Crossing Zhishui, other gods control the ninja world

Chapter 24 Summary
Let me make a small summary. The origin of this book is that I think the setting of fairy art in Naruto is really too rough. It would be more interesting to incorporate the setting of our fairy tale novels into it.

So I came up with the idea of ​​perfecting the cultivation system in Naruto.Another point is that I think other gods are really cheating, and it's a pity to be destroyed.

Combining the two ideas, there is the name of this novel - "The Legend of Zhishui Xiuxian"!
Yes, this is the first name I thought of, as for the current name...

Well, I admit that I am a headline party!
Going back to the plot, starting from Zhishui crossing, and ending with leaving the country of water, the first step of Zhishui's cultivation of immortality is basically completed

This part is to establish the goal of cultivating immortals and make preparations for cultivating immortals.Because Zhishui had no experience of cultivating immortals in his previous life, nor did he have the assistance of a golden finger, so his road to cultivating immortals needs to be explored step by step.

There is only one goal in this step, and that is to win Baiyan.As for meeting Shiro and Junmaro, and recruiting Moon Moon and Kisame, they were all outside of Shisui's plan.But it's something that's a given in my outline.

Regarding the question of the Uchiha clan, in fact, I also made a version of the outline before, and started to travel through the plot after Shisui's death.

It's just that I thought about it for a long time and finally gave up.

After all, Lao Yu is a novice with limited writing skills. If he really wants to write like this, he must keep the Uchiha clan, and he must add a lot of original characters.Be it the character setting or the plot, it is very difficult to control, and it is easy to collapse if you are not careful.

Another point is that the main line of this book is Zhishui Xiuxian. If we really want to write according to the outline of the previous edition, we must add some extra things, which are inconsistent with the main line.

I think the current version of the outline is quite good. All the actions of the protagonist are basically centered on cultivating immortals. Try to do as few things as possible that are inconsistent with the main line, which is more conducive to the development of the plot and easier to control. Some.

Of course, again, Lao Yu is a newcomer.

Insufficient writing power, many things that I wanted to express were not expressed, and many mistakes were made in writing and rhythm.

I am also summing up lessons learned.

This is a very normal thing. I believe that except for a few great gods, the vast majority of web writers will go through such a process.

Convergence of rain into streams, eventually into rivers!

That's about it, I hope to see friends here, and give some support and encouragement!

Thank you Old Rain! ! !

(End of this chapter)