The system asked me to be a teacher

Chapter 452 On Writing a Composition
As soon as he said this, everyone couldn't help being stunned.

The official content of this competition?
Isn't the game over?I'm done singing.

I heard Wang Xu continue: "Next, our staff will extract the main elements from the songs everyone sings, and you must show your talents accordingly!

We will score based on your talent display. "

Everyone: "???"

Talent show?What the hell?

But some smart people have already reacted.

Just now Wang Xu just asked everyone to sing, and did not judge the corresponding scores according to the songs, which is obviously very unreasonable.

After all, there are so many people singing, everyone listens to the previous part and forgets the latter part. If the score cannot be given in time, the final result will be very inaccurate.

did not expect……

At the same time, they were also taking pleasure in other people's misfortune. If you judge the quality of the songs, Fang Zhenyuan from Zhiyuan Middle School is definitely the No. 1 deserved.

Now it is different, at least he still has the power to fight.

Seeing that many people didn't understand, Wang Xu smiled and said, "Everyone, don't worry, I have a template here, let me show you first."

As he spoke, he waved his hand, and immediately a staff member moved over to a stereo.

Click to play.

"It used to be cold in winter, rain and water in summer,
In autumn, your voice is warm, warm, warm
You said that there was a vast expanse of white snow behind the house at that time
In the valley there is a golden flag fluttering in the strong wind
......"

In Class [-], Grade [-], when the song was playing, everyone looked at Zheng Miao.

Zheng Miao was also a little surprised, she didn't expect Wang Xu to play the song she sang.

Including Mi Le, also looked this way.

Apart from "Learning to Meow", this song is her favorite.

Now being taken out, she was instinctively excited.

When the singing stopped, Wang Xu said with a smile: "This song describes the scene of the recovery of all things in spring, so here comes my question. Please write an article related to spring based on this."

All students: "..."

write an essay?What the hell?

Unexpectedly, before they could think about it, Wang Xu said again: "By the way, this article only has one minute to conceive."

All students: "???"

Everyone was stunned, 1 minute?

Although all the top students came here this time, to be honest, not many good articles were written.

And if an article wants to stand out, what it needs is inspiration and careful polishing.

As a result, you didn't give me inspiration and time to polish. I'd be damned if I could write good text.

Everyone's reaction was exactly as Wang Xu expected, he said with a chuckle, "I think many people are anxious, so let's relax before the game starts.

Raise your hand if anyone has heard this song! "

Almost 100% of the people raised their hands.

Wang Xu chuckled: "That's right, seeing that this song is very popular, do you know who the singer is? If you know, don't let go."

This time, more than half of the people who raised their hands immediately decreased. After all, those who can come here are top students. When everything is on fire, it is playing everywhere, and it is normal for everyone to hear it occasionally.

But it is more difficult to get them to pay attention to the singer.

Although the age of fifteen or sixteen is the best age for star chasing, it does not mean that everyone is chasing stars.

Wang Xu smiled: "It doesn't matter if you haven't heard it, then let me tell everyone, the singer of this song is here!"

The expressions of the students instantly relaxed.

They don't chase stars, but it doesn't mean they don't know what it means to be a star.

Especially for a best-selling song, even if the singer is not famous, he will become a well-known and excellent musician in the near future.

Seeing that everyone's appetites were whetted, Wang Xu said: "Speaking of which, everyone really wants to meet this classmate, right? Let's invite singer Zheng Mao to come on stage, shall we?"

The applause sounded, boiling like boiling water.

Zheng Miao was obviously fooled by Wang Xu's coquettish operation.

You compete yours, what does this have to do with me?
Just as he didn't know what to do, the voice of Confucius and Mencius sounded in his ears: "What are you still doing in a daze, go over!"

"Ah? Oh!"

Zheng Miao nodded and walked towards the podium in a daze.

When she stood on the stage, did she suddenly come back to her senses?

who I am?where am I?What am I doing?
Wang Xudao: "Student Zheng Miao, why don't you introduce yourself to everyone first?"

Zheng Miao took the microphone and smiled slightly: "Hi everyone, I'm Zheng Miao, and the song "All Things Live" was indeed sung by me."

After a short period of astonishment, she has recovered, and her whole behavior has become calm and composed.

After all, he is a well-known singer who has been on a lot of stages and seen countless worlds.

But Wang Xu said: "Student Zheng Miao, your introduction is too simple. I remember that there was a talent contestant named Mi Le who sang your song."

Zheng Miao nodded: "That's right, she sang "Learning to Meow", Mi Le is a very well-behaved and lovely girl, I must give her more points later!
Miller, come on!I support you! "

Wang Xu: "..."

He gave Zheng a helpless glance.

You must know that this is a competition, and as the organizer, you need a fair and just competition environment.

But Zheng Miao blatantly solicited votes for others.

It's fine if she's talking about Zhiyuan Middle School, and he can stop it, but the other party is talking about other schools, and if he speaks, he will offend others, and he can't find a reason to speak.

But if you don't speak up, it is inevitable that some schools will have ideas.

It's fine if he gets a high score, but if the score drops, he will more or less be blamed.

Receiving Wang Xu's serious expression, Zheng Miao smiled coldly in his heart.

Although I don't know if Wang Xu called him up on purpose, but without her consent in advance is the greatest contempt for her.

Since you are wrong, don't blame this girl for being rude.

It took a long time for Wang Xu to come back to his senses, and he chose to remain silent about this.

As an old fritter who has been in the rivers and lakes, he knows deeply that the best way to deal with this kind of thing is to pick it up gently and put it down slowly.

If you continue to entangle, it will only aggravate everyone's impression, and the matter will intensify.

"Okay, let's not talk nonsense, anyway, everyone knows that Zheng Miao is very good.

That being the case, how about we ask her to give us a demonstration? "

clap clap clap...

The applause sounded like thunder.

Zheng Miao was taken aback: "Demonstration? What demonstration?"

Wang Xudao: "It's very simple, just write an article with the theme of "spring" in "All Things Live."

Zheng Miao was in a dilemma for a moment.

Yes, literary creation is her biggest weakness.

Although her academic performance has greatly improved after following Confucius and Mencius, it is limited to science and some basic knowledge of literature.

After all, composition is such a thing, it is not difficult to get some 800 words, and it is not difficult to get a similar score.

After all, this is not an ordinary stage. Strictly speaking, its academic nature is even higher than that of the college entrance examination.

So my own level is not enough.

The most important thing is that she appeared as a model. If the writing is mediocre, it would be a big shame.

She didn't know what to do, and subconsciously looked at Kong Meng.

Since listening to the Confucius and Mencius Persuasion Association school, the other party is not only his academic tutor, but also the most trusted person in her life.

Once something goes wrong, the first thing she thinks of is Confucius and Mencius.

For example, what happened to my parents last time!

Then, she saw the thumbs up of Confucius and Mencius.

With the encouragement of Confucius and Mencius, Zheng Miao's flustered heart settled down again.

After thinking about it, she looked at Wang Xu and said, "To be honest, Mr. Wang, my writing skills are really not that good, and I may have to let everyone down."

Unexpectedly, Wang Xu said: "Student Zheng is too modest. As far as I know, your Chinese scores are the best in your class, especially the composition, which is almost perfect."

Zheng Miao was taken aback: "How do you know?"

Of course, when this news came, Huaqing was conducting an ad hoc investigation of Zheng Miao, and of course this must not be said.

If people know that the school will deliberately target No.1 in each round of competition, there is a high probability that it will arouse public outrage.

Wang Xu didn't change his face: "It's very simple, because my daughter is also your fan, she is not only a fan, but also a super fan, and she likes to collect everything about you when she is free.

I listened a lot, and knew a little bit.

Of course, this matter is only my personal behavior, and has nothing to do with this competition, and has nothing to do with Huaqing University. "

Regarding Wang Xu's explanation, Zheng Miao didn't say anything, she just said: "But I'm really not good at composition. The main reason for my high score in the last competition was my teacher."

Wang Xu was taken aback: "Your teacher?"

Zheng Miao said: "That's right, the Chinese teacher, he told me a method of writing essays. Before that, my essay score has been hovering around the passing line, but now even if I can't get a full score, it is basically close."

Wang Xu was even more puzzled: "One method can change you so much? I don't believe it!"

The middle school students at the scene also shook their heads.

In their view, to write an excellent composition requires accumulation and practice.

How could it be possible for one method to give enlightenment, this is not a martial arts novel, it is still good for passing on skills.

Zheng Mou glanced at Wang Xu: "Believe it or not, the method is there, never give up..."

Wang Xu: "..."

Why are you still writing poems?

"Since this is the case, can Zheng Zheng share this method with us? I think everyone here must be looking forward to it."

Others cheered up, too, wondering what it was that worked so well.

Zheng Miao nodded: "No problem, just don't dislike me for wasting your time."

Wang Xu was stunned: "You really want to talk?"

Zheng Miao: "What? No way!"

Wang Xu realized that he had made a slip of the tongue, and quickly made amends: "Okay, of course!"

In his opinion, if there is such a method, Zheng Miao should cherish it by himself. Otherwise, if everyone has learned it, how can he have an advantage in the exam?

did not expect……

This time I am narrow-minded!

Zheng Miao smiled faintly: "Actually, this method is very simple, and I call it the 'segmented writing method'.

Many people have a distress when writing a composition, not knowing what to write.

After all, an article needs 800+ words, and even a composition for junior high school students needs 600 words. "

Everyone couldn't help nodding, this was their biggest trouble.

Zheng Miao: "For this situation, I specifically asked Teacher Kong, and he told me this method.

He said that it is difficult to write 800 words for an article, but it is much easier to write 80 words.

I was right when I thought about it, 80 words only takes two or three minutes.

Teacher Kong continued, since 80 characters are easy to write, why can't you divide a composition into 10 parts?

Think about what to write in the first part, and then plan what to write in the second part...

In this regard, he also gave an example specifically combining the method of creating an argumentative essay.

As we all know, argumentative essays are divided into "introduction-argument-link-knot."

According to this definition, it can be divided into four parts to write.

The first part "quote", as the name suggests, is to quote the materials or arguments provided in the composition, if there are corresponding poems, you can add them.

For example, when writing about looking at a problem from different angles, add "Looking horizontally as a ridge and as a side as a peak, with different heights from near and far".

To write about studying hard, use "Black hair doesn't know how to study hard early, and white hair regrets studying late", or "The lights are on at three o'clock and the chicken is at five o'clock, it's time for men to study."

To write about parents' love, use "the thread in the hands of a loving mother, and the clothes on the body of a wandering child", and write about the impermanence of the world, "People have sorrows and joys, and the moon has cloudy and sunny cycles"...

Combining poems with quoted arguments, adding a sentence or two, 50 words is no problem, right? "

As soon as these words came out, everyone couldn't help but nod their heads.

They were not surprised by Zheng Miao's argument, but by her accumulation of poetry.

At the same time, he also scoffed at Zheng Miao's claim that he could not write essays, and that he could use poems flexibly, and said that he could not write, shameless?
It's just that they didn't know that these were all summed up by Confucius and Mencius and taught to the students. Not only Zheng Miao mastered it alone, but the entire second and first class of senior high school were extremely proficient.

I heard Zheng Miao continue to speak: "The first paragraph is finished, with 50 characters, and then I will write the second paragraph, which is the so-called 'discussion'.

Discussion refers to discussing the point of view you quoted. Another way is to briefly introduce how this point of view is correct and how it is good. It is not difficult to add 100 words, right? "

Everyone nodded. This is indeed not difficult. Many students even wanted to say, I can write 150 words.

The third step, Lenovo!

It is to combine your arguments and make you think of something.

In most cases, they are short stories from ancient and modern China and foreign countries related to the argument, and the most commonly used ones are ancient allusions.

For example, if you want to write about the impact of the environment on learning, you can give examples of Meng’s mother’s relocation three times, and a scholar’s ​​three-day farewell. ...

Xiao Heyue chasing after Han Xin expresses knowing people and being good at responsibility, Yanzi makes Chu express courage and wisdom, Su Wu Muyang expresses persistence and perseverance, and laughing at people's city expresses pleasure and harms the country...

Throughout the 5000 years of China, the world is so big, and there are too many examples that can be used. You can just find two or three, one for a detailed discussion in 250 words, one for a brief discussion of 150 words, and one for a simple mention of two sentences in 50 words. It is not difficult, right? ?

That's 600 words.

As for the remaining two hundred words...

Otherwise, as I said above, you write 30 characters each, and you have 750 again, right?

people...

And finally the ending.

Write another 50 words, which can be collected with fables, philosophies, etc.

The high-end atmosphere is high-grade, and it is difficult to think of a high score.

After finishing speaking, she continued: "Of course, the most difficult part of this is the historical stories involved in the alliance.
You can usually collect more similar materials. Of course, you can’t find them. There is a material article on the Internet that must be done in 10 years. You can read it, and it only costs 18 yuan.

18 yuan, you can’t buy it at a loss, you can’t be fooled..."

(End of this chapter)