of the biggest expectations of this book is the identity of the heroine. Everyone is curious about who the child's mother is.

As soon as the answer was announced, most readers immediately felt dull and lost the desire to continue reading.

For such expectations, the normal way to deal with it is to keep pulling, keeping the identity of the heroine mysterious, and not confirming the identity of the heroine until the finale, no matter how urged by the readers, the answer will not be announced.

But Erhu... forget about it, it's all tears. I won’t engage in this kind of plot setting in the next book. I’m too soft-hearted. Seeing that everyone is asking, I wrote it directly when my head got hot.

The editor's suggestion at that time was to revise that chapter, not to announce the identity of the heroine, and to attract readers who came in later.

But at that time there were already 1,400+ subscriptions, and these 1,400 readers had already read that chapter. After such an important plot change, what should these 1,400 readers do? Wouldn't it be confusing to see related plot nodes in the future?

Considering this point, Erhu did not make major changes, but only blurred it out. Although he did not directly clarify the identity of the heroine, after reading that chapter, it is basically clear who the heroine is. It will affect readers who have already read it too much.

But it is obvious that such a reform is equivalent to deception, and it has no effect, and the proportion of follow-up subscriptions has not increased.

And because of this plot, I will not write much about the relationship line in the future, and will try my best to write the upgrade line, and once again lose readers who like to read the relationship line.

At this point, the follow-up subscription has been in a slump, and the average subscription has also been in a mess. For a while, it even kept dropping. The average subscription dropped by 300 a month, and the data dropped rapidly. During that time, writing was very painful, the passion for creation declined, and the updates gradually decreased...

It wasn’t until Huya’s editors helped arrange a big recommendation last month that Junding was pulled back again, and it rose a little bit.

If there were no such two crashes, you can add more good recommendations, and the average booking should be doubled by now... But the reality is that there is no if, so we can only learn from the lesson and continue to work hard in the future.

Finally, there are some shortcomings in the conventional writing, such as improper detailing, water in places that shouldn't be used, and places that should be detailed but not detailed enough. Generally speaking, the rhythm is not good enough, which is also a common problem of our kind of blanket writers.

Another thing is that the plot is too flat, there is no conflict from beginning to end, and the protagonist has no clear opponent.

As a fantasy novel, if the plot is too bland, it will definitely not work, and the readership will be very low. This is also one of the important reasons why the new book period is too difficult to get on, and the follow-up order after it is released is mediocre.

But the level of the two tigers' writing conflicts seems to be a bit poor——

However, I will pay more attention to it in the next book, and try to improve this aspect as much as possible.

To sum it up, it's almost the same.

Finally, let me talk about the situation of the new book. The theme of the new book has been determined, and it is still fantasy, but the background will not be modern.

As for the opening time of the book... Erhu wants to rest for a while and adjust the rest of the underworld. The new book will probably be opened after the Spring Festival, and a single chapter will be released at that time. If you are interested, please remember to go and have a look. After reading or something, flush the data.

During this period, we will update a little extra episode, and you can also pay attention to it. If you have any extra episodes you want to watch, you can also talk about it here, and the author will refer to it.

There is no never-ending feast in the world, and it is really coming to an end here. Thank you for your support along the way, and thank every reader who subscribes, monthly tickets, rewards, and recommendation tickets.

Here, I would like to thank [Qin Shihuang q] for his monthly ticket support. I am very impressed with him, because he votes the most monthly tickets every month...

There is also the boss of [Do not wave], for a period of time this chapter said that it was all due to him, who cheered me up every day and made me full of motivation.

There are other familiar ids that are not listed here.

———Two tigers pause, January 7, 2023.