binary dead train

Chapter 70 A Little Word

Except for the one update in the morning to make up for the day before yesterday, there is no update.To be precise, yesterday was the one that was coded overnight the night before.Yesterday I slept until four in the afternoon (I'm a pig). I woke up and looked at the comments in the writer's backstage.

I visited the comment area before writing the third update today, and it was even more uncomfortable.Then, under the suggestion of book friends, some sentences that really seemed to affect the writing mentality were deleted.In fact, since the first recommendation, the exposure rate has increased, and more people have sprayed it. It may also be that there is a problem with my own mentality. The update has been very slow. The third night is my fault, although only one episode has been advanced.

Let me talk about other issues... When I got up today, I saw a comment that I couldn't accept. It probably said something like "you might as well stop writing it". To be honest, it was quite uncomfortable to read.

I will admit that the writing is not good, and I will admit that the writing is not good enough and the character creation is not good. I will learn slowly and improve slowly.I also know that the plot is old-fashioned. In the early stage, some old-fashioned routines were used to compare prices for the rhythm of service.There are still some that I didn’t read too carefully before, or I didn’t write well. I think the protagonist’s IQ has dropped, and I also admit it. .I didn’t notice details like the camera when I wrote it. It’s a BUG. Make a mistake.

There are also those who complain about the male lead's name to persuade him to quit, those who don't like urban drama, and those who complain about conflicts advancing the plot, and so on, I didn't say anything.

But "you might as well stop writing" is really uncomfortable for me, it encourages my eunuch, is it cut off? ? ? ?
But I thought about it again. Whether it’s negative or positive in the book review area, maybe some readers are angry and feel that I’m a little angry. I thought about a good idea and setting, and the chapter design of real life after the beginning is over. After so many plots, it feels like a waste.

It can only be that there is a problem with my own writing, my writing skills are poor, and I can't handle it well.Still need to work hard.

In fact, after finishing writing today's third watch, I don't have any temper at all.
In the past few days, including the later updates, I have written less about the plot in the direction of urban abilities, so I won’t spoil it later.As for the female characters...it's just a female character, there is no plot where you love me, I love you, we all love you...Of course readers can love me.

The second world of the train is also coming soon, um...the decarburization stock solution is too strong, and there are too many places to dig...

In fact, there are less every day, I feel very uncomfortable, I don’t even have the courage to watch the backstage, I used to have this kind of situation when I was writing old books.

It is a mentality problem, and I will try my best to adjust it.

Thank you for your support. In the future, it will be impossible for eunuchs.I won’t cut it, no matter how bad the writing is, I won’t cut it~
After the update has stabilized in the past two days, I will also prepare my resume and draw something.

It just so happens that there is a set of ready-made worldviews set by myself in the book, and a complete set of worldview works can also satisfy readers.

Veteran readers should know that I am doing 2D character-oriented game art, and I have also drawn some things for old books when my drawings were pretty bad.

Speaking of which, the world view setting of this book is more than 1 words. I just took it and voted for the copywriting team of Xishanju before, and I passed it...I didn't have an interview because I don't know Japanese.

So what you will see later is the settings that can be used to make games! ! ! ! (shock)

But so far, only a small part of the setting has actually appeared. (shh)
And setting this kind of thing, it still needs a cool enough plot to support it in online articles. I still have a lot to learn in this regard. (Please do not teach me to write a book...)
In fact, I also don’t like posting this kind of stuff in the chapters, I feel that it destroys the reader’s experience, so let’s do it~
In short, thank you for your rewards, recommendation tickets and monthly tickets for your support.

This book will be written to the end.

If you have a character you want to see, or a scene of a certain plot, you can leave a message in the book review area, and I will draw it first when I find time.

(I can type a thousand words, harm...)
(End of this chapter)