Chapter 262 Ending
"But now it seems that this paragraph is a bit too weak, I didn't think carefully!"

Lu Yu decisively admitted his mistake. It was supposed to be a confrontation between the three sides, but in the original work, it became one-sided. This should not be a problem in a good work.

"There is no problem with your idea, but there is a problem with the plot used to shape it!"

Zhao Hanyun thought for a while, then continued to speak.

"According to common sense, the situation you wrote cannot be allowed to happen. If I were to act, this would be the climax of a three-way show. If one person is weakened, it would be an insult to the other two. After the performance , for the audience, they will not understand, no outstanding actor in this plot is willing to act like this!"

"Because it's something fundamental, isn't it?"

Lu Yu nodded, and Lu Yu also understood Zhao Hanyun's meaning. This plot has already involved the problem of character design. The three are all famous emperors for a long time. Losing momentum here, this performance directly made her lose the quality of a king, and turned into an ordinary person who swayed with the wind.

"Well, your plot is very good. If it is made into a movie or TV series, it will be beneficial to the actors. After the performance is good, the upper limit of this drama is immeasurable, so I said this plot is a drag. The overall quality of this drama!”

Zhao Hanyun also nodded. From her point of view, this show only needs the actors to show these characters, and show what the characters should do according to the development of the plot. There is a possibility of further improvement as a whole. However, due to Lu Yu's restrictions, It is bound to become a failure.

"Then if you were asked to play Artoria, sister Han Yun, what would you say?"

Lu Yu nodded, and then asked, he knew that the problem of this plot was King Arthur, so he wanted to know, if Zhao Hanyun were to play this character, what kind of words would he say under this plot?
"I?"

"kindness!"

When Zhao Hanyun heard Lu Yu's confirmed answer, she also thought about it. She didn't actually think about playing this role. There was no other reason, but she simply didn't like it. If she really wanted to play it, she would actually prefer to play the second part. Sakura, the blackened plot made her a little bit unable to stop.

And King Arthur is too unchallenging for her, and the drama conflicts are not strong enough, especially in the first part, according to Lu Yu's description, she is more like a virtuous knight, without the coexistence with the other two Zhao Hanyun doesn't like the kingly air, which is a bit petty.

"I don't like her in the first part very much, but in the second part she has become an ordinary person. Although this will fit your plot better, I definitely won't play it!"

For Zhao Hanyun's evaluation, Lu Yu already knew that the plot of the second part is essentially a game plot. If it is really shaped according to his own personality, it will create a sense of distance for most players, and Zhao Hanyun will definitely not like it.

"But since you asked, we won't discuss the second part, only the first one. If you want her to shine, then you must set up her character, just like other characters in you, according to her own characteristics. show!"

"Its own characteristics?"

When Lu Yu asked back, Zhao Hanyun nodded and said immediately.

"Her traits are actually very clear in your writing, just like the code name you said, Knight King, but you have to be clear, the knight itself is not suitable to exist as a king!"

"What do you mean?"

"It's easy!"

Zhao Hanyun turned his head and glanced at Lu Yu, who was thoughtful, and then said.

"Although the knights themselves are nobles in Europe, they will never be the top nobles. They abide by the codes of being knights, but in the end they must serve the rulers, and these codes are the rulers. The best virtues are added, after all they are only soldiers, and the best of them can become heroes, but they will not become kings!"

Zhao Hanyun glanced at Lu Yu, saw that he didn't respond, and then continued talking.

"It's like we have always admired saints, but there has never been a saint in power in all dynasties. This in itself is enough to explain the problem. I think you can understand this. Just like the treasures written in your novels, why hers is ideal. It's the same as the hometown!"

"Is it because there are too many ideals?"

"Well, so many endings are actually doomed. There are countless places in this world where the light cannot shine, but once it shines, the creatures living in it will be extremely uncomfortable, and even die on the spot, and the same is true of human nature. Like an incomparably holy light, it illuminates the darkness of the world, but not everyone can adapt to this light, and it is reasonable to overreact!"

Zhao Hanyun didn't wait for Lu Yu to speak, and then continued.

"Such a character is not suitable to be a king, but in the script, he is a person who is easy to shine. There is no shortage of people with bright hearts in the world. This character design itself represents the goodwill of this world, but in In your pen, this turned into a middle school girl. Well, is that what you said?"

Zhao Hanyun was not sure whether his description was appropriate, but Lu Yu smiled slightly.

"Well, Sister Hanyun is right, it's okay if you really want to say that!"

"That's it!"

Seeing that he was right, Zhao Hanyun continued to speak.

"So according to this kind of character design, what she needs to show in this plot is her demeanor, the attitude that her life creed is being profaned, which has nothing to do with her desire to participate in the Holy Grail War. As a good She herself stands on the opposite side of evil!"

"Because of her extreme selfish desires, she is full of joy and anger, but I remember that her desire itself was a serious doubt about herself after the collapse of her ideals. This doubt itself had a certain impact on her, but it could not touch her. Basically, there is only one possibility for me to act in this situation. The best interpretation is the tit-for-tat to the sword-drawing at the end. Compared with the King of Heroes, the situation between the two of them is too small after all!"

"I understand, I know how to change it!"

Lu Yu also understood that when two paranoid people meet together, conflict is inevitable. After one side is weak, the audience will only doubt the ability of that side. Only tit for tat can better reflect the characteristics of the characters. Lu Yu also has a heart The general revision direction, as for Zhao Hanyun's evaluation structure is too small, Lu Yu did not refute.

After all, these two people are actually idealists, and both are extremely self-interested, which is completely different from the self-confidence of the King of Heroes, which Lu Yu has already noticed when writing. These three unique personal charms, It's enough to support the plot of the meeting between the three kings.

"Didn't you want me to dub it? I want the role of Sakura in the second part!"

Zhao Hanyun didn't say anything more, but directly asked Lu Yu to set a role for her. Zhao Hanyun was very interested in this role.

"That's no problem, I will definitely keep it for Sister Han Yun!"

Lu Yu was not surprised at all. Among the two novels, the most dramatic conflicts are nothing more than the three, Mapo, Kiritsugu, and Sakura. Among them, Sakura's is the most intense, especially the blackened ending. It pushed the conflict to its peak.

"Well, but why are your two novels different from the ones you wrote before? Do you have more than one game?"

Zhao Hanyun's memory is very good, so good that she can remember it even at a glance. She has seen the game plan written by Lu Yu before, and naturally knows clearly that this part of the plot is the same as the previous one except for the setting, and the rest is completely different.

"Well, that game is a mobile game after all, and the plot in it is more about the expansion stories of these heroes. Only in this way can players fall in love with these heroic spirits. This novel is used to expand the world view and attract more players. !"

"Well, have you considered using the first film to shoot a live-action version?"

Zhao Hanyun didn't mention the second part. For her, if the second part wanted to catch her eyes, Sakura's role had to be added, and the structure itself had to undergo a lot of revisions. Relatively speaking, the first part Except for a few parts of the plot, the first one has some problems, but overall it is much better than the second one, and it is naturally more suitable for a live-action version.

"I haven't thought about it. I probably don't know how to shoot a live-action version. Why are you interested, Sister Han Yun?"

Lu Yu never thought about this issue. First of all, not to mention whether the special effects can meet the standards, it is very difficult for Lu Yu to find actors to play the various characters in the film, let alone go to an island country for filming, which is even more difficult. Moreover, many of the reasons why the paper man's wife is so attractive come from her solitary personality. If she really wants to play a live-action version, it is very likely that the gain outweighs the gain.

"Forget it, just ask, if you are interested, I can help you find a director to shoot! I think many people will be interested in this script!"

Seeing that Lu Yu had no idea, Zhao Hanyun didn't go into it any further. She just mentioned it casually, and Lu Yu thanked her with a smile when he saw it.

"Thank you Sister Hanyun, but I really don't have this idea now. After all, the gaming industry is different from the entertainment industry. The live-action version is not a good thing in the gaming industry!"

"You decide for yourself!"

Seeing this, Zhao Hanyun didn't say anything more. After the two of them finished talking about the topics they wanted to talk about, the car fell into a brief silence, and a slightly awkward atmosphere emerged spontaneously.

Lu Yu obviously would not accept this increase in atmosphere. He naturally knew that there was no possibility of expecting Zhao Hanyun to break this atmosphere. He could only think for a moment and speak directly.

"Sister Han Yun, have you heard about Da Song?"

"what news?"

Zhao Hanyun never pays attention to these things, she knows all the news from Lin Qitong talking to herself, if she has that time, she might as well read two more books.

"Da Song and the others have already set a schedule to broadcast next week, Yang Ma's prime time, this promotional lineup is only available to you!"

Lu Yu is now at the stage where he has nothing to talk about. Although he made Shendiao popular with his own news a while ago, Da Song's propaganda has not fallen behind. Naturally, they have strong strength and they will not care about that day and night. The gains and losses, just like their own subject matter, crushed and dominated countless rankings afterwards.

"I don't know about this, let's broadcast it!"

Zhao Hanyun shook his head, just like her original temperament, without a trace of nervousness, Lu Yu smiled when he saw this.

"If Sister Han Yun hadn't come to film the Divine Condor, you would have been in this show!"

"uncertain!"

Zhao Hanyun shook his head, Lu Yu was taken aback by what he said, and then he looked in Zhao Hanyun's direction and asked.

"Not necessarily? Impossible, isn't it too far-fetched for Sister Han Yun and the others not to look for her!"

"that's not what it means."

Zhao Hanyun didn't expect Lu Yu to think about it, so he continued.

"They approached me for this drama, and they wanted me to play Li Qingzhao. I have read the script, and the restoration of historical facts is also good, but I don't like it. I have never been interested in this strange woman's words! "

"That's it!"

It was only now that Lu Yu remembered that they had chatted with each other in the crew before, but Zhao Hanyun made it clear that he didn't like Li Qingzhao, so naturally he would not agree to play this role.

"Then when it comes to poetry, who is Sister Han Yun's favorite in history?"

Lu Yu cleverly changed the topic. It was obvious that the previous conversation could no longer go on. He couldn't talk about Li Qingzhao knowingly. Lu Yu didn't need to think about why Zhao Hanyun didn't like it. It was nothing more than Li Qingzhao's plaintive style in the later period that made Zhao Hanyun dissatisfied. Just happy.

Looking at the characters played by Zhao Hanyun, there is never a person who follows the crowd. There must be the characteristics of this character. She can be sad and angry, but she must maintain her own personality. Her own independence is the key.

This is also the reason why she doesn't like King Arthur very much and prefers Sakura. In the novel, King Arthur has slightly lost the characteristics of her character, while Sakura, who buries the darkness deep in her heart to control it, has never changed her character. , Only after completely losing hope, did she give up her light and blackness, but the first thing she did when she was trapped in the darkness was to eliminate the darkness, which has to be said to be ridiculous.

"I don't have any favourites. Poems are only suitable for me. Each poem represents a different thought and has different perceptions in different environments. Why should I choose?"

"Been taught a lesson!"

Lu Yu was stunned after hearing this, and couldn't help sighing in his heart. He kept saying that Zhao Hanyun and Yun Feiyan were more like seekers of the Tao. Only unique things can enter their eyes, and their focus is always on the things they are interested in.

"Sometimes you can be more casual and don't care too much about some rules. Many rules are meant to be broken. If you think too much, it will often backfire and you won't be able to get around it!"

Zhao Hanyun softly mentioned something to Lu Yu. After watching it for so long, she is very familiar with Lu Yu's habits. There is absolutely no shortage of a detailed plan when doing things, but it is too detailed. It has already limited the framework. Yes, there is too little room for revision, which is actually not a good thing. Just like the two novels this time, the level will be lowered because of some restrictions. Zhao Hanyun does not believe that only this kind of work can be written.

(End of this chapter)

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