Transform into a three-no heroine

Chapter 236 Modifying the Script
At 05:30, Sun Jing performed all the scenes in the script.

After spending an hour and a half, Sun Jing finally went through all the clips.

At this moment, Sun Jing felt that she was about to collapse from exhaustion. She sat aside and drank water regardless of the image.

The notepad in Mr. Huang's hand was already filled with two pages. Regarding Sun Jing's performance, he raised many problems.

Of course, this is also related to Sun Jing's lack of special training. Most of the problems are minor problems that can be solved quickly.Teacher Huang believes that under his guidance, although it is impossible for Sun Jing to reach the level of a professional actor within a month, it is still more than enough to perform well in this stage play.

After Mr. Huang shared his thoughts with Sun Jing, Sun Jing, who had realized his shortcomings, readily accepted the other party's proposal.

Putting the matter of performance aside for now, Teacher Huang moved the stool, faced Jiang Huo, and pointed out a fatal problem.

"At first, I thought there was no problem with the script, but after watching your performance, I felt that this script has a fatal problem. If it is not resolved, it will have a huge impact on the entire show."

Teacher Huang spoke seriously, and the four people present also looked serious.

"The storyline of the script has a fatal problem." Mr. Huang's eyes swept over the four people, and finally fell on Jiang Huo. The form is clear, this is impossible at all, you understand this matter in your heart, so you listed the important scenes in the whole book to form the entire stage play..." When Teacher Huang said this, he paused, deeply After taking a breath, he continued: "But! You only picked out the roles of the three protagonists, and many characters who promote the plot did not appear...Jiang Huo, don't you think that the whole stage play is Performed according to the way in the script, is there something missing?"

Although Jiang Huo clearly marked in the script that all the plot transitions are shown by narration and VCR, Teacher Huang still feels that this method is a little inappropriate.There are only four actors in the whole stage play. Of course, strictly speaking, Zhao Xuan cannot be regarded as an actor!It is simply too difficult to support the entire stage play with only three leading actors!

"What do you mean, Mr. Huang?" Jiang Huo took a deep breath and asked in a low voice without emotion.

"My suggestion is to add group performances to make the whole stage play more substantial." Teacher Huang poked the notepad in his hand heavily with the tip of a pen, and said: "With group performances, although the stage performance will increase Time, but for the three of you, the pressure on your body should be reduced a lot, I think you can think about it..."

However, before Teacher Huang could finish his words, Jiang Huo interrupted: "Is there any other way?"

Teacher Huang was not angry. He took a deep look at Jiang Huo, nodded slightly and said, "Of course, there are other ways."

"What is it?" Jiang Huo took out a notebook and a pen from his backpack before Teacher Huang could answer. "Ms. Huang, I also have a new idea now. The two of us write down our ideas at the same time and compare them with each other. How about it?"

"Jiang Huo." Hearing Jiang Huo's words, Qian Lei immediately glared at her.

Teacher Huang was invited by Qian Lei to help, even if Jiang Huo had an opinion, he could just go back to the dormitory and talk it out slowly, there was no need to point it out on the spot.If there is a stalemate, both sides will not come to Taiwan.

"It's okay, I like this way of exchanging ideas."

Teacher Huang waved his hands with a smile, and didn't care at all.

Actors, singers, teachers, screenwriters, directors, writers... These are all the identities of Mr. Huang.In terms of creation, Mr. Huang always has his own ideas. It is precisely because he has written scripts and directed filming that he can better understand Jiang Huo's mood at this moment.As the most popular novelist today, Jiang Huo has her own persistence.If the two exchanged identities, Mr. Huang believed that if someone pointed out the problem of the work in front of him, his reaction would definitely be more intense than Jiang Huo.

"I'm starting to write." After Mr. Huang agreed, Jiang Huo picked up the pen and started writing quickly in the notebook.

Hearing Jiang Huo's words, Teacher Huang didn't hesitate, and quickly wrote down his thoughts in the draft book.

When the two finished writing and showed each other, their expressions were very calm.

Jiang Huo and Mr. Huang had almost the same thoughts.

"You..." Zhao Xuan didn't know what to say after seeing the idea of ​​the two.

After Jiang Huo and Teacher Huang saw the words written by each other, they both laughed at the same time.

"It seems that I'm still wasting my talent. Why should I be a teacher! I'll just sit at home and write novels. Maybe I should be the most popular author in the world." Teacher Huang was speaking. At that time, the tone was very relaxed.

Jiang Huo also breathed a sigh of relief, and she was also worried that she and the other party would have serious disagreements on this issue.

"Since the two of us think the same, then this matter will be easy to handle." After Jiang Huo added a name to the script's personnel list, he turned to look at Zhao Xuan and said, "Zhao Xuan, you Would you like to play the role of Tian Linger in a stage play?"

That's right, since Jiang Huo didn't want to add too many extras to promote the development of the plot, but in order not to stagnate the plot, she took out another supporting actress in the book, and wanted to let Zhao Xuan participated in the show!
If Baguio played by Qian Lei and Lu Xueqi played by Sun Jing are the key points in the book, then the senior sister of Dazhufeng is the original beauty!This is the protagonist's first love when he was young!
Instead of letting many characters get mixed in, it is better to directly highlight the theme of this book!
This is the unanimous thought of Jiang Huo and Mr. Huang!
"Can I?" Zhao Xuan was a little surprised.From the moment she saw the script, Zhao Xuan actually had her own thoughts in her heart.She wants to play a role in the show too!However, Zhao Xuan didn't know how to ask Jiang Huo for the role.

Now facing Jiang Huo's proposal, Zhao Xuan, who was about to realize his idea, suddenly hesitated again.

"Of course no problem, I think you are the most suitable person now."

Jiang Huo directly patted the script and made a final decision: "Well, that's it for today, I'll go back and rewrite the script, add Tian Linger's character, and then see if I need to delete something .”

Teacher Huang nodded with a smile, and said, "I took the sheet music back. It's as long as a week or as short as three days. Leave the dancing to me."

(End of this chapter)