For the King's Douluo Adventure

Chapter 111 Brainstorming

Hello readers.

I read the comments, and some people said that what I wrote recently was a bit messy. I also asked in the group, and the group friends also said that it was messy, so I came here to brainstorm and wanted to know which parts were messy. After all, I also I'm just a novice writer. I went abroad before graduating from elementary school, so please give me some advice.

There are also two chapters that were not updated yesterday, and one chapter may be updated together tomorrow, or it may be updated today. Please comment here, if you want me to update it directly, I will post it directly. (Minority obeys majority)

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