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Chapter 164 Talent
After several days of revising, the complete story was finally written by Gu Yunlang.

It's just that the length of the article alone has reached more than 4 words.

Teacher He opened the article with a flat face, Gu Yunlang was embarrassed to continue eating, and waited anxiously.

In fact, Gu Yunlang is quite confident in what he wrote. After all, he has a background in editing and directing skills, and coupled with the influence of some classic film and television dramas in his previous life, he believes that this article will not fail to catch the eyes of Teacher He.

It's just that this kind of situation, like waiting for the teacher to correct the homework in person, makes him a little uncomfortable.

More than 4 characters, even if it is ten lines at a glance, you have to look at it for a while.

For Mr. He who said that he just watched and didn't even care about eating, Mr. Lu was obviously not surprised.

He also greeted Gu Yunlang with a smile: "Don't wait for him, since he can see it, it means that your things have passed the test, let's eat first!"

After a while, Teacher Lu and He Ziliang had already helped clean up the dishes, and only Gu Yunlang and Teacher He were left at the stone table.

Gu Yunlang sat next to Teacher He, leaning forward slightly, looking at He He hesitantly.

This is what Lin Wansu saw when he entered the courtyard.

Seeing Gu Yunlang's appearance as a good student, she even suspected that she was hallucinating.

This is the usual awesome Gu Yunlang?
It wasn't until I greeted Mr. He when I passed by and saw Gu Yunlang raised his head that I realized that I was right.

After a simple greeting, she went upstairs with a strange expression on her face.

Before entering the house, I couldn't help but look back at the scene in the yard. Teacher He just put down the notebook in his hand at this moment. Lin Wansu had an idea, and pretended to pack up the clothes hanging outside the corridor, while secretly erecting the gossip ears
Teacher He looked up at Gu Yunlang with complicated eyes.

As the saying goes, 'interlacing lines is like a mountain', even if Gu Yunlang has made achievements in self-media, he doesn't think the other party can write a complete story by himself.

Originally, I was holding Gu Yunlang's favor for helping He Ziliang, no matter what the quality was, I would help to change it.

He is even ready to read a middle school student composition

Unexpectedly, the article I just read,

The context is clear, the plot is rich, and the idea is profound...

It doesn't seem like someone who has never touched this stuff could write it at all.

If it weren't for the fact that he barely understood the child, he would have wondered if he had hired someone to write it for him.

Gu Yunlang didn't pay attention to the other person's eyes, but asked tentatively: "Teacher He, have you finished watching?"

He Luo nodded, suppressing the surprise in his heart, and said flatly: "I've finished reading it. As a novice, the writing is not bad!"

Gu Yunlang's face brightened, but before he could be happy, he heard the other party continue: "But the problem is also obvious."

"The details are inappropriate, the primary and secondary are not distinguished, and some descriptions are not very accurate!"

"···"

Seeing that Gu Yunlang was dying all of a sudden, Teacher He was also afraid of hurting him, so he said flatly: "Barely passed the test, at least the conflicts and conflicts are described in place, and the drama is also very strong. As a micro-movie script, it is definitely enough. But there are still many places that need to be revised!"

'Micro movie script? '

Lin Wansu, who was eavesdropping, was taken aback, and stopped pretending to put away his clothes

Teacher He did not hesitate to teach, and carefully pointed out the flaws and loopholes in the article, while Gu Yunlang sat in front of him humbly and accepted the guidance.

This kind of on-demand broadcast by professionals is far more effective than his behind closed doors.

The two of them sat like this for nearly two hours, one teaching and the other learning.

It wasn't until Teacher Lu brought Teacher He's medicine that Gu Yunlang realized that it was getting late, fearing that it would affect Teacher He's rest, he hurriedly got up and said goodbye.

Seeing Gu Yunlang leave the yard in a hurry, Teacher He withdrew his gaze.

"How about it?"

"What's the matter?" Teacher He hadn't reacted yet, but Teacher Lu said in a bad mood.
"I said how about what Xiao Gu wrote? It should be in your eyes, right?"

She knew her husband well. In the early years, because of her eccentric temper, she rejected batch after batch of invitations that were willing to spend a lot of money. She was also known for being strict in guiding students.

Although I spoke today, but my husband can spend so long patiently guiding, it is obvious that Xiao Gu's own ability is not low, and the things he writes have the value of guiding.

"It's interesting!"

Hearing this, Teacher Lu's face darkened: "Take your literati again, right? Don't play charades with me!"

"Ahem, it's not bad, she's quite talented in this area!"

In the past, it is indeed impossible for him to be so patient, but today's guidance not only did not make him as irritable as when he was teaching, but it made him still a little bit unsatisfied.

Gu Yunlang didn't have any professional knowledge as he thought at first.

On the contrary, following the guidance just now, he was surprised to find that the other party's professional knowledge is very solid, even professional students may not have such a solid foundation as him.

"The article is well written and the story is very interesting. It can be seen that he has worked hard..."

Rubbing the notebook in his hand, Mr. He's eyes flickered, and he glanced at the corridor on the second floor, which was already empty, and said with a strange expression: "I'm starting to look forward to what effect he can shoot..."
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With the revision of the manuscript by the professional Mr. He, the big stone in Gu Yunlang's heart finally came down.

To do one thing, we must do it to the extreme!
This is Gu Yunlang's consistent style.

Since there is no need to worry about the script, Gu Yunlang naturally has to start preparing other things.

The shooting equipment is ready-made, plus the intermediate photography skills that I have just spent a lot of reputation to upgrade, so I don't need to worry about photography anymore.

The rest is actors, costumes, location, props...

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Only then did he realize that if he wanted to shoot a complete work, even if it was just a micro film, he would be devastated by all aspects of preparation.

Gu Yunlang was numb.

However, he was not in a hurry. It was only when he started to prepare that he realized how naive he was in planning to shoot in a short time.

Even if the time is extremely compressed and the work is shot out hastily, let alone satirizing Heizi, it is probably not bad to be satirized by Heizi.

So he calmed down for a while, and every day in the evening, he ran to the yard to cook first, and then went to Mr. He.

At first, the other party planned to help Gu Yunlang change it himself, but after a few days of getting along, the two gradually became familiar with each other. In addition, Gu Yunlang has a solid foundation and is willing to spend his time on this aspect, and his attitude is very correct.Especially the meals that are carefully prepared every time you come.

After going back and forth, Teacher He changed from the initial suggestion to the later guidance, and finally, he really loves talents and treats him as a student to teach

Not only patiently guided Gu Yunlang's writing, but also continued to expand and deepen, and even gave him other relevant knowledge.

Teacher Lu also joked, saying

Previously, Gu Yunlang kept shouting at Mr. Lu and Mr. He, but now it's all right, he will come and go again and again, and he will really become his teacher.

Isn't He Luo very emotional?

After suffering a stroke a few years ago, he not only resigned from his job as a teacher, but also quit his job as a screenwriter.

No matter how much unwillingness there is, with the decline of the body, it gradually turns into a compromise

Even though his body is gradually recovering now, he also knows that he will never have the chance to pick up a pen again.

Until the appearance of Gu Yunlang brought changes to his stagnant life
Gu Yunlang's alertness reminded him of himself when he was young, but he also understood that

Even when I was young, I couldn't compare to a talent like Gu Yunlang...

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