Konoha Strengthening Master

Chapter 120 Please leave it to me

"Look back?"

Shi Yu frowned slightly, it could be seen that she was slightly displeased.

It's not that she looks down on Yiren, but that novels, if they can't attract other people's demands at the beginning, even if they are amazing in the later stage, they are likely to be lost to everyone.

Especially when the author in front of me is still a child.

Compared with adults, children's minds are more pure, and it is more difficult than adults to have certain turning points in the text.

Even though he thinks that Yi Ren is already very talented in writing, talent belongs to talent. From the perspective of writing alone, experience is as important as talent, and this is exactly what Yi Ren lacks for the time being.

Thinking of this, Shi Yu put down Yi Ren's manuscript, and persuaded Yi Ren: "Little Yi Ren, I understand your thoughts, but you can't force writing, you are already very talented, and you just need to take one step at a time. I believe that the next book will be much better than the current one."

Eh? !

After hearing Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's advice, Yi Ren stared anxiously.

So, elder sister, don’t believe me when I’m young!The real climax will only be revealed in the middle of the climax. If you stop watching it so early, even if I am Li Bai, I will not be able to stand out!

Seeing that the other party didn't look at the follow-up plan, Yi Ren couldn't help being anxious like an ant on a hot pot.

It's fine if he doesn't meet the opportunity, at this time, he may have submitted the manuscript to a small editor or a trainee editor, but since he has already met Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, then he has no reason to vote secretly!
He wants to maximize the benefits he can get, so that it is possible to get 5000 million negative emotion points within a year.

Thinking of this, Yi Ren turned over from the sofa and ran to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's side, pouted her small mouth, shook Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's arm and begged: "Sister Shiyu, look behind Believe in Yiren, Yiren's novel will definitely give you a different surprise, sister Shiyu."

"But sister, I have other things to do later..."

Seeing that Yi Ren wanted her to take another look at what she said, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked embarrassed.

Ding: The resentment from Shiyu from Xiazhiqiu: +6+6+6...

"Chapter three, if Sister Shiyu doesn't have the desire to read more after reading the next three chapters, Yi Ren will never force Sister Shiyu again!" Yi Ren gestured with three fingers, looking expectant.

After all, she is still a girl at heart. After Yiren pleaded in every possible way, she finally softened her heart: "Okay... well, since you have said that, little Yiren, sister, I will read three more chapters, but let's talk about it first. If After three chapters, I haven't been attracted by this novel, Xiao Yiren, you can stop making trouble like this!"

"Um"

Sighing, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu picked up Yiren's manuscript again, carefully reading the contents.

time goes by little by little

1 minutes
10 minutes

Half an hour passed, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was still meticulously reading the contents of Yi Ren's book.

And judging from the surprise expressed on the other party's face from time to time, the other party has gradually penetrated into it.

Just like that, another hour passed. Normally, the three chapters should have been read long ago, but Kasumigaoka Shiyu has not put down the manuscript, and even the water glass on the coffee table has not been picked up for a long time. When I got up, it seemed that the whole person was dazed, deeply attracted by the emotions revealed in the words.

Yi Ren also didn't make a sound, he was waiting, waiting for the other party's feelings after reading this work thoroughly.

He believes that his work will definitely win the other party's favor.After all, this is the script "Magic Girl Madoka Magica" written by "Warrior of Love" Urobuchi Gen, who was famous in his previous life, and the brand new novel "Ninja Girl Xiaofang" presented after his many magic changes.

However, although it is a magic reform, it is just a change of the original characters and nouns, like Madoka is replaced by Xiaofang, ninja is replaced by magic girl, contract is replaced by spiritism, of course, like Nouns such as the ring of Yuanli are still the ring of Yuanli, and have not become the ring of Fangli.

After all, in essence, he is still a copyist, and in some places, the original work must be respected.

Well, let’s popularize the general plot of "Ninja Girl Xiaofang" here (the number of words is too small, by the way, I strongly recommend Madoka’s work)
Kame Fang, who is studying in an ordinary school, originally lived an ordinary and happy life.

However, due to the appearance of a mysterious transfer student..., Xiaofang's fate began to change dramatically.One day, a penguin named Q coin hopes that Xiaofang can sign a psychic contract with it and become a "ninja girl" to fight against the evil assassin star and krypton gold (fog) to protect Konoha.Just when Xiaofang was hesitating and didn't know what to do, her good friend became a "ninja girl" one step ahead of her.

Later, Xiaofang and her friend who became a ninja girl discovered that after signing the psychic contract, the price they had to pay was far more cruel than they had imagined.

Facing between hope and despair, Xiaofang chose...

(Kill me not to be a spoiler dog!)
……

Ding: The resentment from Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu deepens: +10+10+10...

Yi Ren, who was sitting obediently, suddenly heard a system notification sound coming from his ear.

Ah?I obviously didn't do anything, why did you miss me?
Curious, Yi Ren looked at Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, only to find that this strong-looking girl suddenly burst into tears.

The manuscript in her hand was held tightly by her, and with the appearance of wrinkles, Yi Ren felt extremely distressed.

Sister, pinch it lightly, it is the result of my hard work for more than a month, if it is scratched by you, I really have no place to cry.

Perhaps hearing Yi Ren's voice, Shi Yu's tight hands gradually relaxed.

More than half an hour later, when Yi Ren on the sofa felt drowsy, a loud noise suddenly woke him up again.

"Boom!!!" Shi Yu slammed the manuscript on the table, then raised his head, and after facing Yi Ren's dull gaze, he said excitedly: "Little Yi Ren, tell Sister Shi Yu that this Is it really you who wrote the manuscript? Did no one else help or learn from it?"

"No!!! This manuscript is definitely Xiao Yiren's original creation, and in this world, only Sister Shiyu and I know the content of it, even if I am Mama, I didn't tell her."

After Yiren finished speaking without shame, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu calmed down her excitement and sadness, and said seriously: "Little Yiren, I accept this manuscript, no, it should be said, please leave it to me to take care of it."

　Amway again: Madoka's drama is really good.

　　As usual, there will be a third update around ten o'clock, so stay tuned!
　　
　
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