Moegirl Pokémon

Chapter 207 You are already a mature elf, you have to learn to earn money to support your family
Time flickers.

More than ten days passed quickly.

During this time, Tang Yi has been busy revising the outline for Kirulian, and the two will have heated discussions from time to time. The girl still has some complaints about Tang Yi's revised outline.

In the outline revised by Tang Yi.

The protagonist is still Guisi. Since Guisi was abandoned, she awakened the golden finger system, which gave her the ability to sneak into other people's dreams. At the beginning, the system level was very low, and she could only sneak into the dreams of those weak creatures.

With continuous upgrading, the system unlocks more and more abilities, not only can sneak into the dreams of powerful creatures, but also sanction others in the dreams.

The first time the ghost girl used her ability was on the trainer who abandoned herself. In the dream she created, the badass trainer was tortured by his conscience. After waking up, he could not escape the inner torture and surrendered himself. up.

The ghost girl realized how powerful her ability is, so she wanted to help more people like herself who had resentment but could not get it done.

After that, she created a website, which is very simple, mainly for everyone to express and vent their dissatisfaction and resentment.

And Guisi would screen other people's messages every once in a while, and personally confirm whether it really existed. If it was confirmed to be true, she would execute her own justice by entering a dream.

Because the ghost girl's dream ability works best at midnight, she usually chooses to sneak into the suspect's dream after midnight.

At the very beginning, very few people knew about this website, and those who found it occasionally thought it was a prank, some left dismissively, and some jokingly left comments on it.

But after a long time, some real information was occasionally mixed in the message.

The first piece of real information came from a girl with a horned goldfish in a local orphanage. The management of this orphanage is usually chaotic, and there is almost no monitoring, which leads to very common bullying in the orphanage.

Because this horned goldfish girl is usually taciturn and suffers from bullying, even when she falls asleep at night, she will be forcibly dragged up, dragged to the toilet, and bullied in various heinous ways.

The girl complained and contacted the manager, but she never heard from her. Instead, she got bullied even worse.

By chance, she found out about this website, and at first she didn't believe it, but with a mentality of accusation, she posted her grievance and resentment on it.

The ghost girl quickly found out about this orphanage, and after a few days of careful investigation, she confirmed that the incident was true, so that night, she first sneaked into the dream of the boss of the bullying gang, the fiery monkey girl.

In the dream, Fiery Monkey was thrown into a bizarre world, just like how she used to treat those weak and pitiful people, she experienced the same torture-like bullying.

The repeated cycle of reincarnation made life worse than death. In the end, her psychology completely collapsed.

After waking up again, the fiery monkey girl was like a lunatic, in front of everyone in the orphanage, crying about what she had done in the past, kowtowing and apologizing, while desperately slapping herself, and even revealed that she had colluded with the administrators of the orphanage. It is domineering inside.

This incident quickly made headlines in the local news, and relevant departments quickly intervened, dismissing the director of the orphanage and related personnel to investigate and deal with it.

Life in the orphanage finally returned to peace.

The horned goldfish girl finally doesn't have to endure bullying anymore. Although everyone else is wondering why the hot monkey suddenly found out with conscience, only the horned goldfish knows what happened.

She went on the site again and thanked her from the bottom of her heart.

Gradually, there are more and more incidents like this.

I don't know when it started, but the urban legend has spread more and more widely, and this mysterious website has also begun to be called Hell Communication.

If you do something outrageous, fear vengeance from hell.

The ghost girl has gradually become the legendary justice girl, and some people call her the hell girl.

……

Tang Yi's outline is only written until the end of the first story line.

Kirulian has some complaints about the settings. For example, she can't accept the golden finger system, but Tang Yi patiently explained to her the commercial nature. In order to cater to a wider audience, adding a system, not only written It is convenient and easy to watch.

Well, the girl reluctantly accepted.

Then there is the story. In fact, Kirulian still likes this kind of story, but he also has different opinions on how to deal with the villain.

Originally, according to Tang Yi's original intention, after the villain received retribution, he could just receive the boxed lunch.

Kirulian can't accept this kind of ending, and thinks it's still too dark.

The girl still firmly believes that there are more good people in this world after all.

So the ending of the villain is changed to, the conscience is condemned, he voluntarily repents, surrenders himself, accepts legal sanctions and the like.

"I think it's pretty good." After the second revision, Kirulian thought it was pretty good, and her trainer was indeed talented.

Mainly after experiencing the incident between Ugly Ugly Fish and Su Chengtao, Kirulian gradually understood that the dark side of this society may be much bigger than she imagined.

Although the setting has been messed up by Tang Yi, the basic idea is still Kirulian's own idea. In reality, she may not be able to do more things. At least in the novel, she can use her own pen to create A world in your own mind.

"But if the story is a bit depressing, I'm afraid readers won't be able to accept it." The girl was still worried.

Tang Yi was actually not sure whether the online readers in this world could accept such a story, so he comforted the girl and said, "It's okay, don't expect the first book to make money, even if you hit the street, it doesn't matter, I will support you!"

The prize money of tens of thousands of yuan in the trials had already been cashed out, and when he had money, Tang Yi's words were domineering.

Of course, half of the bonus was given to Kirulian.

To be precise, girls are not short of money now.

But, the words "I'll support you" made Kirulian feel flattered.

It will take some time to rewrite according to the revised outline. As for how to write and how to portray the characters, that is Kirulian's own business.

In this regard, Tang Yi does not intend to do it for him.

Although if he wrote it as a ghostwriter, at least the writing strength would definitely be better than the girl's blue writing, but this is Kirulian's novel, not Tang Yi's.

After all, she is already a mature elf girl, and it's time to learn to earn money to support her family.

At this time, the college entrance examination scores were finally announced.

(End of this chapter)