Zefa of the Pirate

Chapter 41
In the middle of the night, open a can of soda, listen to music, and I'll just chat casually.

Two volumes have been completed, with more than 40 chapters.

For those who can see this, it is estimated that my story has attracted you a little bit, so I will find some time to chat with you.

In fact, the earliest chapters of this book were written more than a year ago. Those who are more familiar with me, Xingyao or Qiucheng, may know this. They know that I have been writing procrastinatingly and intermittently for more than a year.

When I first wrote this book, I didn't intend to upload it, I just planned to treat it as a memory of mine and try to cherish it.

Since college, I have tried a lot, such as traveling all over China and eating snacks, trying to be the chairman of the student union, being an instructor, doing a public service, learning photography, dubbing, learning Tea ceremony, such as learning to be a barista, or writing a novel of your own.

Then why upload it.

Well, maybe it’s because I’m in a bad state recently, and I’m confused after the next year, especially when I have a lot of questions about my career. I’ll take a six-hour break to find out. One day, I accidentally saw a story that I’ve written intermittently for more than a year, with more than 30 words Throw it in Word, so, with a slap on the head, upload it brazenly
So I was already ready to hit the streets, and I just wanted to post it to adjust my mood and divert my attention, so I didn’t tell others, and I didn’t care about how bad my grades were, so I just posted the saved manuscript and changed the story. The time has come to stop short.

It feels good to be recognized by others, so I paid more attention to it, and carefully considered the plot, but my ability is still limited. I will take my time in the future, and there is no rush.

As for the book itself.

It is undeniable that besides feelings, choosing to write a fan is more because I don’t trust my ability to structure the world, so I hope to relax.

However, doujin is also a secondary creation, and it must have its own content, not to mention the leapfrog form of expression from animation to text, which is bound to have a huge impact on the expression of the story.

Like a film and television drama adapted from a novel.

Novel needs logic. A novel with no sense of logic, I am afraid that the probability of more than [-]% will be sprayed out by Tian Migong, but if the logic is overemphasized, it will still be the pirate in my heart that I have been chasing for more than ten years. ?

Garp was chopped down with an axe by Colonel Monka, the axe, and the sky was full of blood. I don't think I can write it.

But if it's too realistic, then why am I writing this novel?
To catch the heat?
For a simpler worldview structure?
Then why don't I write Naruto? !
In my opinion, the world of pirates is somewhat two-dimensional and somewhat inexplicable.

Although I couldn't read the book of Fire Dragon for some reasons, the beginning of this book really made me feel like I saw the side story drawn by Oda.

I think I can't do it.

I have been in the Internet circle for many years, and when I read novels, my first reaction is to ask why, so my story should be more realistic on the basis of Two-dimensional.

So I thought, how to balance Two-dimensional and reality?
After thinking about it for a long time, I decided to choose "emotion" and "growth" as the balance beam on the other side of the scale.

Pirates are passionate, strong emotions are the main attraction of pirates, so I start with emotions, family, friendship, and love.
In addition to this, the more important element is growth.

When Mosa came to this world, his three views were affected or even recast, so he was also growing and gradually adapting to this world.

In my plan, each volume corresponds to Mosa's state of mind in different periods, and he will grow a little after each volume.

This is the label of this book, gradual growth, strong emotions, and two-dimensional convulsions.

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To be honest, I haven’t written much recently. In 27 days since I published the book, I have only written less than [-] words, of which tens of thousands of words are still revised plots. As a result, there are fewer and fewer manuscripts. I have to reflect on this.
In fact, I’m very grateful for everyone’s support, for example, help me break the book review section *um*, and help me break the fan list. The Naruto who is not a pirate is not a good hunter, the nine-headed evil god, and the goddamn angel. , Red-eyed dragon children's shoes. (Not typing one by one, typing is so tiring, yingying) Of course, there are our Qiucheng and Xingyao children's shoes~
I would also like to thank Setsuna~Thousand Reincarnation and this Bu Kexue two little friends, amidst all the reminders, someone finally gave me an opinion!

Newcomers, in fact, I have avoided the minefield as much as possible, but there are still things that I can't take care of, so I need everyone to give me opinions~
Of course, it's not an excuse to shirk my own problems with the excuse of being a newcomer, and there is indeed a lot of lack in writing skills.

It may not be possible to explain one by one in the future, but now there are fewer people and fewer problems, let’s explain a wave~
Chapter 37, Setsuna Children's Shoes said: The plot layout of this episode is too weird, the heroine appears abruptly, the description after the protagonist wakes up is too two-dimensional, and the plot is too abrupt, what is the relationship between the protagonist and the heroine? Desperately help the heroine . .

The same as Chapter 37, this is not Ke Xue's children's shoes said: Just pay attention to the villain's IQ and rationality. I'm talking about the rationality of people's reactions.

Chapter 41, Setsuna Children's Shoes said: The beginning is actually very good, the main reason is that the desert section is inexplicable, the inexplicable heroine has a plot, your language can pretend to be tender, but the psychology is not like a person who has lived two lives, Adding up the back and forth together, he would be almost 30 years old, but he turned out to be childish like a teenager in middle school. .Still not strong enough
first question
To tell the truth, Bendong was also very embarrassed. It was not written in this way in the original manuscript, but after publishing the book, Bendong felt that it was a bit anticlimactic for Mosa to get over the difficulties so easily, so he arranged a big wave of surprises for him. encounter.

There is a sense of a rampage, a brief foray into the outside world.

I went back and took a look, um, it does look a little abrupt. . .

Besides, at the end of the first volume, Ben Dong deliberately explained the heroine's information, just to avoid people thinking that Krista is the heroine.
In Qidian’s novels, the heroine is simply a high-voltage wire all over the minefield
The core of the second volume is actually when Mosa killed for the first time, the ability to control other people's life and death made him lost. After the wanton killing, he couldn't bear the impact. The inner process was strengthened under the influence of Star.

This is after he left the embrace and protection of Zefa and Luna, and the concentration camp of the powerful Marin Fanduo, who is as strong as a cloud, and entered Novice Village for the first time, this sudden and unexpected mentality imbalance after he broke free from the shackles and protection and adjustment process.

In the previous life, Mosa was running around to live, and there were no topics related to life except for accidents and diseases.

In this world, life is fragile and cheap.

Possessing the right and ability to deprive others of their lives, this is the first time Mosa has set foot in the field in the past and present.

Of course, the problem of insufficient writing skills is very pertinent. It is also because of this reason that my writing in this volume has not achieved the expected effect. I am also improving a little bit in this regard. Can see more, think more, practice more.

The second question.

Bendong is a little confused about the rationality of people's reactions, mainly because when Bendong conceived, he would refer to the characters and encounters that Bendong set for the characters to set up the reactions. From Bendong's point of view, it is reasonable, but carefully After thinking about it, Bendong remembered that Bendong’s performance and description in the article may not allow everyone to understand what Bendong thinks.

The third question?
This Bendong has to clarify, in the setting, Mosa’s character is indeed like this
Simply put, it is to pretend to be cute.
The following is my personal opinion.

In my opinion, human growth is never a pure accumulation of time.

People often say that when you reach that age, you will find that you suddenly understand things that you used to see in the fog.

Conversely, it can also be said that if you are not at that age, you will be half-understood after all.

In fact, everyone has read online articles for so many years, especially the soul wear in rebirth articles and time travel articles, and some questions often arise:
More than 20 years before the time travel, 20 years after the time travel, how can a person who is almost 40 years old still act like a 20-year-old person?

Personally, I don’t think it’s like this, let’s take a chestnut.

If you travel three times, the first time you travel to 20 years old, the first time you live to 20 years old, and the second time you live to 20 years old, what is your mental age at the time of the third time travel?

I don't think 20+20+20=60 years old at least.

Or even the opposite, I think maybe around 30.

Of course, this, like a rigid body, is a purely ideal product.

But in terms of conversion, Mo Sa had just left school for two years in his previous life, around 24 years old, and 4 years old in this life.

I don't think Mosa will have the mental age he did when he was 30.

On the contrary, I think his mental age should have become younger under the impact of his young life environment and the impact of a completely different world outlook, outlook on life and values.

The term "juvenile" is quite correct. In my imagination, Mosa should be at the psychological age of a teenager between sixteen and eighteen.

He is far from mature enough for this weird world.

After writing so much, I really appreciate everyone’s support, and I am also very grateful for the questions you raised. I am not afraid of finding problems. Only when I find problems can I hope to correct them.

thank you all.

(Actually, I still want to write, but I am going to sleep, I am too sleepy)

　One more sentence at the end, a man will be a second grader until his death, and a man will be a teenager until his death!

　　
　　God knows how Ben Dong wrote his testimonials until midnight on a six-day workweek.
　　I feel like I'm going to die tomorrow.
　　So miserable, so miserable. . .

　　
　
(End of this chapter)