Chapter 49 Aftermath

After the first volume is finished, there are still many shortcomings, including the structure of the world and the arrangement of the story, which have made this novel a bit half-dead.

If it is an original novel, I will be very happy with this result.But as a fan, the results of this book can only be said to be average.Of course, it is more of my own problem, which means that I will continue to work hard.

Having said so much, it is not that this book will cut anything.How could it be cut?
First of all, although the results of this book are not too outstanding compared with other books, it is already a big improvement for me, so this book is very important to me, just like my own son.How can my son cut it as he says, I still want to watch it grow up.

Second, the book has a long, long way to go.The protagonist has just failed, and he still has to work hard to succeed and create his own future.

Although it cannot be stated clearly, the plan for this book is relatively long.

More importantly, with everyone's support, it is also my responsibility to write this book well.

Special thanks to Masked Angel 555 for their long-term rewards and support. I have always been ashamed and felt that what I did was not good enough. The most important thing is that the speed has not been improved yet.Therefore, I can only work hard in the days to come, hoping to be worthy of your reward and support.

Thanks to jerwell for silent support, thanks to Guoyan Yunyan 20 for the suggestion, thanks to Xiaotian, Yantian for their rewards, and there are many more, such as the passing diving soy sauce, Shenwuwen, hehe 2b, Longtong 4, f6c21... and others Readers who support me, including readers from Starting Point, Genesis and other places, let me know that there are still people who follow this book.

In fact, there is no other meaning in writing this postscript. I just feel that the first volume is over. Writing this thing is a farewell to the first volume, right?In addition, I also hope that the brand new volume will have a brand new start, and give myself encouragement.

With the support of so many people, I will definitely write this book well, so don’t worry about it.

As for the follow-up of the fried chicken nuggets, if it is carefully written, it will take another five or six thousand words, but it will not help the promotion of the plot.So I will give some explanations in the next volume, so I won’t waste everyone’s time (a lot of words are missing).

Regarding the ending of the first volume, um, I think it is a good thing that the protagonist suffers some setbacks. After all, the protagonist must have the determination to become stronger, so the following stories will be interesting.This result is more in line with the original work, because Mozu House has won three consecutive championships in the chicken nugget competition.The manga doesn't mention what the chicken nugget contest looks like, it's all based on imagination, if the manga and anime come out with the chicken nugget contest scene, well... we are fanboys after all, so the original works shall prevail.Say something else.At present, the protagonist is indeed not the opponent of Ezuya Ruishan, and I think it is understandable to lose.

There may be people who spit out the things that the protagonist will cry, and feel that it is not manly enough.What I want to say is that I just want to express the unwillingness of the protagonist.He clearly had a chance to defeat Ruishan, but he didn't grasp it.This kind of regret and not wanting to lose, or a strong character, is the driving force for the protagonist to move forward.Moreover, Mitsui Shou didn't cry and shouted: "Coach, I want to play basketball"?So, this shouldn't be considered poisonous, right? (If everyone finds it difficult to accept, you can say it out, the minority obeys the majority, if too many people feel uncomfortable, I will delete some words.)
Readers who feel that the protagonist's level is too low, please don't worry, the protagonist has just entered Totsuki Academy, even if Xinghei comes in person, it will take a process.Moreover, I think the protagonist can compete with the future ten heroes from a transfer student with only [-] words. This speed is actually quite fast.

The protagonists of many Japanese comics have also been struggling, but they are all growing.For example, in "Dragon Ball", the opponents at the beginning are Leping, Kamexianren, and Tianjin Fan, and later the opponents are Piccolo, Vegeta, Felisa, Cell, and Majin Buu.Although Sun Wukong still has to go through a hard fight to defeat the opponent, the opponent has also changed.

If the protagonist upgrades too quickly, one consequence may be that it will easily collapse in the later stage.If this was just a novel of several hundred thousand words, I could of course make the protagonist invincible, but this book should be of a certain length.

The following stories will unfold one after another, more and more characters from the original book will appear, and the world will become bigger and bigger.I believe that the follow-up story will become more and more beautiful.

By the way, explain a few problems that arise in the text.

The first one is about Chapel's translation.This should be a transliterated name. The several translations I have seen are not unified. For example, Tencent comics are Chapel, and some encyclopedias are Chapelle or Sheppel. They are different and should not affect reading.

Secondly, regarding the question of whether the junior high school students live in the Jixing dormitory, I actually had doubts at the beginning, but it is not difficult to see some clues from the text.In the 6th chapter, it is the page of Xinghei and Tiansuohui's "Frank Meeting", Tiansuohui has this narration (Tencent version): "I started in junior high school, and the only place I can relax is the bathroom of this dormitory... Although Mrs. Wenxu is a bit scary..." It is not difficult to see that Tian Suohui lived in Jixingliao when he was in junior high school.Moreover, it took 3 months for Tian Suohui to pass Fumio Omido's exam, and the start of the higher school was pushed forward by 3 months, and Tian Suohui was still in the junior high school.

In addition, Xingping is not the only person in Jixing Liao. When Yisehui held Xingping's welcome party, Yisehui said that some people did not come.This part should be regarded as the hidden snow area.

Last but not least, I am looking at everyone's suggestions.Well, if the changes are small, I will try to change them, such as unreasonable places, and I am trying to modify them; if the changes are large, uh... After all, I still need to update normally...

That's all for the first time, thank you for your support, thank you.Then, see you tomorrow volume [-]!
(End of this chapter)

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