Entertainment: I became an old superstar

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Next to genius, the pressure is enormous.

Obviously Irene and Lin Changge were both latecomers, but they came from behind and came up with their own originals one after another, blowing her, a self-proclaimed extraordinary person, to the ground.

But it was precisely because of this gap that Ning Ya wanted to catch up.

Otherwise, put her in the crowd of ordinary people, and she would stick her nose up to the sky in a few minutes?
"Irene, you are too good, right? This song is very good, I like it very much, when will you record it for us?!"

Lin Mengmeng said very excitedly that she wanted to hear the effect of this song after it was recorded.

Shen Ni also said a little excitedly: "Very good, Irene, your song is already at the level of Grandpa Lin!"

After Irene heard their comments, a big stone in her heart finally fell, and then she put her eyes on Lin Xuan again, and said: "Changge, you are more talented in music than me, Can you help me find out if there is something wrong with this song?"

Although Irene locked herself in the room, she was not in a completely closed state. As a music fanatic, she naturally knew that Lin Xuan had just come into contact with music and had come up with five hits.

This kind of musical talent is beyond the reach of even her.

"Row."

Lin Xuan nodded and agreed.

Then I took over the sheet music and began to look at it. This song called "Starry Sky" is indeed original by Irene. I borrowed a little bit of big fish's space inspiration, and at the same time depicted the grandeur and mystery of the vast starry sky. come out.

Of course, if you want to say that it is perfect, that is absolutely impossible. There are still many small mistakes in it, but it is a pity that Shen Ni and the others cannot see it.

But in any case, it is not easy to create songs of this level in this world.

So even if this song can't bring Lin Xuan's aura, Lin Xuan also generously offered his opinion, saying: "These few syllables of your music score can be adjusted higher to increase the artistic conception you want to express in this song. , In addition, in this syllable, you can try to tone it down a bit to make it more mysterious..."

He only mentioned a small part of the questions, and when he hadn't finished all of them, Irene suddenly stood up.

Lin Xuan was taken aback by this, and looked at her inexplicably.

He remembered that Irene was not a glass-hearted person, and it was impossible for him to feel sad just because he had some opinions.

Lin Xuan remembered this correctly. Irene was indeed not a glass-hearted person. The reason why she stood up suddenly was mainly because the questions Lin Xuan raised were so right!
To the extent that she thought about it by herself, she would never be able to figure it out even if she was killed!
"Let's go to my room!"

Irene immediately pulled Lin Xuan upstairs.

This posture is somewhat like the feeling of a thirty-year-old wife dragging her weak husband back to the house.

Of course, if the 30-year-old wife looks like Irene, then the husband will probably die with all his energy, and he will have to work hard!
But Irene obviously didn't mean that. After bringing Lin Xuan into the room, she immediately found out all the previous manuscripts and handed them to Lin Xuan, saying: "I still have a lot of invalid manuscripts here, can you help me take a look? I have several drafts of the song Xing Kong, you can see what can be added!"

Bringing Lin Xuan into the house, Irene's main purpose was to let him read her manuscript.

After Lin Xuan entered the room, he couldn't help looking around, and found that although Irene was living the life of a house girl, the room was very clean and there was no accumulation of debris.

It's just that the curtains are drawn, completely blocking the sunlight, and this room will somewhat make it difficult to tell whether it is day or night.

"These manuscripts..."

Lin Xuan looked at the piles of manuscripts in his hands, knowing that it would take a long time to finish reading them, but when he thought of bringing him back from the beautiful country to be his student, he burped without teaching him well, and felt somewhat guilty.

In addition to this period of time, Irene did not cancel his student status because of his "death". Instead, he continued to stay in this villa. According to his original wish, he would sing a cover of his song and upload it every week. Going online has earned him a lot of popularity.

Calculated in this way, Lin Xuan really had to teach her a lesson, but it was a pity that he could only give her advice.

"The lyrics in these manuscripts are pretty good. For example, you can swap this paragraph with this paragraph. In addition, you can put this tune in this paragraph. Does it feel better?"

Lin Xuan looked at the manuscripts one by one, and began to offer comments for Irene.

Many people will wonder, is this still considered Irene's original work?

The answer is yes, because at best Lin Xuan just put together all the good and acceptable clips of Irene and provided some opinions. In fact, Irene was the one who completed the creation.

If Irene hadn't created these scores by herself, it would be impossible for Lin Xuan to raise her opinion.

After listening to Lin Xuan's words, Irene's beautiful eyes lit up completely, and she kept muttering: "That's right... why didn't I expect this, ah, this clip can still be like this!"

This is the bottleneck period for a music creator.

Although she can create many excellent clips, she can never tell which ones are good and which clips can be put together.

This is also the main reason why she has been out of the room for so many days, she is stuck here.

If Lin Xuan was there, she only needed to ask Lin Xuan, and she would be able to successfully break through this bottleneck in a few days, but the problem is that Lin Xuan is no longer there, so she can only explore by herself.

As for Lin Changge?
Irene didn't know that he was Lin Xuan. She just thought he was Lin Xuan's grandson. The key point was that Ning Ya and the others said that Lin Changge had only just been exposed to music, so it was even more impossible to ask him for advice.

If it wasn't for the recent news that Lin Changge released five new songs, each of which was a hit, she wouldn't even ask at the dinner.

Fortunately, she asked, and brought Lin Xuan into the room to ask for advice, otherwise, she would have to retreat for another month to think about what Lin Xuan said at the dinner table.

"Overall, it's still very good. This song will definitely become popular after it comes out!"

Three hours after all the opinions were submitted, Lin Xuan put down the last manuscript.

And Aileen also changed her score and lyrics based on Lin Xuan's opinions. Although they were all created by herself, when she saw them put together so perfectly, Aileen's heart Still couldn't help but get excited.

(End of this chapter)