Control the Butterfly Effect from Demon Slayer: Blade

Why is this chapter a closing reflection instead of a closing testimonial?
Because the concluding remarks are in the next chapter, this chapter is basically reflection, or self-criticism, or complaining.

In short, this is a chapter full of negative emotions, everyone can read it or not, and at the same time show mercy.

So without talking too much nonsense, let's start to reflect directly, and reflect on the shortcomings and bad points of this novel.

First of all, the first point at the beginning is that the protagonist is not well chosen.

The protagonist I chose crossed over and became Kuangyue. Of course, because I wanted to cut it off from Kuyue, I changed my name to Horigaku.

The choice of this role is really not good. I don’t know how many people hate the role of Yue Yue. This character is bullying and afraid of toughness. It is extremely vile. He can easily betray his family and companions for his own life.

This is a very annoying character in itself, a very annoying villain.

Many readers immediately abandon the book when they see the protagonist transmigrating into this role.

Well, it was a mistake on my part.

Why did I choose to make the protagonist cross into a mountain in the first place?
I just want to increase a sense of contrast and gap.

You see, the protagonist has become such an annoying villain through time travel, what should he do?Next is to carry out the villain to the end?Or just wash it off?

I have such an idea.

But unfortunately, I obviously made a wrong calculation. From the very beginning, I made the main character time travel a wrong character. I am afraid that many readers just read the introduction of this book and don’t want to read it.

Well, this lesson is quite heavy.

This lesson tells me that before I don't have the pen power to control the protagonist to transmigrate into a villain, I should not be so ambitious and engage in such routines.

Without this diamond, there is no need for this porcelain work.

The second point, which has been criticized by many readers so far, is the issue of the heroine.

The question of the heroine can be roughly divided into three parts, which are divided into upper part, middle part and lower part.

Let me talk about the previous part first.

The question about the heroines in the above part is the three heroines I set at the beginning, Nezuko, Butterfly Ninja, and Mitsuri.

Since there are three heroines, it is obvious that they are going to open a harem.

Some readers like to watch the harem, and some readers like single heroines, so this has changed at this time, those who like to watch the harem may continue to read, and those who like single heroines just give up.

There is no way.

Radishes and vegetables have their own preferences, so I have no way to solve the first half of the problem.

The problem with some heroines in the middle is that each heroine spends different pages.

If there are readers who can read it from beginning to end, they will find that among the three heroines, the one with the most scenes is undoubtedly Butterfly Ninja.

Next is Mitsuri.

The one with the fewest roles and length is Nezuko, and there is almost no space for her.

Obviously there are three heroines, and as an author, I can't favor one over the other, even if there is not much room for them, at least it should be about the same.

It's really unfair to be so far apart from each other.

Regarding this point, I have to admit that I did a very bad job, especially when it came to dealing with the heroine of Nezuko.

Obviously Nezuko is the first heroine to appear on stage, but in the end, she basically has no part in the scene. Except for the presence of Yoshiwara Flower Street, the rest of the time is basically sleeping!

I can also understand the feelings of readers. If readers who like Nezuko see such a thing, they will definitely find it annoying and annoying.

I admit again that this was my mistake, I was beaten and scolded obediently, please be merciful, grandpas.

Why do you make this mistake?

To put it bluntly, my writing skills are not enough, the plot is not enough, and the characters are not enough.

On the one hand, the heroine, Nezuko, does sleep a lot, on the other hand...

On the other hand, Nezuko basically acts as a ghost throughout the novel.

Once she turns back into a human, it means that this novel is coming to an end.

In the ghost state, Nezuko basically can't speak, and usually only speaks a few modal particles, and can only appear at night, not during the day.

This leads to, I want to increase the length of Nezuko, to increase the sense of presence of the heroine, or to further increase the emotional drama between the protagonist and him, but this cannot be done.

The first thing to bear the brunt is, the heroine who cannot appear during the day and cannot speak, how should the protagonist communicate with this heroine?If you can't even communicate, how can you enhance your relationship?

This problem was discovered not long after I wrote it.

It’s a pity that I still regarded Nezuko as the first protagonist at the beginning, and it’s a pity that I chose Nezuko on the cover of this novel at the beginning.

Now that I think about it, I was really stupid.

I thought I could write like this, but as I was writing, I found that I couldn’t continue writing.

Then there is the next part of the heroine question.

This is also the most serious problem among heroines.

It's my inconsistency!

Obviously at the beginning I swear that there will be three heroines, but then two more were added inexplicably, one is Zhu Shi and the other is Li Xia.

This kind of back-and-forth, saying something but going back on it, is really too bad.

This is probably the most criticizing point in this novel, I admit my mistake, I admit my scolding.

This is also the biggest mistake I think I found.

You can scold me if you want, as long as you don’t greet my family, it’s okay to greet my personality. After all, I made mistakes first, and I will be beaten when I make mistakes.

It really deserves to be scolded and beaten. This kind of backlash like a third party intervening is really annoying!

Especially when the three heroines couldn't be written well, two heroines were added in a daze. This is no longer as simple as superfluous.

Then continue to reflect, why did Hao Duan Duan add these two heroines?

The first is why Jiazhushi.

Readers who have read the whole novel of mine should know that the character Zhu Shi appeared relatively early.

As for the role of Zhu Shi, when he appeared on the stage and was described by me, he was indeed more attractive.

When I was reading those chapters, many readers left messages, saying that Zhu Shi should be accepted, or just hug the thigh and eat soft food!

To be honest, I was very excited at the time and planned to increase the three heroines to four heroines.

But after thinking about it, I felt that it would be troublesome to write three heroines, and it would be even more troublesome to add another heroine, so I put it on hold for now.

Until later, at about the later stage of this novel, I don't know why I started to get confused.

Or brain pumping.

In other words, my brain got hot, and I thought it would be okay to add another heroine!

So I decided to add Zhu Shi to the heroine.

When I had this plan, my brain went further.

At that time, I thought, since Zhu Shi has joined the heroine, it's okay to add another one, right?Let's just add Li Xia to it!

Just like that, as soon as the brain became hot and the brain twitched, these two heroines were added.

Thinking about it now, I feel a little regretful.

Of course, there must be readers who like these two characters very much, and feel that it is good to add these two characters to the heroine, or they like to see it that way.

I am admitting my mistakes, blaming myself so much, and repenting so much here, which is a betrayal of this part of the readers, and these readers are definitely not happy.

But one thing has to be admitted, that is, the addition of two heroines, at least in the eyes of most readers, should be bad.

Then there is no way, the minority obeys the majority has always been our principle here.

As an author, I have to take into account the feelings of most readers.

So I can only characterize the fact that there are two more heroines as a mistake here.

My mind is a little messed up.

All in all, this incident is probably the biggest mistake in this novel!Should at least be one of the biggest mistakes!

The above is the problem of the heroine.

The third problem is water.

About the water thing...

To be honest, I don't have much choice.

In the beginning, I was very energetic about this novel, so I could speed up the plot without being too lazy. After all, I was focusing most of my energy on it at the time.

But later, in the middle and late stages, there was no other way.

It is impossible for me to devote so much time to this novel every day.

Moreover, so much energy was instilled in the early stage, which greatly reduced my interest, and I was not as serious about this novel as it was at the beginning.

As I write, I can't help but water up.

It was also a big mistake, I must admit.

The fourth point is the collapse of combat power.

Uh... this is an error, or deficiency, that most works may have.

Sure enough, this novel of mine also made such mistakes and had such deficiencies.

Especially the combat power of the protagonist, it is really broken and outrageous.

In the early stage of the novel, at the beginning, the protagonist was able to kill the Wu Yuhu of the Winding String relatively quickly, but later on, when it was his turn to fight the Wu Yuhu of the Winding String, it took so much effort.

From here, the combat power is relatively broken, and some readers may feel uncomfortable seeing this.

At the end, especially after the protagonist mastered Flying Thunder God, the protagonist's combat power collapsed to a very strange degree.

Why is it a very strange degree?
Because obviously I am the author, I added many settings to my protagonist to make my protagonist so strong, but sometimes I can't figure out how strong my protagonist is.

No way, I can only add a setting.

Use Wu Mi, the villainous big boss, as the unit of combat measurement to estimate the protagonist's approximate combat power.

All in all, when the final villain and big boss of a novel become the unit of combat measurement, the specific combat power of the protagonist is obviously not satisfactory.

Even after watching it myself, I feel that the protagonist's combat power has a feeling of being decoupled from everyone.

Alas...that was a big mistake.

The fifth point is the writing style, or writing power.

This problem is hard power, and it cannot be improved in a short while. I can only say that we will work harder and learn more in this area in the future.

The sixth point is that the plot is not well grasped, and the plot of the novel is not well set.

There were many holes I dug, but in the end I couldn't fill them.

I filled in some pits, straightened out the logic, and filled in the loopholes, but the filling was also very reluctant.

There are two worst places in this aspect of the plot.

The first place is to humiliate Fengzhu Immortal Chuan Shimi.

There is nothing to say, and when I wrote that, my brain twitched again!

You can scold me whatever you want, as long as you don't ask my family how to scold me!
The second place is about the plot of the system.

Many readers don't like that the golden finger of the system has its own ideas, because it will give a sense of insecurity and instability, and always feel that the system will bite itself back and stab the protagonist.

Well, I can quite understand.

So in the middle of this novel, after my brain twitched to increase the sense of existence of the system, I decisively reduced the sense of existence of the system and turned the system into a tool.

This... I don't know if it can be regarded as a remedy after a dead sheep. This is also the only mistake that was gradually made up for in the later stage among so many mistakes made in this novel.

As I write this, my mind is getting more and more confused.

My mind is now in a mess, and I can only reflect on these roughly six points.

But I can also be sure that the mistakes I made are definitely more than these six points.

There is no way, I have spent a lot of energy writing here, my mind is getting more and more chaotic, and I am really powerless to think about it.

In fact, to sum up, the reason why I make so many mistakes is that apart from my lack of personal strength, another very important point is that my mind twitches from time to time!

Right?

Everyone, please see that there are so many mistakes above, how many of them are made by my brain.

I estimate that this is a mistake that many creators, not just novel authors, may make, and mine is especially serious.

With a heat and a twitch in my mind, I had a new idea.

At that time, I thought to myself that this new idea was a particularly good inspiration, and adding it to my work would definitely make the work better, and so on.

But after calming down and taking a look, what a shitty idea! ?

Or after being woken up by readers' bad reviews, looking back, what a mess! ?How could I have such an idea?Could it be that I was stupid?
Yes, I was really stupid!
This is often the case.

So, how do I stop my mind from occasionally twitching, or how to calm down in time when I think inspiration bursts out, this is a problem.

Anyway... that's about it.

In any case, the novel has sunk to such a degree that it cannot be salvaged.

Under such a bad situation, I insisted on finishing this novel, and I wrote more than 100 million words!Wasted a lot of my time and life!
This chapter, then, is the concluding reflection.

The next chapter is the closing remarks.

At the end, at the end, I don’t know how many readers can see this novel, or how many readers can see the end of this novel?
Can there be hundreds?

I don't know, I'm sorry, I'm in a bad mood.

Sorry readers, maybe my bad mood has affected yours too.

It's still the same sentence, just scold me casually, as long as you don't greet my family.