There's something wrong with my love letter system

Chapter 20 The Discussion Begins
"Well, do you want to go in and have a look?" Tang Yimo curled his mouth and looked at Jin Xiaodong with a smile.

Jin Xiaodong suddenly felt a shock in his body.

Fuck, it seems that there is a door.

Nodding like a busy pug: "Yeah, yes, I really want to go into your boudoir to pay my respects."

"Hehe~~"

Tang Yimo slowly suppressed his smile, and said in a cold voice, "No way!"

"How stingy!"

Jin Xiaodong is planning to act like a baby...

Lao Wang patted the coffee table impatiently: "Jin Xiaodong, did I ask you to come here for a visit?! Hurry up and sit down, don't waste everyone's time!"

Seeing that Lao Wang was really angry, Jin Xiaodong had no choice but to sit down on the chair opposite the sofa.

After everyone sat down, Lao Wang cleared his throat and said:
"Have everyone read "Selected Excellent Compositions of New Concepts" carefully?"

The four nodded.

"Okay, then please Jin Xiaodong to share his experience report first."

The faces of the two girls all showed a gloating look, which made you dishonest, and now the retribution is coming!

Jin Xiaodong rummaged through the bag with exaggerated movements, and finally took out the "Selected Excellent Compositions of New Concepts" and a thin notebook.

Open the book, there are only a few lines on it.

Jin Xiaodong stretched out his hands and rubbed his nose, coughed hard again, and then said:
"After reading many essays, I have summed up an experience, that is...you must use less idioms."

Lao Wang nodded and asked, "Then tell me, why do you want to use less idioms?"

"The main reason is... If there are too many idioms in the article, the details will be lost. It's better to write out everything you see honestly."

"Can you give me an example?"

Jin Xiaodong scratched his cheek vigorously, raised his eyes and thought for a while...

"For example, when writing about the weather, instead of using bright sunshine and pink and willow green, it is better to write like this: the breeze blows the forest tops, and the willows by the pond are swaying. It is the sunny season."

Lao Wang nodded more and more: "Very good, using specific sentences instead of overused idioms can deepen the sense of substitution in the article, and it can also solve the problem that the article is not long enough."

After speaking, Lao Wang got up, walked to the whiteboard next to the TV wall, and wrote a line of words on it.

[Tips: (1) Use less idioms. 】

"Apart from the technique of using less idioms, is there anything else?"

With a pen in his hand, Lao Wang looked at Jin Xiaodong expectantly.

Jin Xiaodong scratched his cheeks vigorously, and said with a smile, "For the time being... that's all I've come up with, hee hee."

Lao Wang gave Jin Xiaodong a hard look, and sincerely regretted agreeing to this guy to participate in this composition competition.

If I had known it earlier, I would have directly forced Ma Zhiyuan to participate.

"Student Xia Yanling, come and share your experience." Lao Wang's eyes fell on Xia Yanling's face.

Xia Yanling's delicate body trembled slightly, and she sat up straight with a jolt.

cough cough...

"I have summed up the following three points of experience."

"First, you must be careful when reviewing questions. You must clarify the connotation of the question and grasp the requirements of the question. This is the prerequisite for writing a good composition."

"The specific method is to first establish the center of the composition in the review stage, then choose a good style, and then choose the best style to write."

"Second, the composition should reflect the beauty of thought."

"Composition is a creative thinking activity. The level of thinking directly determines the success or failure of the composition. Therefore, the beauty of thinking is the most important thing in writing a good composition in the examination room. When writing, you must pay attention to what you say, make sense, and Say it with affection."

"The third is to pay attention to the use of some writing skills."

"Such as the use of artistic techniques such as contrasting, borrowing scenery to express emotions, expressing aspirations through objects, and symbols."

Finished.

Lao Wang rubbed the stubble on his chin with his hand, and remained silent.

The three points Xia Yanling said, although there is nothing wrong with them, are all a bit...too vague.

For the actual combat of composition, there is actually not much guiding significance.

Lao Wang added two key words to the back of [Skills] on the whiteboard.

[(2) Pay attention to reviewing questions. 】

[(3) Thought beauty. 】

"Is there any more?" Lao Wang folded his arms and looked at Xia Yanling.

"That's all for now."

"Ok."

Lao Wang raised his head and his eyes fell on Tang Yimo.

"Tang Yimo, tell me."

Tang Yimo straightened up and said, "After reading the whole new concept essay, I found that these award-winning essays have a common feature."

"Oh?" Lao Wang's eyes widened, and he became interested immediately, "What common characteristics?"

Tang Yimo said seriously: "Actually, it's very simple, just to be novel."

Before Lao Wang could speak, Jin Xiaodong gave a disdainful "tss": "What do I think it is? That's it? Isn't it too clichéd?"

Lao Wang threw the whiteboard marker in his hand directly towards Jin Xiaodong: "Let Yimo finish talking."

Tang Yimo continued: "Novelty, although it is indeed a bit clichéd, but if you want your composition to stand out, this can be said to be the most important thing!"

"After getting the composition topic, the first thing to think about is how to be novel, how to be different, and take a differentiated route."

"That is to say, how can I have a different perspective from others? Will other people also write what I want to write? Has the angle I choose been thought of by others?"

"If the answer is yes, then by all means throw away the first thought and keep thinking about it until you come up with a less common angle."

Lao Wang shook his head excitedly, tears welled up in his old eyes...

He knew that Tang Yimo had already arrived...

Although everyone can easily say the word "novelty", there are very few people who really understand the essence of it and fully integrate it into the thinking system!
Even Lao Wang himself failed to integrate it into his thinking system.

Otherwise, in the past two years, that nasty woman Zhao Ying wouldn't be riding on his head to shit.

"Teacher Wang, are you... all right?"

Tang Yimo handed over a napkin, could it be that something he said irritated Lao Wang?
Lao Wang took the napkin, wiped his eyes, calmed down for a while, and then said:
"It's okay, I'm excited, you go on, go on."

Tang Yimo nodded and continued: "For example, there is an article called "Education", which boldly puts the focus of the article on a pile of shit."

"When the author writes a pen, when he cuts into the corner, he freezes on who knows who sucked a pile of shit, and then writes a shit that stirs up a thousand layers of waves!"

"Sketch portraits of the human world shown in the process of handling this incident, thus praising the truth, goodness and beauty, and lashing out at falsehood and ugliness."

As soon as he heard the word "shit", Jin Xiaodong couldn't help but tighten his ass in conditioned reflex.

Wow, this is my field of expertise!

Just about to say something, Jin Xiaodong swallowed when Xia Yanling stared at him fiercely with wide open eyes.

wilted!

　Don’t think this chapter is boring. I thought it might be useful to the student party, so I bit the bullet and made it boring~~
　　
　
(End of this chapter)