Daming: I have a showdown, my father-in-law is the emperor

Chapter 224 Daming: I have a showdown, my father-in-law is the emperor

but.

In the end, Chen Fan still couldn't suppress his curiosity and asked.

"Since you ordered the little red hearts, why are there 103 male leads and 97 male supporting roles?"

Zhao Jun smiled awkwardly.

"If there are all 103, readers will know that these little red hearts are ordered by me at a glance. The difference is a few, so that readers can't see it, and will only think that it is the little red hearts ordered by other readers. It will make readers misunderstand I think there are still many readers who like this novel."

The corners of Chen Fan's mouth twitched crazily.

"You are such a clever little ghost!"

After much deliberation, Chen Fan couldn't find a suitable word to describe Zhao Jun's flamboyant operation.

In order to avoid digging his toes in embarrassment, Chen Fan brought the topic to the content of the novel.

"What do you think of the title of this novel? Is it too low?"

Daming: I have a showdown, my father-in-law is the emperor.

When Chen Fan read the title of the book, he felt a little ashamed, which was really embarrassing.

Speaking of this, Zhao Jun's rare pretty face flushed.

"Uh uh! It's a bit low"

At that time, he was reading the titles of other authors' books, which were basically in this style.

As a newcomer writing a book for the first time, of course he has to follow suit.

The result is such a shameful title.

At that time, he didn't feel that the title of the book was embarrassing. When he came back to his senses and wanted to change the title of the book, he found that it couldn't be changed.

So it can only be so embarrassing.

He's used to it anyway, immune to embarrassment.

As long as he is not embarrassed, it is the reader who is embarrassed.

"One more thing, you have written 46 words in this novel. Up to now, Princess Changping has only appeared on the stage a handful of times. Writing as a heroine."

This is where Chen Fan is most speechless.

Just looking at the title of the book, Princess Changping, as the heroine of this book, should have a lot of roles.

In the end, more than 200 chapters have been written, and the role of the heroine is not as much as that of Chunfeng Loutou!
Chen Fan wondered whether Zhao Jun had forgotten about Princess Changping as he wrote it.

Forehead!
When Zhao Jun thought about it, it seemed to be true.

Zhao Jun defended weakly.

"Princess Changping's role is mainly at the back."

Chen Fan chuckled, apparently in disbelief.

In his opinion, Zhao Jun just forgot.

Chen Fan has also read Zhao Jun's outline. There are not many scenes about Princess Changping in the subsequent plot.

In short, the title of this novel was a failure.

"Also, let me talk about the poisonous point of your novel."

There are so many poisonous points, Chen Fan doesn't know which one to start with.

Chen Fan picked a few poisonous points that readers complained about the most.

"The hero in your novel started a live broadcast and made the secret of his ability to travel known to everyone. Didn't he think that external forces would be bad for the hero?"

Speaking of this, Zhao Jun felt a little wronged.

"I didn't intend to write a grand production with serious plot and strict logic."

"puff!"

Chen Fan couldn't help but sneered.

"You are a newcomer Xiaobai, and you haven't planned to write yet? You speak as if you can write it."

Zhao Jun ignored Chen Fan's ridicule and continued:

"I just want to write some simple and easy-to-understand prose."

"According to my thinking, the main plot of this book revolves around the construction of Daming, which is to help Daming slowly develop towards modernization."

"As for the fact that the external forces that readers complain about most are going against the male protagonist, this is not an important plot of the novel, and I don't plan to focus on it."

"I was going to explain it briefly, and I took it all away. But seeing a lot of readers complaining about this, I rounded it up in the following plot."

"The explanation for readers is that one is that the male protagonist can travel to Daming at any time, and the other is that external forces put interests first, exchange interests through negotiation, and share a piece of the pie. This is the best solution."

"The entire resources of the Ming world, such a huge benefit, any external force can take a bite, and their economy will take off a lot."

"Why do you have to fight to the death, when the time comes, you will get nothing but chicken feathers!"

"But you've also seen that readers don't accept this explanation, and those who should complain are still complaining."

"What can I do? I'm helpless too!"

Chen Fan looked at Zhao Jun with sympathy in his eyes.

Beginning readers can be picky.

It is not a wise choice to go against the reader's cognition.

"According to the reader's understanding, you have a system, and you should know this secret by yourself, and you can't tell others. And you also let the male protagonist conduct a global live broadcast, and everyone knows it. Of course, the readers will not buy it."

"Besides, if you look at the system articles written by other authors, did the protagonist not tell others, and you haven't thought about the reason? The system is the protagonist's golden finger, and it is also the protagonist's biggest secret. No one can tell it. On this point, the author and readers have reached a tacit agreement."

"Readers can't stand the protagonist's biggest secret being known by others. If an author challenges this cognition, then readers will abandon the book to teach the author how to behave, so that the author will not step on this mine in the next book, and everything will return to the right in the end. Come on the track, hello, hello, hello everyone!"

"It's like your book. Readers say that the male protagonist's disclosure of secrets is a big poisonous point. If you write this book, won't you avoid this point?"

"So, don't fight against the reader's cognition, it's not good for you."

"As for your explanations that readers don't buy, it's natural. It's useless if you think it's reasonable. It's up to the readers to think it's reasonable."

Zhao Jun nodded in agreement, feeling that what Chen Fan said made sense.

But it was too late to understand this truth, he had already stepped into a pitfall.

But it doesn't matter, his next book will not make such a low-level mistake.

Seeing that Zhao Jun listened, Chen Fan nodded in relief.

Clearing his throat, he continued:

"There are still some poisonous points, such as the plot with Gao Buzhang and Lin Wan'er. The male protagonist in your novel is like a psychopath, talking like a god."

Zhao Jun said awkwardly:
"I originally wanted to write the plot in a light-hearted and humorous way, but in the end, the writing was not good and the writing was messed up, and the male protagonist became like this."

"I also saw readers' complaints, so I adjusted the plot later. Especially after the novel was released, almost all my plots unfolded in Daming, and the plots about the modern world were all downplayed."

"And the male lead's personality is normal now, he doesn't show his cleverness anymore. If his cleverness isn't good enough, the male lead looks like a psychopath."

Hey!
Speaking of this, Zhao Jun felt like crying.

It is really embarrassing to step on so many thunders when writing a novel for the first time.

However, just treat it as accumulating experience!
Next time you write a book, just avoid these thunders.

(End of this chapter)