I'm not dog licking

Chapter 132

What Qin Shou is considering now is whether to change the opening style of the new book.

Baby Zhang said, I suggest replacing it.

Because No.1 is used to describe the narrative, although the sense of substitution will be stronger, it will inevitably be a bit long-winded, and the beginning is a bit slow.

Mimi said, I don't agree with Beibei's statement.

The most important thing about web writing is the sense of substitution, which is more important than logic.

If you have to cancel the sense of substitution in order to change the slightly slower rhythm, something big will happen.

Zhang Baobei frowned and said, Mi Mi, please listen carefully to what I mean.

First of all, isn't there a sense of substitution in writing in the third person?

Although the current style of writing has a slightly stronger sense of substitution, for newcomers, the rhythm starts slowly, and it is very likely that they will not be able to pass the level when testing the waters.

At that time, no matter how good your writing is, what's the use of having a sense of substitution?
Wang Ruoxu said, I also suggest writing in the third person.

The reason why I think so is different from the opinions of Beibei and sister Mimi.

I feel that the plot of this narrative is not too attractive. In this case, of course, the more concise the better.

Once you encounter a more attractive plot, you can use No.1 to describe it.

Zhang Baobao and Mi Mi were all taken aback when they heard this.

Qin Shou was overjoyed, Ruoxu, go on and talk about it.

Wang Ruoxu nodded. What I mean is, the plot of your opening narrative is very general, and Gushi is not very interesting.

In this case, using No.1 is indeed a bit long-winded.

It's better to finish speaking quickly in the third person, anyway, this is not the selling point of your book.

Your selling point is invincibility and dog-licking, don't forget what your core is.

For content that has nothing to do with invincibility and dog licking, if the story is strong, it can be a bit long-winded, and it can be described as No. 1, even if it is slow.

Otherwise, it must be as concise as possible. This is the trick and secret of focusing on the big and letting go of the small, and focusing on the key points.

After hearing this, Qin Shou and the others felt suddenly enlightened.

They all praised from the bottom of their hearts and said, Ruo Xu has great insight, Ruo Xu is really insightful.

As soon as Qin Shou patted his thigh, he followed Ruo Xu's wishes.

Today I will change the narrative method at the beginning.

Then I will not revise the previous article for the time being, concentrate on saving the manuscript, and publish the book a year ago, or in other words, publish the book this month.

After making arrangements, Qin Shou led them to dinner.

Jin Mingyu didn't come because she was taking care of the child at home.

Qin Shou hummed a ditty while leading them to the restaurant.

Humming is the theme song and ending song of the TV drama Cornucopia.

what i learned is

ups and downs to find yourself

Accumulate
Abandon difficult knowledge

Rare is
We all forget to stick to the end

valuable is
We all only care about working hard
It's amazing, it's amazing, it takes a lot of courage to take it up, let it go,
It's amazing, it's amazing, let's get together
I can only say that I really have you.
what i learned is

Don't put what you have in your hands

stay in heart
No one can take away my experience

Interesting thing
We are constantly collecting

Strange thing

In the end we just collect memories

It's amazing, it's amazing, it takes a lot of courage to take it up, let it go,
amazing, amazing

Take a break, get together, I can only say that I really have you.
Gain some, lose some, whoever earns the whole world.
It's great, it's great, it takes a lot of courage to take it up and let it go,

Great, great, take a good break, get together, I can only say that I really have you!

After Qin Shou sang a song, Zhang Baobao, Mi Mi, and Wang Ruoxu all praised him.

Qin Shou twisted his mouth, don't worry, there is another one.

Next, I will sing the ending song of Cornucopia for the three of you.

After Qin Shou finished speaking, he hurriedly sang:

Prosperity and prosperity

businessman businessman is so hurtful

You say everyone sees you that way

Can't complain about moaning and sighing every day
It's really not easy to make money

ah!not easy!
In fact, merchants just buy things

Take the business from the east to the west
Distinguish between high and low, adjust surplus and deficiency

The world can't live without you and me

Oh?
what people urgently need what people need urgently
this is real business
I can’t find what I bought, I can’t find what I’m selling, I can’t find what I’m selling.

How can there be life in a pool of stagnant water

what people urgently need what people need urgently
This is what really helped me

One net does not catch fish, two nets does not catch fish

Three nets to catch a big tail tail tail fish

One net does not catch fish, two nets does not catch fish

Three nets to catch a big tail big tail fish
(Oh! Oh! It's open!)!

Not to mention, because Qin Shou sings more recently, his singing voice and singing skills are really getting better and better.

Both songs were sung very well.

Not to mention running away, it is even comparable to the original singer.

Zhang Baobao, Mi Mi, and Wang Ruoxu, who were listening, were all elated, their eyes lit up, and they praised and praised Qin Shou one after another.

Qin Shou almost died of pride.

Qin Shou led them into the hotel.

Step by step into the hotel box.

Everyone moved their chairs and sat down, tearing apart the dishes on the table and starting to order.

Qin Shou looked at the menu first, randomly ordered two side dishes he liked, and then passed the menu to Zhang Baobao.

Zhang Baobei took the menu, ordered some drinks on it, then ordered a cold dish for himself, and passed the menu to Mi Mi and Wang Ruoxu.

After 10 minutes, they finally finished ordering their meals.

The waiter walked out of the box with the menu and went to the back kitchen to inform the chef in charge.

Qin Shou said that idleness is idleness, let's play a game of tiger and chicken.

Zhang Baobao, Mi Mi, and Wang Ruoxu were all taken aback when they heard this.

They asked in unison, what is a tiger and a chicken?

Qin Shou said that it is actually exactly the same as the game of rock-paper-scissors.

The tiger eats the chicken, the chicken hits the bar, the bar beats the tiger, and so on.

When the three women heard it, they suddenly realized that, just like that, the four of them started the game to pass the time.

I don't know if it's because of luck, Qin Shou always loses.

But the three women always draw or win.

After playing around, Qin Shou was the only one who lost.

The loser Qin Shou felt like crying.

The three women who won were all smiling like flowers, and they were overjoyed.

At this time, the waiter slowly brought up the food they ordered.

Seeing this, Qin Shou heaved a long sigh of relief, thinking that at last he didn't have to be hanged and beaten.

The four of them ate and chatted. The food in this restaurant tasted pretty good. The only thing that was not good enough was that the meat and vegetables were not fragrant enough, but the four of them didn't say anything. It would be a big deal not to come next time.

It's not easy for everyone, so don't complain about it.

Thinking of this, the four of them quickly devoured their food, and soon satiated, checked out and left the restaurant.

Took a taxi back home.

As soon as he got home, Jin Mingyu pouted and led the children over.

He complained, "Okay, you are at ease."

They all ran out to play, leaving me alone at home to take care of the children, you are so kind.

(End of this chapter)