March Simulation: I Pushed One Piece World Sideways

Chapter 143 Rebellion
I just wrote about retreating and exiting, and that’s one of the things that makes readers particularly abrupt. In addition, the super demon Mo Fan was directly washed into bones by the light banning curse.

Mu Ningxue cast two forbidden curses by herself, and one with dual elements. It was really too abrupt to injure one and still be able to walk.

Because it's over.

It can be seen from the sea monster chapter that it has begun to be unfinished.

By the end of the finale, the magic capital was still flooded, and no one cared about it.

Suddenly the whole family of the Black Church died, and then the Holy City fought again, and several major human magic organizations fought.

The siren had a question mark on his face, am I so unworthy?

Chaos is a setting that is forced to increase Mu Ningxue's strength. Some people really feel that there is no sense of disobedience and support it so much.

The chaos is written wherever it is edited, and if it does not conform to the original setting, another setting is forced to be added.

It's just that Mu Ningxue's long-term non-participation in the main line is already outrageous.

And whoever told you that the combat power collapsed, you don't understand Mu Ningxue's settings at all.

The ice crystal brake bow is the lifeblood of the entire Mu family, and this bow has absorbed the cultivation of countless people.

A small piece of debris is almost a high-level, even super-level is possible, Mu Ningxue has filled this bow and arrow phone.

Why can't you use this to cast the forbidden spell? The Mu family is so powerful because of this, okay?
Haven't participated in the main line for a long time.

Mu Ningxue is not a heroine who will go out with the male protagonist. Let's figure this out. Mu Ningxue runs the family alone.

She is qualified to use the resources of the entire family, and the talent that has been laid before is not bad.

Besides Mo Fan, who is number one in Imperial Capital Academy and number one in Apple, why can't he become the number one ice mage in the world?

It evolved from Fengpan-Tianluo, it is the mage temporarily suppressing the strong wind barrier of Fengpan Tianluo under his feet.

As soon as the target hits at an extremely fast speed, the suppression will be canceled immediately, so the wind disk Tianluo that has been suppressed for a long time will turn into a super strong wind wall whirlwind.

Fly away the approaching target at once.

Flame drops fell like a shower, and immediately burned violently after touching the object, forming a large sea of ​​flames.

Sky Flame Funeral - Hellfire (high-level fire system).

There is only one hellfire stone in the sky, and as it gets closer to the ground, you will find that the hellfire is huge.

The whole Flint even roared like a devil from hell.

This novel is almost 1750 chapters written now, and the protagonist has also stepped from a teenager to a young man.

Personally, I feel that one of the biggest failures of the novel is the character of the protagonist, especially the issue of emotional intelligence.

I want to write a story of a dick turning around through unremitting efforts and talent, and finally created a protagonist with 0 EQ.

If this is the case when you are a teenager, it is still bloody and passionate, and it looks very interesting, but it is boring to have such a low EQ when you are almost 25.

Many things can obviously be resolved through diplomatic rhetoric, but something has to be done.

Moreover, the jumps between chapters are too large, which often gives people the feeling that the plot cannot be connected.And I often complain that I'm about to die and I'm going to collapse.

Well, it can be explained earlier that I am not in good health recently, and I need to rest for about a month to two months, so it will be over if it becomes a day for a while?

As for complaining so much?
For the first time, I even carried it with readers, I don’t know what I thought.

As for the rigorous division of strength in the early stage, the various cheats and running accounts in the later stage obviously give people the feeling that Jiang Lang's talent is exhausted.

The death of a retired curse mage on the Antarctic continent can be said to make people understand the horror of nature, so why not do the same with the black dragon?

The black dragon has existed for so long, no matter what, it is the emperor of Asia, right?

Just surrendered?
And from the conversation between Asariya and Norman, it seems that Black Dragon and Wentai still have some connection.

After all, the black snake was in the moulting period and its strength plummeted, and it was almost killed by a bunch of super-orders, but the black dragon didn't.

Just like that, he was half-conquered and became mentally retarded.

It really feels like a failure.

This is also one of the major failures of the novel, right?
It stands to reason that the super-level in the pyramid is the most reasonable, after all, the last dark sword master is the orthodox monarch and not a sub-monarch.

But relying on a bunch of high-ranking people to forcibly break through, the dark sword master of a sub-monarch in front needs a few powerful super-level mages to do it, let alone an orthodox monarch?
It takes at most half a year from going out to the pyramids to meeting people from the ancestral family to playing Qinling, and the age is still at 24 or 25. What's the difference between half a year?

As a result, only a few departments were completely perfected, and the most important spiritual realm of the space department was not mentioned at all.

After all, Heidi had been with them for so long, but she didn't say a word when they parted, which was ridiculous.

Saying something is only a line, a dozen or so words.

It's not just lazy right?
It's more of an attitude issue.

I have always thought that the most beautiful part is when I finish playing Leng Jue.

Of course, there are countless noisy points, but forget it, I hope Luan Pang can write high-quality novels after resting during this period.

Unless the burning of the bird is an important foreshadowing, there will be a fascinating development behind.

Otherwise, Qin Ling would be the same thing. If that Li, if he still had a part in the show, he must have been surprised by Mo Fan's strength improvement speed again.

Then even the proud Yalong couldn't compare to Mo Fan's summoned beast, and his mentality collapsed.

If there is no scene behind.

Is his existence only for Jiang Shaoxu? I feel that if this is the case, then the design of this character is a bit redundant.

Totally agree with the poster, I feel that I have exhausted my talent and my thoughts are confused.

Why is the plot before the catastrophe of the ancient capital so good?
Because Mo Fan can only rely on himself, if he can't fight, he has to run, if he doesn't fight, he has to die.

On the other hand, after the catastrophe of the ancient capital, especially starting from the Taklimakan Desert, all instances of Mo Fan are more like participants than protagonists. Why do you say that?

Copy is anticlimactic.

The place where the Taklamakan Desert got the soul fire was only on the periphery. It was the ancient king, not Mo Fan, who saved Apple from the crisis in Beiyuan.Mo Fan no longer has the momentum to move forward, why?
[-]. Insufficient strength (the most critical).

[-]. The world has become revolving around Mo Fan, but Borah, the Totem Black Snake Ancient King, and Yue Ehuang came to the rescue.

[-]. The IQ of the villain is seriously insufficient.

[-]. There are too many copies but there is no place to shine

[-]. The famous demon empires in the inland area of ​​Apple include the Undead Empire, Kunlun Empire, Dongting Lake Tribe, Qinling Tribe, Nanshan Tribe, and Northern Wild Beasts. Any one of them is a large copy, as well as Red Devils, Black Holy See, Yizhisha and Siren Empire can write.

As a result, a super-level awakened water n days, a super-level mage and a group of mid-level and low-level mages chattered.

Just like a lion is arguing with mice and ants, does Mo Fan have the awareness and courage of a strong man, and he still thinks he is a middle-level mage?
As a result, the super-level awakened element system is earth system, are you kidding me?
Why does the super-level awakened soil element have side effects, so is it possible that Mo Fan is just a garbage awakening for elementary and intermediate levels, and only brings a whiteboard?
(End of this chapter)