After the immortal disappeared

Jiufang Tea Party 10-First Show

Finally another volume comes to an end, and I feel like I have fought a big battle.

The more complex the plot becomes and the more forces there are, the more difficult it becomes to weave a beautiful ending.

Next, let’s make a cup of good tea and chat with everyone about the minor controversies about the plot.

Some friends think that the early stages of the climax of this volume have too much foreshadowing for Yu Zecheng and Wanqi's uncle and nephew, and are considered redundant.

All means serve the end.

In fact, there were such doubts before the Uproar in Heaven. At that time, it was to reflect the protagonist's planning and layout in a down-to-earth manner, so that the final blow was both earth-shattering and natural.

So what now?

Now it is to write this game of "chess" well.

Uncle Wan and Yu Zecheng both tried their best to move and perform within their abilities, but in the end they could not escape the fate of the chess pieces.

The only ones qualified to sit across from him and play chess with He Lingchuan were Shuangye Guoshi and Wang Guoshi.

However, Shuangye Guoshi and Wang Guoshi tried their best to turn the protagonist into a chess piece in their hands.

This is a game of going higher and higher step by step. The meaning of battle is no longer limited to the battle itself.

For the protagonist, this counter-insurgency and defense battle is also the first time that a new force led by him has entered the world stage and sent a signal of independence to the two major powers.

This is the first show, which is the transformation of the protagonist from an individual to a powerful force;

This is the beginning of a new era, and it is also a landmark event in the world. It is worthy of the author's pen and ink to write about the process from the beginning of the strong wind to the end of Qingping.

Through strength, means, and attitude, Yangshan Islands has been recognized by Shuangye Guoshi and Beijia. This is "independence."

Treating Mou Guo's insistence on the principle of mutual benefit and making it clear that the relationship between the two parties is not a superior-subordinate relationship, let alone a relationship between thighs and leg hair, Yangshan Islands showed "independence."

The two bosses are like this. Neighboring countries and regions, such as Bailie and Qingguo, must put down their dignity and be good to their neighbors.

The overall development situation of Yangshan Islands has been opened since then.

Therefore, Jiufang’s early preparations were not for the battle itself.

As far as the whole incident is concerned, the battle is a small chess and the game is a big chess.

Some people think they are chess players, but in fact they are just a piece of the bigger picture.

The battle is over and the game has just begun.

When you throw a pebble into still water, all you want to see is the ripples.

In fact, Xiao He in the book is playing chess, and Jiu Fang outside the book is also playing chess.

I can’t see ten steps to the next step, but I have to see at least five steps. Only through continuous debugging and modification can we barely achieve the desired effect.

Being cautious is indeed prudent, and the production volume has indeed... not kept up, so I never dare to mention rewards and extra updates, so please forgive me, bosses. Jiufang is also constantly adjusting itself. If it can increase production, it is guaranteed to use extra money to buy monthly tickets for bosses, ah no, tables.

Having said this, I have also pondered over and over whether my own writing is too "delicate" or "verbose"?

Looking at it in detail, this is a matter of appropriate scale.

What should be detailed and what should be omitted?

Why should a recruitment, a battle, or a game be written in such detail, as if it were real? Last time when He Lingchuan made great progress, a friend teased Jiufang: "This author seems to want to teach me a breakthrough."

Grandma, you made me laugh out loud.

Let me ask you a question:

When you ascend to the throne of the Ninth Five-Year Plan and reign over the world, and receive the coming of all nations, you want to say: "These are all the mountains and rivers that I conquered with my own hands!"

Still want to say: "Damn it, I'm so lucky, I traveled through time and turned out to be the emperor?"

Both are called kings and emperors, but can these two kinds of satisfaction be the same?

Can the former kind of majesty and heroism, which looks down upon the world, be replaced by the latter kind of secret joy and pride?

So what's the difference?

It lies in whether there is "hands-on" work.

The word "pretend" is used very well, and only fake ones need to be pretentious.

This pussy has no quality, and its meaning is frivolous. How can others see it if I don’t pretend? How can one be self-satisfied?

However, Emperor Qin, Han Wu, Emperor Tang and Song Zu, do they need to pretend?

They are just awesome, okay?

Others may think that they are pretending to be cool every day. In fact, this is their daily life and the original scene. There is no need to deliberately "pretend".

Therefore, this is the focus of the whole book "The Immortal":

Fight with real swords and guns.

Such awesomeness is so natural.

Xiao He will overcome obstacles and grow continuously in the book. From making great achievements, to killing all directions; from overcoming difficulties, to changing the world.

We will accompany him to fight and start a business together.

Whether it is in terms of cultivation, state of mind, fighting, development, organization... we have to accompany him to overcome and resolve any difficulties that cannot be overcome.

As for the author, there is no way to say that I can write this kind of writing and that kind of writing I am not good at!

History, strategy, cultivation, exploration, fighting, farming... We don't shy away from any of it, and we just write whatever we need to write about.

As big as fighting against the Heavenly Palace, as small as construction and recruitment, they are all in the same dimension, and they all require the protagonist to do it step by step and do it well in a down-to-earth manner.

Because there is no shortcut to success.

I hope this book will give you an immersive, saturated experience of success "as if it were real."

After talking about the "details" of my understanding, let's talk about the "brief".

We usually omit repetitive events and battles, and the day-to-day farming experience, such as this time’s seven-head gift box. As mentioned before about the birth date and horoscope, everyone knows that it is the work of nightmares, so there is no need to expand on it.

That is to say, the routines will all be written in abbreviation, so as to take up less time and energy from everyone.

It is said that companionship is the longest confession of love. At this point in the book, are we accompanying the protagonist to grow, or is the protagonist accompanying us to progress? Is he a character in the book, or is he ourselves?

No need to distinguish clearly.

For Jiufang, there is no need to distinguish whether I accompany the protagonist to solve the problems he encounters, or the protagonist accompanies me to solve the problems I encounter, as long as we grow together.

As for you and me, same thing.

Let’s make progress together, thank you for having us.

————Jiu Fangye/Fengxing Shuiyunjian 2023.11.11