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Chapter 56 A little reflection after the so-called continuation

The continuation of this book started on June [-]nd and continued until the end of July, when the main text ended.

If you say why you wanted to continue writing the ending at that time, one is dissatisfaction with the hasty completion of the book, and the final outline was given in bed.One is to try myself and see how it responds after writing it out.

However, all behaviors that rely on love to generate electricity have an end, so as far as possible, I chose to end the continuation when I was stuck at chapter 400.

The ending is pretty good, and the process in the middle is not particularly hasty, so I personally feel that it is worthy of the outline given by Lai Bian, and there is no mess up.

Speaking of returning to the original work, let me briefly talk about my impressions of the second half of the original work.

In fact, the original rhythm of the whole book is in a slow process in the early and middle stages.And in the process, Lai Chuang opened up more and more branch lines, which was reflected in the sequel that I had to selectively cut off some of the branch lines and fan dramas.

But in the later part, the plot of the original work has a feeling of artificial acceleration, so when it comes to the last chapter where Ai and Murakami go out to rent a house, it is a bit abrupt to read.

If it is smoothed, there should be more space in the middle to start writing, but I just chose this way.

So when it comes to the sequel, some people think whether it is too urgent or something.My personal opinion on this is that since the emotional line in the original work chooses to move quickly instead of slowly advancing, then the emotional line in the sequel must not be advancing slowly.

Only then will there be the personal responses of the other girls at the beginning of the sequel. If Murakami does not choose a quick way to cut the mess, it will be impossible to win back the hearts of all of them.

Corresponding to this is the scattered insertion at the end of the sequel, the personal stories of the five girls.

As for whether the characters of the girls and Murakami will change during this process, it will definitely happen.For example, Ai, if she keeps the character design given in the early stage of Lai Bian, judging from the reaction after learning that Xiaoshui kissed Murakami, it is impossible for her to agree to share Murakami with the rest of the girls.

Another point is that all the characters are created by Lai Chuang after all, and endowed with their own characteristics and life.As the author of the sequel, no matter how much I continue to write, it is impossible to go beyond the scope of the already drawn, which is a kind of disrespect to the original work itself.

The characters in Lai Chuang's works are Lai Chuang's, not mine.

As a result, if the character is perfect, it is perfect, and there is nothing special about it.

After finishing the analysis of the original and the sequel, the next part is about the extra episode.

First of all, when did you write the episode?

The main text will be finished on July 26th, and I have something to deal with on July 30th, so the extra episode should start on August [-]st.

And as I said before, there are three extra episodes to be written.

One: No matter how difficult it is to break free from the shackles

Rather than calling it a side story, it is more appropriate to say it will be discussed later.It unfolds based on the background that Murakami wanted to leave the five girls for a short period of time, asked Nobunaga out for a trip, and was sold as the background.The time is set before Christmas, maybe Yoshima Sato will also make a brief appearance.As for the expected length, it is estimated to be two chapters.

Second: My youth love story is really no problem

This episode is written in the background of the third part of Chunwu, which is related to Hayami Saori.There is a certain degree of connection with the sequel plot, but it is not high, and there will be no intersection with the girls.The time setting is in April of the following year.The estimated length should be one chapter.

Part Three: Chasing the Light and Chasing the Shadow

This extra episode is based on the time when Yuko was before the Tokyo Barista Competition. It will not be very long, and it is estimated to be about two chapters.Specifically, he couldn't let go of this apprentice, and finally gave her a little hope.

Corresponding to this is that Yuzi will no longer have real contact with other girls, at most she will see news on similar social media or on TV.Estimated length should be two chapters.

In addition, I saw that some people said that they wanted to watch the extra episode of Sakura Win, or who won the extra episode.

With all due respect, if you want to see a one-line side story in a harem ending, I can only say that you are looking at the wrong place.Only the one-line ending will have a one-line side story, and in the harem ending, if the character has entered the harem, then when it comes to the character's one-line side story, what is the purpose of the harem ending?

In the case of getting along alone, can't it be regarded as a one-way ending?The personal story of each character can already be regarded as a single line, why do you have to watch a single line extra?

So apart from the Zayen and Yuzi mentioned in the episode, I can't do anything about the episodes of other characters.

Finally, I would like to talk about the feedback and my personal thoughts on the sequel, which can be regarded as pouring out black mud.

So far, the total collection has exceeded [-], and the total recommendation votes have exceeded [-].But the actual interaction has been decreasing. I don’t know if it’s because there are no new book friends introduced, or because I feel that continuing writing has become the norm, so just watch the plot in silence.

From the number of chapters and daily recommendations at the beginning of the continuation, to the number of chapters and daily recommendations at the end of the present, there is a slow downward trend.

In this case, I feel a little tired after each chapter.I have to say that when you were a reader looking forward to the plot and the excitement of reading the plot, when you changed your identity to become the author, it turned into the excitement of watching the plot develop and improve, and waiting for feedback.

This situation should be more obvious in similar non-commercial sequels.

The part waiting for feedback in the back is the vast majority, but this feedback does not look so good to me.For example, on the day of NO.20 in July, I decided on a whim to write out the personal report of farming in advance. As a result, the number of chapters mentioned can be ranked last among all chapters.

But in any case, I would like to thank a few book friends who have been expressing their opinions and complaining in the chapters, and many book friends voted for me every day.

thank you all.

Finally, it is still unknown what will be said after the end of the episode, and whether a new book will be written.Even if there is, it should be around September.

If I say that one day I really write a new book, I am willing to read the new book not because "ah, this is a continuation author, let's see how his new book is", but "this person writes well, let's see his new book" How?", that would be great.

(End of this chapter)