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As Lu Haoge continued to read the script.

Lu Haoge discovered that this script seemed to be more professional than he imagined.

This content is also more powerful than what Lu Haoge imagined.

Lu Haoge discovered that Fengzhu's writing style is really not simple.

In this script, there should be refreshing points, sweetness, abusive points, and reversals, which can be said to be a lot of them.

Looking at the whole script, the fluency is quite high.

After carefully reading this script once.

Lu Haoge admired Fengzhu a little.

With such a high force value, forget it.

This writing is so strong.

This is really enviable.

Even though Lu Haoge is to a certain extent, this is the kind of person he is.

But well.

This should be envied, or envied.

Of course.

This script, this is not all advantages.

The shortcomings of this script are also quite obvious.

"This script, this level is quite good, but well, if you want me to rate this script."

"The score for this script is only 6.48 at most."

"6.48 points? That's pretty good!"

Mu Yunyi said with a smile.

after all
Before that, Lu Haoge only gave director Zhang Yimou's new work a score of 7.25.

This can give Fengzhu's script a score of 6.48. In Mu Yunyi's opinion, this is already quite good!

As a script written by Fengzhu.

able to achieve this result.

As the boss of Fengzhu.

Mu Yunyi was quite happy.

"Little Yun'er, don't be too happy."

Looking at Mu Yunyi's expression, Lu Haoge attacked without hesitation.

"what?"

"This is 6.48 points! I shouldn't be happy!"

Mu Yunyi said.

"Why don't you guess, is this a hundred-point system or a ten-point system?"

Lu Haoge asked with a smile.

After Lu Haoge's words, Mu Yunyi's eyebrows narrowed immediately.

"Xiao Haoge, are you kidding me?"

"If this is a percentage system"

"I reckon that Feng Zhu, who knows the news, is definitely going to assassinate you on the spot!"

Mu Yunyi said seriously.

Fengzhu is a former special soldier.

Fengzhu, this must have the ability to assassinate a person.

After hearing Mu Yunyi's words, Lu Haoge immediately smiled and said, "No no no, this is of course a joke!"

"It must have been ten minutes."

"However, it is also possible that what I will say next will cause Feng Zhu to assassinate me."

Lu Haoge smiled and said.

"whats the matter?"

Mu Yunyi asked.

"This script written by Feng Zhu is a mistake that many new screenwriters will make."

"For example, in this script, there are some things that are difficult to achieve."

"This point, this may also have something to do with the reason why Feng Zhu is an author of online novels."

Lu Haoge said seriously.

Speaking of which, Lu Haoge is quite familiar with screenwriting-related abilities.

After all, Lu Haoge has already read many scripts.

Plus this high-intensity, high-frequency reading.

Lu Haoge's screenwriting ability.

Now for a while, this has been upgraded to the expert level.

So, Lu Haoge can effectively realize the overall structure of the script and the plot of the script.

On this point, Lu Haoge can still give Fengzhu's opinion.

"Then besides this question, what else is there?"

Mu Yunyi asked.

"Have."

Lu Haoge nodded and said.

then
Lu Haoge told Mu Yunyi a few points that need special attention and modification.

Just when Lu Haoge wanted to analyze Mu Yunyi in detail.
Mu Yunyi immediately interrupted Lu Haoge, and said, "Well, Xiao Haoge, do you mind if I let Fengzhu come over to listen to your explanation?"

After Lu Haoge heard Mu Yunyi's words, Lu Haoge nodded and said, "Of course it's possible."

Under the influence of Lu Haoge's words.

Mu Yunyi immediately called Feng Zhu over.

speak up.

Right now, Lu Haoge and Mu Yunyi are in their own home.

But well.
Fengzhu, this is the distance from Lu Haoge and Mu Yunyi.

It's really not far away.

Even the way Mu Yunyi called Feng Zhu to come over was not by sending a message on his mobile phone to get Feng Zhu to come over.

Mu Yunyi called Feng Zhu over directly.

"Xiao Fengzhu! Come here!"

Mu Yunyi's voice was slightly twice as loud as usual, and shouted.

Under Mu Yunyi's 'order'.

It took less than six seconds for Feng Zhu to appear directly beside Mu Yunyi.

"President Xiao Yun, what's the matter?"

Feng Zhu came to this side with a face full of energy and said.

"We read your script."

Mu Yunyi said with a mysterious face.

Under the influence of Mu Yunyi's mysterious expression.

Fengzhu's expression became a little nervous at this moment.

Seeing Fengzhu's nervous expression, the corners of Mu Yunyi's mouth immediately rose.

But well.

The corner of Mu Yunyi's mouth turned upwards.

At this moment, Mu Yunyi still didn't directly say what it was like.

After all, Mu Yunyi wanted to leave Fengzhu with a sense of expectation.

"Then Mr. Xiaoyun, Mr. Lu, what do you think of my script?"

Feng Zhu hesitated for half a second and said.

"What do you think?"

Mu Yunyi was here for a while, so he didn't answer Fengzhu's question immediately.

"I think it might be a bit bad."

Feng Zhu said.

Feng Zhu himself knew that this was his first time writing a script.

Although, before that, Feng Zhu had the experience of writing novels.

But well.
Writing a script is completely different from writing a novel.

Therefore, Feng Zhu knew that there must be many problems in the script he wrote.

In addition, Lu Haoge has such a high pursuit of the script.

Feng Zhu judged by the expressions of Lu Haoge and Mu Yunyi.

Fengzhu feels now
For the script I wrote, this may not be very good.

Even, Feng Zhu thought he came here.

This is what is scolded.

after all
Writing this script, Feng Zhu, is not completely useless.

In order for Fengzhu to learn to write scripts, Mu Yunyi directly arranged a crash course in screenwriting for Fengzhu.

so
Now Fengzhu thinks that he came here by himself.

This is what is scolded.

Lu Haoge looked at the expressions of Feng Zhu and Mu Yunyi.

The corner of Lu Haoge's mouth also rose slightly this moment.

At this moment, Lu Haoge knew what trick Mu Yunyi was playing.

Mu Yunyi just wanted to be skinny.

Go 'teasing' about Fengzhu's mentality.

But well.
Lu Haoge felt that Mu Yunyi had forgotten one thing for a while.

That is, Lu Haoge hasn't decided yet.

What is this script and my own opinion?

But well.
This point, in fact, has been unspoken.

thinking.

The expression on Lu Haoge's face changed a little accordingly.

Lu Haoge said earnestly: "Fengzhu, your script has many problems."