Arad's crooked savior

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Write some of your own thoughts and carefully analyze the original setting and the current setting of the two kinds of taneba. Just read it as a free chapter.

The plot of Mechanical 7 is actually very good. Maybe I am too picky and I have become emotional in the portrayal of Taneba's character.

Because of the official book-taking, Geboga was accelerated by Giselle in ancient times and turned into a complete body that could be activated. Therefore, the process of Bakar threatening Taneba was almost deleted.

Please refer to the official storybook "Bakar, the Explosive Dragon King". I won't post the specific content. You can find it on the Handy Machine wiki, or Lan Yuan's comic "The Will of the Warrior", which is basically consistent with the plot below.

It was the Dragon King who told Taneba that Gaibojia did have the possibility of threatening my life, but now Gaibojia is a semi-finished product, and this thing is Terra's technology, not yours. I also know where your base camp is hidden.

If you cooperate with me, stop the research on Gaboga immediately. If you don't cooperate, I will dismantle Gaboga now, kill all of you, destroy all the data, leave nothing behind, and wait for the successors.

(During this period, the Dragon King even explained to Taneba the prophecy of the stone tablet, Luke and a series of other events.)

Gaibojia is still a half-finished product and has no choice but to be the enemy without the Dragon King. You see, does Taneba have any choice at this time? In the true sense, he is cornered, and the sky is not responding and the earth is not working.

The focus at this time has nothing to do with the question of who is the core technology of Gaibojia. Technology is just a trigger.

Even if Taneba had the intention to "kill someone with a borrowed knife" and borrow the power of others to summon the dawn of heaven, he still couldn't do it.

In this truly desperate state, Taneba had no choice but to betray everyone's hopes, so he chose to betray Heaven and cooperate with the Dragon King, just to leave the last spark of hope.

He took the initiative to propose that he be a traitor to the Celestial Realm. He said that if all the seven mechanical gods of war died, the people of the Celestial Realm might completely surrender to Bakar out of fear.

This is also inconsistent with Bakar's true thoughts. Bakar wants the heaven to cultivate his own power.

Taneba's condition is to ask Bakar to let his child go, and then leave the two mechanical seven gods of war to inherit the fire.

In the original setting, the two people Taneba wanted to survive were Janey and Coolio. Janey was pregnant with the child, and Coolio was originally set to be the youngest, talented and responsible.

But Janey gave birth prematurely due to stimulation. Later, when she learned of Taneba's betrayal, she couldn't understand it and committed suicide in tears.

Then look at it again, creating a flesh-and-blood hero Taneba, who is willing to bear the name of betrayal for eternity for the sake of justice, hope, and the future of heaven, but has a father-like tenderness in his heart.

The storybook also mentions in passing that more than a hundred years ago, there were people in the heaven who were extremely talented and developed powerful weapons, but they rejected Bakar's proposal.

Then they all died!

However, the current plot is that because of eating books, Gaibuga is no longer a semi-finished product. There is only one reason for Taneba's betrayal: "Gaibuga is not Tianjie's own technology, but the Terra technology brought by Held."

The specific details of Bakar's threat were removed, leaving the tragedy that led to his betrayal somewhat baffling, all the way to The Riddler.

There is neither a strong sense of despair nor the tenderness of a father...

At least re-reading the plot of Mechanical Seven Gods of War, the adventurer follows Tanebba as the Riddler, and then dismantles the system defense of his home Eternal Light along the way. After the adventurer and Tanebba complete the demolition together, Gaboga is also killed by Giselle. started.

Helplessly, I spread my hands ~ Haha.

"Why don't the officials use these long and smelly plots of dismantling the defense system to show the details of Taneba's despair and how he is willing to bear the infamy step by step?"

Odeiz asked him in grief and anger why the gun was pointed at his own people. Stark abandoned his own flesh and blood and asked Taneba again and again why. He almost knelt down and begged him to tell the truth and beg you not to be the Riddler.

Polgan said sadly that he was still emotional and believed you Taneba.

I remember that there was a passerby in the plot. Before he was killed by the adventurer and Taneba and others, he asked Taneba very sadly and angrily why he became like this and why he betrayed. Isn’t Gaboga everyone’s hope? Well, we have been sacrificing for this hope.

Too many people died, all to protect you and Gaboga.

Colleagues died, Stark died, countless comrades died, his wife later died, the Eternal Light was destroyed, and the heaven ruled by three hundred years of tyranny continues... The official reason for Taneba's betrayal, It's just because of a sentence in the plot that "Gaboga is not our own technology, it was brought by Held. Bakar hopes that we have our own technology."

It did not describe in detail the series of intricate feelings of despair in the original setting, and how to compromise and leave two fires behind.

Everyone is about to die, the entire land of heaven has fallen, the ancient magic empire has been destroyed by Bakar, and the magic ban and tyranny have lasted for three hundred and seventeen years.

In the plot, Taneba extinguished the last hope of countless people for such a reason.

It's important to master your own weapons, but if you put yourself in the other person's shoes, the opponent's knife has been placed on your neck. They have already killed your ancestors, and now they want to kill you, your friends, and your pregnant wife. You still have to refuse what others offer you. A gun that can fight back?

It's because this gun later became "possible". To put the emphasis on it, it might... threaten me in turn and destroy the heaven... If I can refuse this, I would be truly convinced.

In the story book, Bakar is a character who will randomly kill dozens of people for fun when he is bored.

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Therefore, it is also because the official deleted the very tragic scene of Bakar threatening Taneba. In my opinion, this is the process of real despair. Therefore, the reason for Taneba's betrayal, at least in my opinion, is very thin.

He is the core figure of Eternal Light, the most powerful and wise scientist, and shoulders the hopes of countless people. Unless he really reaches the point of despair, how can he betray him easily.

So, although I know it's impossible... I still propose two solutions.

First, reincorporate this threat process into the plot to express Taneba's tragic feeling of resisting the pain of the future of heaven.

He really had no choice at all, so he decided to cooperate with the Dragon King, because someone refused more than a hundred years ago, and then they all died.

Rather than saying "Other people's skills, the Dragon King knows the location" and other very thin words, he led the adventurer to dismantle the Eternal Light's defense system to pieces.

Anti-air weapons, dragon-slaying traps, being dismantled and closed by Taneba made my blood pressure soar.

Second, delete the plot of Giselle wanting to be a celestial hero, and delete the small words on the ring "Energy Search Ring".

The change to Giselle is a pure "chaotic evil" character, don't give him any lofty starting point. He affects history just to destroy the heaven, not to leave a name in history, who is disgusting.

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Finally, I also know that even the official plot cannot satisfy everyone. It may be that I am too picky and picky, thinking that I am better than the official one.

It’s just how many years have passed since the 1960s version, how many years have the storybook templates been written, and how many years have it been laying the foundation for Mechanical Seven Gods of War...

The magnificent history of heaven, the core figure in the core, the splendor of an era, Taneba, give me this image.

It's like updating a major version and using "Little Dragon Drag" as the theme song...

Letty and Jenny only appear in the second half and die after a few missions.

Tanebajing acted as the Riddler, forcing Stark to kneel down as he begged him.

Of course, the image of Stark is one of the most shocking images I have ever created.

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In addition, since history has still been changed (the three dragons problem), there is some possibility that all the plots experienced now are in the mirror dimension of heaven.

In other words, Shilok's consciousness went astray without paying attention, and the Vaihat spacecraft also went astray.

In the real main-dimensional past, without Giselle, Taneba is still a hero in despair who resists notoriety but has a tender heart.

Then everything makes sense.

Note: "Bella Alijie Ben Belazel", Bella, is the name of an emperor in history, but after the advent of Bakar, there can only be one emperor in heaven, the Dragon King.

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Just think of it as my emotional rant, but not unhappy.