Altman King style
Chapter 233: Nightmare Coil
After hearing Feng Tianying's words, Bian put down the computer, came to the dining table, and began to eat.
Seeing Wang Hai's sad face, Feng Tianying turned to Wang Hai and said, "Why aren't you happy today?"
Feng Tianyingbian handed a piece of beef to Wang Hai's bowl, and then listened to Wang Hai talk about the unhappy things.Wanting to break Wang Hai out of his heart.
Wang Haibian said to Feng Tianying, "Yesterday, I added a heroine at the beginning according to the editor Pippi's intention, and in the 1 words of Chapter [-], only one male protagonist and one female protagonist appeared, but the editor said that the emotional Too little pulling to resonate with readers."
After hearing Wang Hai's words, Feng Tianyingbian said to Wang Hai, "Isn't emotional agitation your best thing? Why was emotional agitation rejected by the editor this time?"
Feng Tianying knew that before she fell in love with him, it was Wang Hai who wrote a novel. Although it didn't hit the market, it still earned a little manuscript fee, which was quite a lot. At that time, seeing that Wang Hai had a dream, she absolutely This man is very reliable, so I married him.
So Feng Tianying knew a little bit more or less, so she figured out how to help Wang Hai take the road ahead well.
"He said that emotional pull is not good enough, and multiple pulls must be made, that is, one chapter must maximize the pull of contradictions, such as cursing, one curse is not enough, at least three more times are needed to make readers feel resonance." Wang Hai told the wind. Tianying said.
At this time, in Nanyue Community, there was a light rain falling from the sky, lightning flashed and thunder rumbled, and the trees destroyed by the wind made buzzing sounds, but the citizens of Nanyue Community thought it was normal, All doing their own thing.
After Wang Hai finished speaking to Feng Tianying, it suddenly occurred to his head that what the editor Pippi said was very reasonable. After all, adding contradictions many times can indeed maximize the contradictions and arouse resonance.
"Haha, thank you Tianying, this meal tastes very delicious, let's eat a shrimp." Wang Hai said to Feng Tianying.
In order to reward Feng Tianying, Wang Hai peeled the skin of the shrimp and fed Feng Tianying himself. The two of them ate all the food within 10 minutes.
After Wang Hai finished eating, he returned to the computer and started to think about it.
At this time, in Nanyue Community, the heavy rain had already fallen two feet high, and among the rainwater, some of the rainwater slowly turned black and then quickly spread on the city walls of Nanyue Community, and the citizens of Nanyue Community had land. Already fell asleep.
After Wang Hai turned on the computer at this time, he began to conceive, and after 2 minutes, he was ready to directly enter the plot.
After Wang Hai finished writing the novel, he went to the bathroom to wash up, and Feng Tianying was already waiting on the bed for Wang Hai's arrival. After Wang Hai finished washing, he went back to the room and saw such a beautiful wife. Hai Zao couldn't help but quickly entered the bed.
At this time, in Nanyue Community, a pair of eyes suddenly opened, and then they kept destroying houses.And entering the corridor, the black water in the room also began to attack the citizens. The situation is not optimistic, and Lingcheng may be in danger of being destroyed at any time.
At this time, the combat room of the UC space base.
Shangguan Hongyu said to the vice-captain of Ai Yizhe, "Lingcheng, Nanyue District, a Magar monster appeared!"
Shangguan Hongyu originally thought that Lingcheng's heavy rain was too common, but Shangguan Hongyu never thought that this rain was not unusual, but rain that killed people!
"Hurry up, inform Ling Xiao, and let them go to Nanyue to destroy this Magal monster!" Vice Captain Ai Yizhe said to Shangguan Hongyu.
"Yes, I understand, vice-captain!" Shangguan Hongyu responded immediately after speaking to the vice-captain Ai Yizhe.
At this time, Ye Guang, who was sleeping in Fengai Garden, was also awakened by Di Shen Ultraman. After all, the appearance of the Magar monster made Di Shen Ultraman feel bad.
"Ye Guang, the consciousness of the residents of Nanyue Community has been controlled by the Magar monster at this time. The citizens of Nanyue Community are in danger, and the citizens of Nanyue Community may lose their lives at any time, Ye Guang." God Altman said to Ye Guang.
After Ye Guang heard about the Magar monster, he immediately woke up and responded to Di Shen Altman, "Is it really that serious?"
After Ye Guang finished speaking to Di Shen Altman, he looked at Ai Si who was sleeping soundly in front of him, and got out of bed slowly, so as not to quarrel with Ai Si.
"That's for sure, this Magar monster likes to control the enemy's consciousness and thoughts. If it is not eliminated quickly, all the citizens of Enris may be controlled by the Magar monster." Di Shen Altman Said to Ye Guang.
"Then what are you waiting for, hurry up and support." Ye Guang said to Di Shen Ultraman.
At this time, the Magar monster has controlled the consciousness of all the citizens of Lingcheng by its own means, and the disaster is still spreading to Fengcheng and other places.The Magar monster was very happy all the way.
After Ye Guangbian took out the Ultra Sublimation Stick, he shouted, "Di Shen Ultraman, in the form of Tiande claws!"
Altman Dishen flew towards the direction of Nanyue Community quickly, and arrived at the Magar monster earlier than Ling Xiao and the others.
Seeing this, the Magar monster immediately released its vine whip towards Ultraman Dishen. Dozens of vine whips were released in front of Ultraman Dishen. When Ultraman Dishen saw this, he jumped And got up, came to the back of the Magar monster, and escaped the blow of the Magar monster.
"Ding dong, the system prompts: There is a monster medal near the Nanyue community, please check it with the host." The system responded to Ye Guang.
After the system finished speaking to Ye Guang, Ye Guang, who was still fighting, glanced around to see where the monster medal the system said was, so that he could find the monster medal. Ye Guang thought, after finding the monster medal, There is still one thing left, that is, it can be merged into the sixth Ultra Medal, which makes Ye Guang feel that he is getting closer to twenty Ultra Medals.
Ultraman Dishen saw the Magar monster rushing towards him again, and Ultraman Dishen threw his weapon "Blade of Light" at the Magar monster.
At the same time, Ling Xiao and others also took five fighter jets to the sky above Nanyue Community. After seeing that the consciousness of the citizens of Lingcheng was controlled by the Magal monster, Dishen Altman kept releasing them. With my own light, I want to rescue all the citizens of Lingcheng.
"Supreme Sogo hits the light!"
Seeing Wang Hai's sad face, Feng Tianying turned to Wang Hai and said, "Why aren't you happy today?"
Feng Tianyingbian handed a piece of beef to Wang Hai's bowl, and then listened to Wang Hai talk about the unhappy things.Wanting to break Wang Hai out of his heart.
Wang Haibian said to Feng Tianying, "Yesterday, I added a heroine at the beginning according to the editor Pippi's intention, and in the 1 words of Chapter [-], only one male protagonist and one female protagonist appeared, but the editor said that the emotional Too little pulling to resonate with readers."
After hearing Wang Hai's words, Feng Tianyingbian said to Wang Hai, "Isn't emotional agitation your best thing? Why was emotional agitation rejected by the editor this time?"
Feng Tianying knew that before she fell in love with him, it was Wang Hai who wrote a novel. Although it didn't hit the market, it still earned a little manuscript fee, which was quite a lot. At that time, seeing that Wang Hai had a dream, she absolutely This man is very reliable, so I married him.
So Feng Tianying knew a little bit more or less, so she figured out how to help Wang Hai take the road ahead well.
"He said that emotional pull is not good enough, and multiple pulls must be made, that is, one chapter must maximize the pull of contradictions, such as cursing, one curse is not enough, at least three more times are needed to make readers feel resonance." Wang Hai told the wind. Tianying said.
At this time, in Nanyue Community, there was a light rain falling from the sky, lightning flashed and thunder rumbled, and the trees destroyed by the wind made buzzing sounds, but the citizens of Nanyue Community thought it was normal, All doing their own thing.
After Wang Hai finished speaking to Feng Tianying, it suddenly occurred to his head that what the editor Pippi said was very reasonable. After all, adding contradictions many times can indeed maximize the contradictions and arouse resonance.
"Haha, thank you Tianying, this meal tastes very delicious, let's eat a shrimp." Wang Hai said to Feng Tianying.
In order to reward Feng Tianying, Wang Hai peeled the skin of the shrimp and fed Feng Tianying himself. The two of them ate all the food within 10 minutes.
After Wang Hai finished eating, he returned to the computer and started to think about it.
At this time, in Nanyue Community, the heavy rain had already fallen two feet high, and among the rainwater, some of the rainwater slowly turned black and then quickly spread on the city walls of Nanyue Community, and the citizens of Nanyue Community had land. Already fell asleep.
After Wang Hai turned on the computer at this time, he began to conceive, and after 2 minutes, he was ready to directly enter the plot.
After Wang Hai finished writing the novel, he went to the bathroom to wash up, and Feng Tianying was already waiting on the bed for Wang Hai's arrival. After Wang Hai finished washing, he went back to the room and saw such a beautiful wife. Hai Zao couldn't help but quickly entered the bed.
At this time, in Nanyue Community, a pair of eyes suddenly opened, and then they kept destroying houses.And entering the corridor, the black water in the room also began to attack the citizens. The situation is not optimistic, and Lingcheng may be in danger of being destroyed at any time.
At this time, the combat room of the UC space base.
Shangguan Hongyu said to the vice-captain of Ai Yizhe, "Lingcheng, Nanyue District, a Magar monster appeared!"
Shangguan Hongyu originally thought that Lingcheng's heavy rain was too common, but Shangguan Hongyu never thought that this rain was not unusual, but rain that killed people!
"Hurry up, inform Ling Xiao, and let them go to Nanyue to destroy this Magal monster!" Vice Captain Ai Yizhe said to Shangguan Hongyu.
"Yes, I understand, vice-captain!" Shangguan Hongyu responded immediately after speaking to the vice-captain Ai Yizhe.
At this time, Ye Guang, who was sleeping in Fengai Garden, was also awakened by Di Shen Ultraman. After all, the appearance of the Magar monster made Di Shen Ultraman feel bad.
"Ye Guang, the consciousness of the residents of Nanyue Community has been controlled by the Magar monster at this time. The citizens of Nanyue Community are in danger, and the citizens of Nanyue Community may lose their lives at any time, Ye Guang." God Altman said to Ye Guang.
After Ye Guang heard about the Magar monster, he immediately woke up and responded to Di Shen Altman, "Is it really that serious?"
After Ye Guang finished speaking to Di Shen Altman, he looked at Ai Si who was sleeping soundly in front of him, and got out of bed slowly, so as not to quarrel with Ai Si.
"That's for sure, this Magar monster likes to control the enemy's consciousness and thoughts. If it is not eliminated quickly, all the citizens of Enris may be controlled by the Magar monster." Di Shen Altman Said to Ye Guang.
"Then what are you waiting for, hurry up and support." Ye Guang said to Di Shen Ultraman.
At this time, the Magar monster has controlled the consciousness of all the citizens of Lingcheng by its own means, and the disaster is still spreading to Fengcheng and other places.The Magar monster was very happy all the way.
After Ye Guangbian took out the Ultra Sublimation Stick, he shouted, "Di Shen Ultraman, in the form of Tiande claws!"
Altman Dishen flew towards the direction of Nanyue Community quickly, and arrived at the Magar monster earlier than Ling Xiao and the others.
Seeing this, the Magar monster immediately released its vine whip towards Ultraman Dishen. Dozens of vine whips were released in front of Ultraman Dishen. When Ultraman Dishen saw this, he jumped And got up, came to the back of the Magar monster, and escaped the blow of the Magar monster.
"Ding dong, the system prompts: There is a monster medal near the Nanyue community, please check it with the host." The system responded to Ye Guang.
After the system finished speaking to Ye Guang, Ye Guang, who was still fighting, glanced around to see where the monster medal the system said was, so that he could find the monster medal. Ye Guang thought, after finding the monster medal, There is still one thing left, that is, it can be merged into the sixth Ultra Medal, which makes Ye Guang feel that he is getting closer to twenty Ultra Medals.
Ultraman Dishen saw the Magar monster rushing towards him again, and Ultraman Dishen threw his weapon "Blade of Light" at the Magar monster.
At the same time, Ling Xiao and others also took five fighter jets to the sky above Nanyue Community. After seeing that the consciousness of the citizens of Lingcheng was controlled by the Magal monster, Dishen Altman kept releasing them. With my own light, I want to rescue all the citizens of Lingcheng.
"Supreme Sogo hits the light!"
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