The system asked me to be a teacher

Chapter 156 Facing the sea, spring flowers bloom
Without hesitation, Han Qingyun clicked on his tablet directly, only to see that his song [Yesterday Today Tomorrow] was displayed on it:
Yesterday you were innocent, young and lively
full of hope and rejoicing
Today your city is deep, melancholy and dull
exhausted, exhausted
What will happen to you tomorrow?

I don't know
But it cannot be denied that life is always full of deep danger
and intense hardship

……

Throwing away the content, Han Qingyun looked directly at the sub-scores and comments next to him:

Small score: 100.

not bad!
Comments: This poem has concise words, profound content, full of philosophy, and thought-provoking, but it lacks a little positive energy, but this is just a family opinion, and it is not used as a scoring standard.

Shaking his head helplessly, although he is still satisfied with the results, he disagrees with the expert's comment that he lacks positive energy.

Because in Han Qingyun's view, works that can truly touch the depths of people's hearts are all tragedies.

Even if it begins as a comedy, it must end in tragedy.

Although the country is now trying its best to promote positive energy, it is only aimed at the selfish social status quo in the past few years, and has nothing to do with literary works.

If it is forced and far-fetched, it will only make people laugh.

Just as he was thinking about it, he suddenly heard Long Aotian yelling from the next door: "Mr. Kong is amazing, he is number one again!"

Unexpectedly, his words were met with blank stares from his teammate Zhen Tiehan: "Shhhhhhh! Is it necessary to shout so loudly? Besides, when is our Teacher Kong not number one?"

"Uh...Okay! I was exaggerating, I almost forgot "Encouraging Learning"..."

"..."

Han Qingyun: "???"

He quickly looked at the ranking in the lower right corner, and sure enough, he found a big 2 there!

"how can that be?"

Han Qingyun was stunned. The first time he saw Xiaofen just now, he let go of the big stone in his heart.

A small score of 100, as the name suggests, must be the well-deserved No. 1!

In other words, the champion of Team Four-Dimensional in this segment is secure!
So much so that he only cared about the comments of the expert group and didn't look at the ranking at all.

……

At this time, Zhang Yue's voice sounded again: "Okay, 5 minutes is up, do you have any objections to your rating and ranking?
No, then I will announce the promotion name now..."

"Wait, I have!"

No one spoke for a long time, and just when Zhang Yue was about to make an official announcement, a voice suddenly called out, it was Han Qingyun.

Zhang Yue was not annoyed by being interrupted for no reason. He smiled and said, "I wonder who this teacher is? Also, what doubts do you have about your grades?"

Han Qingyun pointed to his tablet computer and said, "I am Han Qingyun, the instructor of Yang Ziwen Team of Siwei Middle School. The small score given by the expert group for this poem I wrote is 100. As a full score, I want to ask why I am only second?"

The mentors of other teams couldn't help coughing violently upon hearing this.

What's happening here?
For the mentors of all the teams, everyone really wanted to pick on the faults of the expert group, so that they could get a few more points, so that the teams could be more confident in advancing.

It's a pity that the sub-points and comments given by the expert group to their works are very pertinent, even if they want to make suggestions, they have nothing to say.

Seeing that this article was about to be exposed by Zhang Yue, he was disappointed. Suddenly someone took the lead, and everyone was naturally extremely excited.

Because I can completely judge whether to follow the appeal in the next step based on the opinions and handling results of the leader.

As a result, if you don’t listen to it, you don’t know. When you hear it, you are startled.

This guy who dared to be the first to eat crabs, his team ranked second, and his poems were also ranked second...

Nima, are you sure you are really making comments?Instead of blatantly showing off?

Don't bring such a group of people who ridicule and slap your face!
Of course, this is just the thinking of most of the instructors who are worried about whether their team can successfully advance.

The doubts of some people who can think normally are also very normal: what Teacher Han said is no problem, you give others 100 points, but you don’t give it the first place, so how can you get the first place?

"This..." In fact, Zhang Yue also complained in his heart that Han Qingyun was troublesome, but since the other party raised it, it was impossible not to help him solve his doubts.

Only Zhang Yue didn't participate in the specific ranking, so he didn't know the reason.

Just about to contact the expert group to ask, a voice suddenly said: "Don't ask, I can give you an explanation for this matter."

But it was Li Yifu, the president of the [Ancient Prose Alliance Association], who had already stood on the stage at some point.

Li Yifu smiled and said to everyone: "Masters, students, hello everyone."

clap clap clap...

Seeing that he is so popular, President Li is also very happy: "First of all, I want to explain one thing, regarding the ranking of the works of the tutors, to be honest, the evaluation given by the expert group cannot be regarded as absolutely fair.

In particular, the distinction between the interval points between different echelons is somewhat blurred. If any mentor suffers from being eliminated because of this, I will apologize to you here. "

As soon as these words came out, the instructor, who was still a little bit critical, felt much calmer.

Yes, everyone's works are of the same level, and it is impossible to be absolutely fair.

If you suffer a little, you will suffer a little. To hear President Li apologize in person, even if you are eliminated, it is not in vain.

Li Yifu said, and said: "To tell the truth, Teacher Han's poem is actually very good.

Although there are still some details that can be refined, but considering that it only takes 30 minutes, plus the time for conception, there are not many people in the country who are better than him if he can write at this level.

Therefore, after careful consideration, I approved this full score.

Without further ado, let's take a look at Mr. Han's works together! "

"Yesterday you were innocent, young and lively

full of hope and rejoicing
......"

After reading it in one breath, the instructors couldn't help but nod their heads. This is indeed a good little poem.

Although the language is simple and unpretentious, it is very flavorful, especially after reading it several times in detail, you will have new insights.

Such a good poem, it should be no problem to give it the first place!

Han Qingyun held his head high, and couldn't help showing a smile. The fact that a short poem he wrote in a hurry was recognized by everyone was an extreme affirmation of his talent.

This is also the original intention that he has always loved literary creation.

Sure enough, I heard Li Yifu say: "In my opinion, there is no problem in giving Mr. Han a number one, and I did the same when I saw this poem for the first time.

It's just that I changed my mind later, it wasn't that I had a problem with Mr. Han, but that there can only be one first!
Next, please comment on the works of the mentor's poetry champion in this [Study Rich Five Cars] session! "

After hearing Li Yifu's previous words, Han Qingyun was very proud at first, but then he was taken aback for a moment, and then he was deeply dissatisfied.

Although he didn't say a word about Confucius and Mencius when he made his comments just now, Li Yifu didn't mention Confucius and Mencius first at all.

But Han Qingyun, who was very clear in his heart, firmly did not believe that this new teacher, who had just entered Zhiyuan not long ago, could surpass himself in poetry creation.

You know, he has nearly ten years of creative experience, and his excellent works published in written publications are no less than a thousand.

He took a deep breath and calmed down his mood. He really wanted to see what the other party wrote, so that President Li could directly deny him!
The big screen flashed, and eight incomparably clear characters came into view:
"Facing the Ocean, Spring and Blossom"

Be a happy man from tomorrow on

Feed horses, chop wood, travel the world
Caring about food and vegetables from tomorrow
I have a house,

Facing the Ocean, Spring and Blossom
From tomorrow, communicate with every loved one
tell them my happiness
That happy lightning told me
I will tell everyone
Give every river and every mountain a warm name
Stranger, I also bless you
May you have a bright future
May your lover be married

May you be happy in this world

I just want to face the sea, the spring is warm and the flowers are blooming
this poem...

After reading it again and again, Han Qingyun stopped talking in a daze.

In his heart, he suddenly thought of the comment that the expert group gave his poem: it lacks a little positive energy!

(End of this chapter)