Uchiha Madara's Journey to the Heavens

Chapter 42 Sort it out, two updates today and four updates tomorrow

The story of this part of the Tagore Desert has come to an end, and the following will be a new story.

The new story, drawing on the experience and lessons of the past forty chapters, will mainly optimize in two aspects.

The first is the optimization of the plot direction.

At first, my idea was to follow the plot or follow Xiao Yan, so the difficulty of writing in this way is very low.

But after suggestions from readers and authors and my serious thinking, I still decided not to follow the plot.

The bondage of following the plot to Madara is still too great, and many plots can even be said to be unnecessary for Madara.

In order to better present the effect, it is better not to follow the plot, but also to liberate Madara's character and strength to the greatest extent.

I'm re-watching Dou Po now, and I've seen Noire and Canaan Academy so far.

The itinerary of the last few dozen chapters, the current outline is Warcraft Mountains → Alchemist Conference → Three-year agreement between Yunlanzong and Yunshan plus Soul Palace Guardian → Destroy the Soul Palace branch, attracting the attention of Soul Palace → Black Horn Territory seizes Han Fenghai’s heart flame →Canaan College wins the Falling Heart Flame.

For the follow-up outline, I am still continuing to read Doupa, and I will think about it after roughly finishing the complete book of Doupa today.

For Xiao Yan, it is enough to meet by chance at important junctures.

in fact.

Writing about Ban in the world of Dou Po, with Xiao Yan by his side is a bit different from the protagonist walking with Xiao Yan in Dou Po fans.

Because Xiao Yan, as an earth traveler (Dou Po No. [-] setting), is still a traveler who knows the whole plot of Naruto (the second setting of this article).

His existence is equivalent to a confidant who understands Ban. Just like us, his and other Doupo indigenous people's views and attitudes towards Ban can open up a sense of layering in writing.

For example, the battle in the King City of the Snake Human Race.

The snake-human fighting king is on the first floor, Furukawa and other fighting kings are on the second floor, Yun Yun, who has fought against Madara, is on the third floor, Yao Lao, who feels Madara's powerful soul power, is on the fourth floor, and the one who knows Madara's true strength Xiao Yan was on the fifth floor.

When writing this, the sense of hierarchy came out all at once, and without Xiao Yan, when writing a thing, there would be less sense of hierarchy between Yao Lao and Xiao Yan.

This is a matter of web writing. As a reader, it may be difficult to realize when reading it. Most of them feel that it is quite smooth, and then there is no poisonous point.

To briefly summarize, Xiao Yan's role in this article is very different from his role in other Dou Po fans.

I say this, hoping to understand.

Let me sum it up, let Xiao Yan only appear at important nodes, and let Madara go his own way.

This is an optimization of the plot direction.

The second is the optimization of the spot behavior.

Some readers reported that Madara's writing was not aggressive enough, and it was a bit too wordy.

Indeed, I discovered it myself.

I'm afraid that I can't grasp the degree between domineering and domineering. If domineering is not good, it will be written as arrogant and unreasonable, not the domineering personality of Madara himself.

Then when there were too many things... I wrote it as cold.

I thought I had written 200 million characters of Madara, who are all important supporting roles in Naruto, so I knew him well enough.

But when the plot departed from the fixed Naruto Four Wars battlefield and became more diverse, and when various daily life appeared, I found that I still need to further improve my grasp of Madara's character.

Let me take a closer look at the character design here, hoping to make a better writing effect.

that's all.

PS: There are only two updates today, and four updates tomorrow.

(End of this chapter)